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Daubs vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Recycling No Biting Crew votes are allowed, we in the same crew. No hate, good luck fam. :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-30-05 at 12:37 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:14 PM.
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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:19 PM.
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Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! 1 should get it.. 2 jump the gun = is a cheat 3 llocation says "round herrrre" if you dont get the punches and wordplay, Pm me or dont vote !!!!! yea was quick, good luck :thumbup: |
''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! **=In My Mugshots Thread, We Wuz Talkin Bout My Cellphone An He Said He Had Hiz Phone Stolen lol Sorry Bout Da Carry On Line Daubs, Count It Az 1 bar |
hahahaha... good shit, and yeah i have that structure sometimes too....
good luck...upppppppp.... |
Haha U Had Dope Shit 2 Dawg, Shuld Be A Real Close Battle, Proppz Goez Out 2 U & Now U Know Y I Say U Shuld Be Co-Leader, I Murderd Casper Literally Wid Rhymez, U Are Mo Ov'a Challenge Datz 4sho Dawgy, Good Luck In Diz!
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good luck. |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
V/Khaoz theory...this was a good battle....khaoz came wit some hot punchs that were creative an had some personals structure was good....daubs....ur verse was ight u had ight structure but ur punchs weren't hitting hard to me i felt that u came to lightly in this one.....No hate.....RETURN THE FAOVR(or i will get this vote removed)..http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189169 ^^^^^......... Opener=K Closer=K Structure=K Punchs=k multi's=Tie none really personals=K Wordplay=k vocab=tie Overall=Khaoz Theory |
Voted For: Daubs
daubs got this one, he was way more consistent with his disses, well only 3 bars, but he stayed consistent, and thats what you gotta do with a short battle like this, khaoz, your second bar was totally weak and shitless.......because who really cares if his phone was stolen, its a weak meta man.....hurt ya verse alot...and your closer was stretched and worded horribly.....but you got decent concepts, keep up fo-sho..daubs stayed pretty strong throught, nothing too special here.....i kinda chuckles at daubs' closer though, word......so daubs got this easily.....good show both v/daubs |
ok thanks man.. uppin.............................
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Voted For: Daubs
daubs came stronger here good punches hit on point good flow and your structure was perfect on this diff but dope wordplay was good and opener and closer went well kaos-first off u hated which is stated there is none of in tha rules....other than that flow was good came strong at tha end but weak at tha start structure was ok and wordplay was good just felt daubs punches landed better on ev ery bar |
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Voted For: Daubs
daubs: Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! ^^^DECENT OPENER...ITS NOT PLAYED BUT IJUST THINK HEAD BARS R OLD NOW.. This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! ^^^UHH OKAY PUNCH Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! ^^^FIRST & HERR...DONT RYHME I KNOW U PROBLY SPEAK WITH A ACCENT BUT DIS DONT RYHME 4REAL khaoz: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' ^^^VERY WEAK OPENER Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** ^^EVEN THO IT WAS A PERSONAL...I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE DIS Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! ^^^BEST LINE IN YA VERSE.. V/DAUBS...EVEN THO HE AINT HAVE NO PERSONALS I THINK HE HAD MORE CREATIVITY....WHICH KHAOZ REALLY DIDN'T HAVE NUN OF YA BARS STOOD OUT RETURN DA FAVOR.... |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! okaiz idea but aint relly hit to hard This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! that was a littl bettr Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! it aint rhime nd it wasnt very gud anyway joo could of used your ideas alot bettr than you did nd ur flow was owf because u seperated bars but gud playing off ur ideas with words ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' i likd it gud flow nd personal dizz Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** it were ok Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! d best bar in d battl daubs was mor creativity in his rhymes but khaoz structured nd dropped a few personals nd fe punchlines so his verse gets d vote |
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Voted For: Daubs
ight close battle.... daubs i thought you had some good lines and some bad lines... you need to upyour vocab becuz the punches u r using now arnt rlly that hard hitting... i think u just edged this battle though, here is some of your lines i liked: Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! ^^ good wordplay and decent punch not really played here is a line i didn't like: Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! ^^ not really feelin it weak punch there overall u had a strong enough verse to take the win, like i said think of better concepts for your punches and you'll be on your way! khaoz: damn man u have elevated alot since u came to this site man good job on that... all you need to do is match up your structure and you'll be alot better even with your punches the way they are now... here is 1 line i liked: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' ^^ this was a dope line man really feelin it here is a line i didn't like: Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! ^^ played out man if u had one punch like the first one you wouldav got this but u threw it away man try to stay consistant throughout your battles man have them ard hitting punches from beginning to the end, then you will get it v/ daubs for edging the punches, he had harder hitting punches and stayed consistant through this battle... good job stay up this was a real close battle pz |
Voted For: Daubs
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! //nice intro, funnny and a goood swipe This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! //like the delivery, smooth flow, nice Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! //quite weak in relation to the rest depends how u flow it but it reads a lil messy 2 me, not the best finisher i've heard from you though daubs. no hate and kaos: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' //another nice intro, good shit kaos Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** //personal, good 7/10, but ive heard you hit harder Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! //another so-so finisher. but again no hate max luv 2 both my boyz i can appreciate that this was a quick battle between friends and both your flows were more casual than your usuals, i personally think anyways. but i have to give the win to daubs for better structure, and better puns kaos you battled well and there wasn't much in it, if you tidy up your structure a bit you can be a big force in this RV game, both of y'all keep uppin, thug luv 2 all arch out |
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