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BlOoDsHoTT vs the_DukE
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef... Battles are strictly words Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-31-05 at 12:41 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
the_DukE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 12:12 PM.
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BlOoDsHoTT has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 12:15 PM.
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this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free// spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/ when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church// send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/ my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin// straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/ you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim// just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/ the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin// |
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Ayo Duke........ Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game... Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!! Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit... Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay) People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad... Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have... People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin... Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL) I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids... After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!...... |
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT
BlOoDsHoTT: Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game... Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!! ^nice opener Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit... Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay) ^funny nameplay right there People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad... Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have... ^kinda basic but still punch though People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin... Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL) ^hehe coo bar I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids... After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!...... ^haha nice wordplay in ya closer Overall good battle, had some nice punches, some were kinda played but they still hit though. Some personal touches here and there which gave battle extra sumthing. Vocab was coo as well as flow n structure, just a solid drop... the_DukE: this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/ usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free// ^okay opener spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/ when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church// ^kinda self-glorification right here send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/ my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin// ^same as previous bar... straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/ you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim// ^coo lines just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/ the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin// ^best line is ya closer for sure Aight battle, downside of ya verse be the self-glorification though, try to focus more on opponent than on yaself next time you kno (no hate btw). Flow was good though, feeling ya vocab and structure. Last line was dope bar, got some punches in there that worked out well...just try to stay more consistent with em next time aight... |
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT
Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game... Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!! 8/10...good shit, nice opener Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit... Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay) 7/10....decent People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad... Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have... 6/10...eehh People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin... Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL) 7/10....lol, decent I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids... After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!...... 8/10...lol, nice closer too 36/50 decent verse some okay lines some good but nothing was majorly played or anything....good werdplay and punches good closer and opener decent multiews also this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/ usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free// 5/10...whack! spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/ when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church// 4/10...OMG, not good at all, coodve been good thoguh send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/ my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin// 2/10........WTF, how bout a NO straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/ you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim// 5/10...a little decent still pretty gayt hough just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/ the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin// 5/10...eehh 21/50 this versea was terible, sry but thats just my honest oppinion, you need to definitly work on your punches and werdplay and well, just about everything...keep elevating though v/twizted. |
This was feedback posted for BlOoDsHoTT
Yo dis was a decent battle, I cant vote cos Im in Bloods crew bt u came well blood. Liked the punches, kept me laughin......yo ure rhymes were pretty good, but no real punches, but ure last bar was hot...that was a good ender
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT
twist- u had an ill flow and good punchlines everythin good hurr man nice verse like the opener and the closer was kinda weak but still good duke- ur verse didnt have nothin good no nothin man need to work on ur delivery to punchess and see otha batles so u can elewvate aight no offense but the verse was wack v/ twist cuz he had the illest verse and errthin was nice and punches were hittin just work on some of the rhymin aight |
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT
A Breakdown Chaso Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game... Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!! .....Decent.... Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit... Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay) ......Better... People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad... Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have... .......Worster... People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin... Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL) ...LOL Made no sense at All but made me laugh At thinking about that lol I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids... After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!...... ......Poor ryming but what the hell im still laughin off the other bar... The Duke.. this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/ usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free// //....Weak....// spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/ when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church// // Weak// send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/ my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin// // Even Weaker // straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/ you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim// // What does that name have to do with winning this battle???// just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/ the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin// // :nono:// v/ Bloodshoot RTF |
Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT
BloodS You Had Some Creative Lines And Shits Had Good Vocabulary Your Punches Came hard And Throughout The Whole Verse It Was Good Duke Whack Dawg You Had No Punches Man Get A New Style Weerd Enough Said Your Garbage Dawg......One No Hate |
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