Mad Dog vs Premanition
 

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Check in by: 06-03-05 at 08:39 PM

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Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 08:40 PM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 12:29 PM.

*UK Cats piss me off when they spit American*

So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
So why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack thugs",
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",

*Done...now walk like John Wayne Merked*

* = if you hit the link u'll know crazy frog is the most annoying ringtone ever + number 1 in UK charts -_-

1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!


(*) – You have to have listened to his battle (audio) with acuity, at the begin he mimics a comedy program called ‘little britain’, link to battle below
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188266

(**) – hes got a song at the moment called ‘thoughts’

weerd lets get it moving..........................

Voted For: Mad Dog

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Premanition:

1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?
This Isnt Too Hard Hitting..3/10
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts
Worded It Wrong, but I Got The Concept 5/10
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
Two Diffrent Lines and It Didn't Even Hit Hard..3/10
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
Ugh..Weak 3/10
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
Your Best Metaphor and Punch 6/10

Overall: 20/50

Mad Dog:

So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
Not Hard Hitting..3/10
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,
Just Not Feeling This...4/10
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
What Is This? Best Disses of Newborn Rappers??! 3/10
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club"
Decent Punch and Metaphor..7/10
So why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack thugs",
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups"
Ugh...4/10..Nah..Weak.

Overall: 21/50

Winner = Mad Dog...both verses weren't that well put together but I felt Mad Dog had a little bit more creativity and personal effect into his verse. A lot of fillers in this battle.

~R~

uppin............................................. .......

Voted For: Premanition

1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
6...decent punch, good opener, i heard that shit before so i know what ya talkin about it, i found it funny, you used it nice as a turn around into a punch!!
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
7...DAMN!!! nice wordplay used in this punch to own his song like that, another good personal!!
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
5...aight not feelin this, the whole setup and punch were not delivered to full affect, this was a weak punch!!
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
5...not feelin this either, you forced a rhyme in this punch and didnt deliver anything really hard hittin!!
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
6...nice closer, a good punch, i wasnt really feeling the setup to this punch but it was still nice!!

OVERALL: 29/50


So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
5...not feelin this opener, i mean the whole setup was weak, it went with the punch but everything was worded too basic!!
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
5...again, too basic. the whole crazy frog idea was not that affective and it wasnt worded into a decent punch!!
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
5...an ok punch here, the whole running nose concept has been done before which ruined the punch i think!!
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
6...played concept, but not too played, the mile high thing is ok to use and you did use it quite well so i give ya props on this punch!!
So why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack thugs",
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",
7...LMAO!!! best punch of the battle, this shit was funny as hell and a nice original punch on the UK stand up things!!

OVERALL: 28/50

close battle...
i dont think that either one of you came with ya best...
prem had some of that nice wordplay he uses...
a couple of weak lines...you forced that rhyme in one bar...
you had some nice personals...
mad dog...
came too basic i think and lacked consistensy...
you tried playin off the accent but not that well...
the "crazy frog" punch was kinda wack...
had that dope punch at the end...
but overall you weren't consistent enough...

V/ - Premanition

NO HATE!!!

RTF!!! Hit tha CALI battle please if ya aint already!!!
That shit needs mad votes on it, gettin slept on like crazy!!!

This was feedback posted for Premanition
 

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Voted For: Mad Dog

NICE BATTLE BETWEEN TWO DOPE UK HEADZ,

WAS CLOSE AND BOTH CAM HARD WITH VERSES PACKED WITH DOPE PUNCHES AND OCCASIONAL WORDPLAY,

IMO MD GETS IT AS HE HAD MORE CONSISTANT PUNCHES THROUGHOUT,

BEST PUNCH:
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",

PREAM YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD TOO AND NOTHING WAS UP WITH IT, I JUS THIN MD CAME HARDER.

BEST PUNCH/PERSONAL:
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’

NO HATE RTF IN SIG.

Thanks for the votes all so far uppin this...definitely a good battle...

Voted For: Mad Dog

i9ght this was a close battle but here is what i think went down....

Premanition:



1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
^^ nice filler, second line not so gd, y wud he take america??
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
^^ nice personal here good wordplay
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
^^ dont reallt get this one :S
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
nice name play here and good punch
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
^^ ok closure nothing too special

ok i felt your verse was a little forced and didn't have as many punches as i thought u wouldav had... overall i didn't feel as if u came as hard as u usually do, you had some good wordplay in there and your structure and flow was on point.

mad dog:

So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
^^ ok personal not really hard hitting good wordplay though
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
^^ lol this was good didn't really rhyme but it's the punch that counts decent!
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
^^ lol this was kinda played
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
^^ nice punch and good wordplay,
so why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack" thugs"
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",
^^ this was good closure!!


ight i felt u stayed consistant thriough the whole verse and had sum gd punches.. just work on ur structure n then you will be fine...

v/ mad dog for staying consistant and having more original punches..

no hate pzz

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Voted For: Premanition

close battle, for real:

So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
.....ehhhhhhhhh no punch here, notr feelin this
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
.......lol, that had me rollin, i unno if many people would get it tho
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
...... meh, that wasnt any good to me
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
.... this was decent
So why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack thugs",
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",
....lol, ok finish

overall i think u needa work on droppin punches..... u had one or two, but even those didnt hit that hard.... try and be more creative also and not just make statements...

Prem:
1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
.......ahhhh this was ok, but the whole link thing took way too long to make it hit hard.... at all
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
blah..... ok, but coulda been worded better... alot better
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
...... ehhh ok i guess
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
.... lol, ok, best line so far
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
lmao.... only real creative/hard hittin punch i saw in this battle.....

Seriously, i thought this battle was goin to Mad Dog until i saw Prems last two bars..... the finisher really gave u the win in this one..... both of u didnt come played, but neither had any real hard hittin shit in their verse except for Prems last line..... real close battle tho...... this could go either way

Weerrd up up and away mutha fuckas 1 more and 3...

yeh good close battle here, gud shit mad

uppin

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Lets Get The Shit Closed All Battles Wit The Word Rtf In Them Will Be Returned!!!

Voted For: Mad Dog