SCI CON vs Archangel
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 07:01 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

we got like 2 days so hurry and check in so we can this shit ready, im gonna check in after you too make sure you dont no show so hurry up bitch

Archangel has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 08:14 AM.

Oh my bad man i didnt see this, checkin in, ok lets battle,

this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,

SCI CON has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 03:29 AM.

This nigga bout to get stomped like ludacris did T.I.P

your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary



the lines may look streched but every bar is a multie....yes im that dope...lol

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Voted For: SCI CON

yo, dis was easy to decide

archangel has da cooler name lol, but dat nigga didnt spit punchez. his conceptz werent worded dat good so dey didnt come close to hittin h ard. he had some decent wordplay but dat shit aint good enough to win battlez. he had no multiz and no personalz either.

sci con had da mulits and da wordplay and a few of da sick punchez. he didnt have da peronalz either, but wit his other shit he came good enough to win dis shit

both catz had a structure and da flow so dats why i aint comment on dat shit

sci con took dis shit yo.

yo, return da favor nigga on da link in my sig

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uppin, lets get sum votes on this and get it closed

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Voted For: SCI CON

SCI CON:

your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
^^^Tight multi's 9/10
arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
^^^^Good punchlines 8/10
someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
^^^^tight multi usin, lost the flow a bit, wack closing 5/10

.........Tight struture, flow lost at the end, good punchlines and multi's, but no personals.

Archangel:

this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
^^^^ Nice punchline... funny shit 7/10
im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
^^^^wack man.... 2/10
ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
^^^^wack but funny, 4/10
lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
^^^^No Struture, then no flow, but a creative punchline 5/10

....Man u got bad structure, so as the flow, but u got creative in this ma fucka, u need ta improve your multis' cuz SCI CON got u with that.

Both: try to get into sum hard hittin personals....

V/ SCI SON

RTF for more honest votes.... pz

Voted For: Archangel

WHats up Arch??? Long time no see...

No contest.... Arch has this one.....SCI COCK.... you were a little happy about your slef battleing Arch. (Toget your ass wooped) you talked about yourself too much..... focus on dissing arch...

Arch that was some mad.... shit... i like it... I lke the cholesteral line.... Killer funnny!... keep the shit up!

Return the fava!..

~One~

Voted For: SCI CON

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Voted For: SCI CON

this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
an okay opener
im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
nope
ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
weak
lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
flow was too-stretched.. punch wasn’t great


your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
okay
arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
decent punch
someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
weak closer

overall this battle was weak here.. SCI took this one though
punches were just a little bit harder.. flow was aight.. & the structure
was okay.. overall both of u need to elevate more too.. and SCI
stop using the ~ <--those.. cuz their wack in ur rhymes

uppin............................................. .......

.........uppin this 4 my nigga SCI CON..................

Voted For: Archangel

ehh i think it was a wack battle sci con had the multies but arch took this one. i think ya openor was good but it sounds lick i heard it b4 ya whole verse was ok average and so was sci but it looks like you dissed him more on the account that you had more lines

v/ archangle

This was feedback posted for SCI CON
 

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Voted For: Archangel

this was no competition at all.......sci con.....u gotta elevate son......say this was a dick riding vote all u like but archangel merked you.....really i didnt feel your verse one bit...
flow
vocab
punches all go to arch...............

Voted For: SCI CON

your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
nice multis

arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
ha funny good multis..

someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
nice ending good punch good multis nice drop....

9/10 good multis nice punch creative and all with a personal nice....



this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
ha nice start...

im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
nah i aint feeling this....

ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
aight, freedy is a play concept...

lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
not feeling this bar weak...

u had a good bar but then it fell off badly... but good try fam keep elevating.... 5/10

Voted For: SCI CON

this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
^^This dun rhyme and played concept....
im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
^^^nah...suked
ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
^^^whack.......not a punch
lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
^^^whack.....not a punch

Problem with your verse was that you kept talking about yourself instead of the oppenent.Focus more on dissing.Add wordplay and metas too.And ur 1st bar....the closest one to a punch....didn't rhyme.

your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
^^^not a punch
arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
^^not a punch
someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
^^^OK.....best line in the verse.

Same thing with you.U had one bar that was a punch and 2 that wasn't.Only thing different between you and the other guy was that ur one punch had flow in it.So you got it,.

Weak battle

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