KhAoZ ThEoRy vs .Barz Of Steel.
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-01-05 at 08:06 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 08:14 AM.

Ur ''Killin Mics?'' Yeah, Okay, But Only If U ''Cut Da Cord''
Sure 8 Lines Aint 2 Much?[for u]. Wuldnt Want Peeps Gettin Bored :thumbup:
Oh Lord, Another Played Name Biggin Up His ''Sick Azz Bars''*
Only Tyme Hiz Mic Rhymes Hit Major Punchlines==
============He Edited His Head On Da Avatar
So Ur ''Untouchable''? Or Iz It People Dont Wanna Touch U
Ur ''Ghost'' 2 Girls=
So Dat Explains Da Scream n Scatter Wen U Say ''Boo''
Who Says We Want 2 ''Bend U''..Aint Ya' Happy Bein Str8?
=Obsessed Wid ''Barz''=
An I Appreciate Da ''Challenge''..But I'm Sure U'll Find An ''In-mate!''

*=Hiz Yahoo Username Iz ''Sick Azz Bars''

Da Rest Iz Simple Wordplay, But Seriously, Dont Get Any Ov Da Verses?...Then Dont Vote! ...Good Luck Dawg

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 03:42 PM.

This man is just weak, you cant handle the heat, you damaging me?
How? When you couldn't "get a sweet bar" from the "candy machine"
You're hardly a threat.........................So why he wanna try me for?
When I could easily "cook this cat".................like a "chinese store" *
I dont give a fuck what this maggot say, but if he think's this cats afraid
Then He will get "slapped on his face"...............kinda like "after shave"
Just stop the lies, face it fam, you'll never be hot with rhymes
So watch me "Put an end to KhAoZ".....................like a "compromise"

* Some chinese people cook cats

Good luck fam...

And BTW, KhAoZ ThEoRy cannot be DQed for having more than 5 open battles...

Lets get some votes!!

uppin............................................. ....

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

alright vote here goes to steel......i liked ya opener and closer...shit was good....not over the top..but above avg there.....the only i'd tell you steel is too not put so much damn space in your lines.........Khaoz..i wasn't feeling your drop as much as his but you still had a couple good lines.....overall you both came alright...good battle

Best line of the battle
-This man is just weak, you cant handle the heat, you damaging me?
How? When you couldn't "get a sweet bar" from the "candy machine"

Iight good looks drop a link and I'll RTF

1-0 lets get some more votes!!!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.


No Hate But Khaoz ya structure was exactly dat...Chaos...Not even good reading...that therefore threw off everything...Opener was nice after that all hell breaks lose becuz of structure...Barz...nice liens...okay wordplay...decent verse...
V// B.O.S

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This man is just weak, you cant handle the heat, you damaging me?
How? When you couldn't "get a sweet bar" from the "candy machine"

Lol ok

You're hardly a threat.........................So why he wanna try me for?
When I could easily "cook this cat".................like a "chinese store" *

Bit played sorta connects though

I dont give a fuck what this maggot say, but if he think's this cats afraid
Then He will get "slapped on his face"...............kinda like "after shave"

Niiiice

Just stop the lies, face it fam, you'll never be hot with rhymes
So watch me "Put an end to KhAoZ".....................like a "compromise"

Nice personal on his name

VS

Ur ''Killin Mics?'' Yeah, Okay, But Only If U ''Cut Da Cord''
Sure 8 Lines Aint 2 Much?[for u]. Wuldnt Want Peeps Gettin Bored

1st line needed re-wording to hit hard! but the 2nd line was weak man

Oh Lord, Another Played Name Biggin Up His ''Sick Azz Bars''*
Only Tyme Hiz Mic Rhymes Hit Major Punchlines==
============He Edited His Head On Da Avatar

Str8 personal

So Ur ''Untouchable''? Or Iz It People Dont Wanna Touch U
Ur ''Ghost'' 2 Girls=
So Dat Explains Da Scream n Scatter Wen U Say ''Boo''

Lol lol lol lol

Who Says We Want 2 ''Bend U''..Aint Ya' Happy Bein Str8?
=Obsessed Wid ''Barz''=
An I Appreciate Da ''Challenge''..But I'm Sure U'll Find An ''In-mate!''

ok

This was definetly close but BofS was more consistant with connections, Kaos had 1 bar wayyy off which fru his whole verse for me v.close battle

Yo btw please return the favour on the battle in my sig

Thanx 4 Da Honest Vote! Upppiiinnnggggggggggggggggggggg

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

ight u asked me to drop an honest vote khaoz so her it goes fam....

barz:

This man is just weak, you cant handle the heat, you damaging me?
How? When you couldn't "get a sweet bar" from the "candy machine"
^^ lol nice opener good wordplay
You're hardly a threat.........................So why he wanna try me for?
When I could easily "cook this cat".................like a "chinese store" *
^^ lol chinese cook cats... nice again
I dont give a fuck what this maggot say, but if he think's this cats afraid
Then He will get "slapped on his face"...............kinda like "after shave"
^^ good concept not played
Just stop the lies, face it fam, you'll never be hot with rhymes
So watch me "Put an end to KhAoZ".....................like a "compromise"
^^ not really feeling this

overall i thought u had a really strong verse execpt for the last bar which i wasn't feeling... just touch up on your structure and you'll be well on your way fam good verse keep it up :D


khaoz:


Ur ''Killin Mics?'' Yeah, Okay, But Only If U ''Cut Da Cord''
Sure 8 Lines Aint 2 Much?[for u]. Wuldnt Want Peeps Gettin Bored
^^ ok first line was dope second line was played
Oh Lord, Another Played Name Biggin Up His ''Sick Azz Bars''*
Only Tyme Hiz Mic Rhymes Hit Major Punchlines==
============He Edited His Head On Da Avatar
^^ not feelin it or the ='s
So Ur ''Untouchable''? Or Iz It People Dont Wanna Touch U
Ur ''Ghost'' 2 Girls=
So Dat Explains Da Scream n Scatter Wen U Say ''Boo''
^^ lol played concept again
Who Says We Want 2 ''Bend U''..Aint Ya' Happy Bein Str8?
=Obsessed Wid ''Barz''=
An I Appreciate Da ''Challenge''..But I'm Sure U'll Find An ''In-mate!''
^^ nice wordplay on his name and prison i liek this..

overall i thought most of your verse was played, your last bar was the only decent bar u had in this verse... i personally thought u can come alot harder than this but u didnt so i cant really say mich about it in this one....

v/ barz for haviong harder punches better structure and better concepts for punches pz...


rtf link is in the sig pzzz

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Barz u had this one cause ur strucutre and flow wasn't fucked up like KhAoz i think he chould get wit better structure ( NO HATE ) barz got this from me handz down khaoz work on ya shits a little bit and u can become a vet na mean barz of steel on ya way flow was tight punches connected 1 after another u know so i gotta give this to you vote from me Red Flag Official Vote I gotta give it to ma main min . Barz Of Steel. .