.Barz Of Steel. vs sabre
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Bullshit

1 day to check, 1 day to drop.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-02-05 at 04:11 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 05:02 PM.

BTW, 3-0=KO like we agreed...You forgot to add that to the rules

I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"



Explanations:

* Sabre Tooth Tiger

** Starlights is the name of a gay bar...'flaming'=gay

Come check in man!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sabre has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 09:40 PM.

Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist
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if you dont get anything, please dont vote. thank you and gl.

Iight nice verse man uppin for somed votes!!!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Barz of Steel pretty much crushed homie... He had hard punches while Sabre was just flowin didnt even see any punches in Sabre verse......... Bars of steel outflowed outpunched him plain N simple


Bars of Steel

.........................getting that one removed.

yo Sabre...Who's your alias? (If you have one)

Getting deeper accidentlyentered it in too early that was just my straight up opinion

Barz

Barz took this with ease. He had hard hitting punches nice flow alright multies and some good personals from what he can work on

Favorit punches where

I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"


fuck it i pretty much like the whole flow N if that 3=0 ko is offical then dis should be over in no time

Sabre all i can do is give you advice....work on your punches all of them were straight up weak if those were actual punches........you had a nice flow dogg just wasnt cuttin it with punches

Botg keep do N ya thang sabre elevate


Winner Barz

note: sabre if you do get my vote DQ's it wont really matter cuz other 9/10 u aint winnin dis battle w/o beggin for votes or usin an Alias no hate dog just elevate

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

obviously you didn't get any of my punches, because every line had one.
also, i used personals, which obviously you did not realize.
dont be a fag, barz just voted on one of your battles, now you're returning the favour.
and you didn't enter too early, i bet barz pm'd you to explain it more because of what i said in here.
shit man, you're whack period, and i'll fucking whore you.

Come do it then homie topical or battle rap u choose............N i did get ya punches they was just straight up wack even when i read it again n looked deeper so talk ya shit after all the votes needed or drop

^ fuck you are a funny bastard....and reading your shit, i can't stop laughing.
seriously, you got no right talking smack bud, you're garbage, i hope you die.
and i'd whore you topically too, so stfu already.

Voted For: sabre

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Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying//just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying! (Eh...6/10)
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes//but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!(Eh...6/10)
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud//only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves(Bud=filler type..but nice line..8/10)
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music//the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it(Iight I Feel Dat 8/10)
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see//think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key(Decent? 7/10)
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist//its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist(Nice Closer 9/10)
----OVERALL SABRE 44/60------------------
I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude//He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" (FYI...dont do explanations and 1st line=self glorifying...5/10..bad opener)
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines//But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"(using line twice? no...Hotline=Played...5/10)
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"//Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"(Played....5/10)
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?//When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars"(no good b/c of explanation..other den decent line..7/10)
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground//This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"(No rhyme..and weak lines...4/10)
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow//And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat" (....6/10)
-----Overall B.O.S 32/60-----------------

B.O.S alot of yoru lines were played...elevate some...and V//Sabre

Voted For: sabre

Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
7...LoL!! this confused me at first, but i get it, B.O.S. switched to SOB....very complex shit but a nice personal!!
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
7...LMAO!!! these lines are funny...thinkin ya praisin them then "OOOOOHHHH" finish it off and kill them!!
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
6...decent wordplay....pretty basic considering though but still an affective punch!!
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
6...not really feelin this that much, the whole idea is good but i think if you worded it better it cud've been a killer line, but it was still good!!
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
5...not feelin it, weak line cuz it was worded pretty basic and the fact that it is on a played concept doesn't help either!!
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist
7...LoL!!! nice way to finish, just killed ya opponent but had that one weak line!!

OVERALL: 38/60



I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
5...nah...a good idea on the name but you worded it wrong and the delivery of the punch was not all that good!!
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
3...holy shit!!! a "hot" line...these are so fuckin played they shud be called xbox games!!
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Solo in a battle against Shadows Edge last year The only time u ‘Hot Dog’ is when u get packed in a bun…

0...you near enough copied a line I used last year so you get no points for this!!!!
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
5...probably ya best bar, but still it wasnt that good, some aight wordplay, but quit callin people faggot!!!
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
0...didn't rhyme, nuff said!!
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"
3...WTF!!! "sick" lines are also another little addition to the PLAYED LIKE FUCK collection!!

OVERALL: 16/60

shudnt have to explain this
sabre had punches, some real funny ones to begin with
others that cud've been better
one weak one, but he was consistent
bars of steel had no real punches that were creative
one ok punch
a bar that didnt rhyme
a bar with a line he stole frome me
many played concepts

V/ - sabre (naturally)

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

V/.Barz of steel.......this was a good battle both came wit some good punchs an personals...but barz came wit it his punchs were consistent an had good personal...his sturcture was on point....ak ur verse lacked consistent punchs that where hard hittin u came out good at first but then it declined....u had good structure an vocab but ur verse wasnt good enough to get my vote.....NO Hate......RETURN THE FAVOR.....
(Or i'll get this vote removed an u'll never recieve an honest vote from me agian)
opener=B
closer=B
punchs=B
structure=Tie
Vocab=A
Personals=B
Wordplay=Tie
Multi's=Tie None really
Overall=.BarZ of Steel.

Drop a link fam and I will RTF...Uppin this shit!!!

alright.
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Voted For: sabre

dope battle.....both verses were nice and packed with punches.


ak

this was some nice shit man, personald were dope. that opener summed up the whole verse, dope concept nice punch and personal, your verse also flowed nicely but i suggest using multies.

barz
your shit was hella tite too man, had nice wordplay but you used too many played concepts...like the joker bar, oldest wordplay going imo, i think you came weak to your standards so due to better personals and herder hittin punches, ak gets mah vote.

alright, advice noted.
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Voted For: sabre

Aii Total Breakdwon Of explanation LOL

Barz Of steel
I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
.......First Line was aii but The 2nd was :nono:
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
......Didnt Get whY hot was >""< (Quoted) Line wasnt good still
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"
Nice wodplay Mayne :thumbup:
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
....Nice again .....
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
didnt Ryme ......But the wordplay Was aii
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"
....^Played concept in that bar rii there mayne So Thats a :nono:

Sabre
Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
..aii Nameplay But not a good punch
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
LOL that was str8 couldve been worded betta
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
...Rymin Was sort of off but That Punch was aii
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
LOL Damn That Was sort of cold Not a good punch but jus the fact of what you said was crazy
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
Not All dat Jus aii Nameplay
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist
:shocked: now Ive heard people say that Your skills are wack or very low on the meter but They dont Exist ......thats hot LOL

So Basically I Think That Sabre Takes this battle buT really All Bcuz Bars of stell Your Strcuture was too sloppy and it threw your flow off and also That Last bar that Sabre had was Nice and I Think Thats what Takes the cake in This battle

No Hate

Peace
Jus RTF !!

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Voted For: sabre

Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist

Good Solid Verse, Nice Flow & Structure, Disses Wuz On Point, Real Hard Hitting Stuff, Nothin I Can Fault In Da Verse Dawg, Nice Shit


I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"

Alot Ov Played Concepts, Uncreative Linez, Diz Aint Yo Best Drop Barz, Seen Much Better Frum U, Usually Yo Shitz On Point & Da Disses R Strong, U Lacked Personalz & Da Wordplay Wuz Far 2 Basic

V=Sabre, Much More Complex Disses & Good Solid Punz

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