Kein Witz vs Dizzee Rascal
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 05:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Kein Witz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 05:26 PM.

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 05:31 PM.

Okay, quick one.

It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.

Alright, seriously....

Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.

* http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193246
** In monopoly, you take a chance card when landing on the question mark...

Don't get the rest, don't bother to vote.

Ok i said 8 lines in that pm i sent you so i hope you dropped 8.

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground

Wait since u dropped an extra bar let me drop 1 quickly man so its even ight?

Bitch backing down in fear, like fertiliser experts, ive been slaying herbs for years
Make u disappear, dent a 2X4 in ur head, atleast it will expand ur ideas

...You do know 'years' and 'ideas' doesn't rhyme, right? o_O Anyway, okay. Good luck.

The syllable count doesnt but. for years and ideas have same syllable count and ends rhyme
Just thought i would neutralise that subtle attempt at swaying lol G'luck 2 u man

Yeah, nice drop. =| My record sucks. I usually stick with topicals and leagues.

Voted For: Kein Witz


Dizzee Rascal:

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)

Nice...8/10

Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday

Ok...5/10

Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin

Nice...8/10

Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground

LOL...A bit stretched, but nice...8/10

Overall: 29/40 (73%)

Kein Witz

It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.

Played...4/10

Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).

Played...3/10

Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **

Decent...5/10

You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.

LOL nice...9/10

Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.

Coulda been worded better...6/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)

This vote goes to Dizzee for not coming so played with his lines...Kein, work on your creativity man

No hate

Removed.. unexplained

Shit, my bad, meant to vote for Dizzee Rascal...Get that shit switched!

Lmao i did that in keins topical just a minute ago understandable mistake, you know how i would switch it?

Go post this link in the "battle problems" forum under community complaints and tell them that I meant to vote for you...They will switch it

Sleeepers ive voted on enough stuff................

Voted For: Kein Witz

Kein Witz- UH dawg....Your punches was played, and they were whack,non effective. The way you worded your set up punch, was whack also. The flow was alright in most parts, the best aspect of your verse was just the flow and the only good punch you had was...........

Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **

But everything else was BLAH!



Dizz- uh dawg. That was whack, no punches, no flow. Actually your whole verse was just plain nothing, you need to elevate on structure and flow........also punches. This was just plain whack, yo elevate.

Overall=This battle was whack, both heads needs to work on punches.......and personals with decent flow. Uh my vote goes to Kein Wtiz, He actually had a punch, most of them was played out..just plain blah! Dizz you came pure whackness man your punches wasn't even touching, sorry but you need to elevate.

LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Ok..
Upping this for some more votes lol

This is why I stick to topicals...................

lol ight lets up this
............................

Lets get some more votes then please................

Amazing theres only been 1 vote (well 2) and its on to two pages

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Opionion..... Yall both had nice punches nice flow but both need to work on yall structures in my opionion. This was a hard battle to judge but im giving it to Dizzee for Personals and wordply

Flow- Both had a nice flow i could read threw it easily and rap it out loud.
Punches- This was really tied in my view Cuz both had some really nice punches that hit hard in my view.
Metas- Were alright in my view
Wordplay- Dizze took it in dis departmant barly N witz was right up on his back with this but Dizz took it.
Personals- Dizze took him in personals mainly becuz how he used parts of his name

Winner Dizzee Rascal

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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Aii Breskdown

Kein Witz
It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.
That seem kinda gay ..(second line)

Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
.......Good concept but the bar itself wasnt all that good
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
....Those are two different games
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
.......Not Good
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway
....That was Dumb...
aii Man Overall Your verse was jus Childish if you ask me No Hate or nuttin its jus the fact that your verse wasnt coordinated with any good punchez and personal or wordplay amn so you lacked the three main things thatll help you win a battle so I cant give you my vote man srry

DR
Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
.....1st line was wack but the second one was good
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
Very Strecthed rii There man ....couldve been worded better
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
LOL That was Good I Like that one
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground
I Was gettin ready to say that that was wack ass hell but I see the nameplay LOL my Bad .....

overall your verse came out jus barely better than kein witz i think that you both couldve done .................................................. ....................................< that much better so both of you need to work on elevating SOOON

RTF In The Battle link in my sig Please

WitOUT HATE

Word i came wack
Ill return it when i get home later

....Those are two different games

What in the fuck does that mean?

Chance cards are part of monopoly.

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
6...cud've been better if not for the setup, i seen that kind of line before, the hole punch concept was original and dope.
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
7...DAMN!!! LoL!!! wordplay was tight in this bar, props to the originality to.
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
6...rhymin wasn't perfect, but still a good punch and again some nice wordplay.
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground
5...kinda weak, 2nd line was stretched to and i wasn't really feeling the einstein concept, its been done before.

OVERALL: 24/40


It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.
5...weak opener, the turtleneck/shells concept wasn't used right, and that bring it on shit was gay.
Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
4...weaker, first line was gay and pointless, not really a punch and the 2nd was weak and played.
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
5...not good, the hurricane shit was kinda good, but the monopoly concept was not used right.
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
5...weak still, you spitting too basic with no real creativeness in ya punches.
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.
4...weak again, the 2nd line just sounded retarded, no hate but that the way it is.

OVERALL: 23/50


weak drop from kein witz.....too basic with the punches, ya need to throw in some nice wordplay to make ya punches more hard hitting, also stop with the played concepts and the pointless retarded lines like that closer....
dizz...nice wordplay again, punches were on point although one i wasn't feelin with that einstein shit, just try to fix ya rhyme scheme...make it a lil more complex and also you could still up ya wordplay some to be even doper :thumbup:

V/ - Dizzee Rascal

RTF!!!! any battle in my sig that you can hit....:thumbup:

Upping this
swooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosh

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

oh shit no question dizzee won hands down, i was feeling that shit, i was reading it like the way the real dizzee rascal would say it, (a famous english rapper for those who dont no) brilliant, k.w your rap was wack, shit, and un-orginal all in one go, well done

There wasn't any description in that. I'm not accepting that vote on the grounds it's total bullshit and no explained at all, even though I fucking hate regular text battles.

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.
4/10...Weak Punch & Lame Concept
Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
4/10...Again, Weak & Not Hard Hittin
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
6.5/10...These Lines Were Much Betta, Good Wordin
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
5/10...Placed In A "Wake"?? Thats What You Meant Rite?
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.
2/10....Weak Closer

See You Started 2 Catch Flames In Da Middle Then Finished It Off Terribly...No Punch Nor Creativity Used In Da Start & Finish...Middle Was Ya Strongest


Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper
6/10...That Wasnt Too Creative But Nice Concept
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
6/10...Nice, Woulda Been Betta If It Wasnt So Stretched Out Tho
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
5/10...Nah, You Used Margin Twice...2nd Time Was Eh (Aight)
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground
7/10...Nice Closer...Betta Than Kein's


Overall...I've Seen Betta From DIZZEE, Much Betta, But This Battle Was Kinda Leveled Out Da Same...Nobody Hit Hard Enough, No Personals Were Used (Except 1), Punches Werent Strong But Some Concepts Had Good Meanin But Were Set Up Horribly (Like Dizzees Line That Was Stretched)...v/ Dizzee Rascal...Betta Punches/Creativeness

RTF On Me & EC's Battle....Or Im Deadin This Vote