Daubs vs Red Flag
 

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 07:23 AM.

Red Flag has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 11:28 AM.

i already posted mah verse, quick if you will...

good luck.
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Just checking pollz fam((((((((((((((((((((())))))))))))))))))))

This was feedback posted for Red Flag
 

Yo, well played both yall, good luck, hope TBN wins, red u came hot specially with the killer end line, but Daubs u hit hard with the link thing, cmon people vote

Voted For: Daubs

dAUBS- alright man, you had some good ass punches here with good flow and personals...YOu had wordplays but i sugest to you that you get better at that.....The only thing that stood out in your verse was punches and personals nice job.

Red Flag- Ok you had some wicked wordplays, but the punches nah dawg it wasn't hard hitting, you had personal i think onlly 1....You need more personals. And your punches are weak and non-effective the set up punches was weak also man


Overall=this battle goes to daubs, he had better punches and good personals, he needs to work on wordplays. and stop spacing out your bars man...it's herbish..Redflag lost this battle because even though he had wicked wordplays his punches was weak, the set up of it was weak also. so my vote goes to daubs for harder puncehs

Daubs return a favor in a battle

"WHite powder vs young blaze".......It's an crew battle 6ft vs psa it needs some votes since it's the only thing going out now...

Please honest vote thank you

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Voted For: Daubs

V/Daubs....this was a good battle the best i seen lately both came wit it....but d came wit hard hittin punchs that were consistent an had personals an good structure wit good word play.....red u came wit a hot opener but ur verse was inconsistent to me some ur punchs were hot but some were played u had good structure......No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR.....
OPENER=R
CLOSER=D
STRUCTURE=TIE
PUNCHS=TIE
PERSONALS=D
WORDPLAY=D
MULTI'S=TIE none really
VOCAB=D
OVERALL=DAUBS..

This was feedback posted for Red Flag
 

checkin polls.........................................

Voted For: Daubs

Wow.................hot ass battle


For both MC's=Dis was one of the nicet battles ive seen in awhile Both had Great flow N great structure N hard hitting punches. Props to both. But im givin it to Daubs cuz his punches made me goin more than Flags..............Also he had nicer personals.......... Daubs is straight up sick in others words....no dick riding either

So in my view Daubs got this,

PS: i think there should be a rematch eitherway dis battle goes


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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

LoL Nice DAUBZ FAMZ CHEKIN POLLS..................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checkin polls.........daubs is that man!!!!!........

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Voted For: Daubs


Aii Total Breakdown

red Flag
Ya mouths a chatter-box wit dick ya ass is Love Struck
Don't be a bitch homie and say well that vote is begginer's Luck
First Line was Str8 2nd Line Lacked Concept
I begin to tuck, the automatic before i release and have u a death-ceremony
I get AROUND like pepperoni's and let u have face 2 dirt matrimony's
LOL Face 2 dirt That was Nice
Please check ma stance im ready to dance and knock ma face out ya glance
Let the impact hit hard like the loss to Steve Nash ya crew got no chance
.....Umm Sayso But It wont all dat
Uk. original gangsta's rep that fuck u and weak wanabe hood
I blow ya mainstream of blood out ya ears so you can hear wutz good
Um The wsecond lines concept is kinda played bcuz I read like 12 of those same lines this week LOL no Offense
Livin'Legends are Miss-ing u need a telescope to get ya shit seen
Yet you still battle cats the age of 3 and ya ass if Fifteen
Aii personal But No Strong Impact as a Punch
Killin cats wit wack tracks is my fuckin rap career Hobby
Got a gay name yes im straight with that claim this dudes name is Daubney
...2st Line was like dissing yourself But The second line Was good

Overall i think That You couldve done a Whole lot betta On The concept area but Your wording was good But Yet you lacked hard hitting pucnhez so try to work on that

Daubs
We know this bitch is cowardly, hence every loss another name change..
And the only way u raise the red flag, is when the white ones stained.. *
LOl Damn nice personal followed by a Nice punch
Like iraq leaders, your ERA is over so ima lower the FLAG we allso sick of..
And your skill is missed.....like the start of your past names posted above!!**
..Nice Naemplay Punch shouldve hit harder considering the nameplay but Hey it was cool
After the votes done your murdered.....so your aka the living dead..
Only reason people stop to read your verse... is coz its in light red.. ***
...Im Not gonna Lie .....Thats the only reason I did ..srry LOL
Your impossible, but only because of the way you aint got no chance..
And the only time u have a change of heart....is with an organ transplant..
....LOL Original But yet It Dint Hit hard as the rest
Poor thing never had a chick, so no wonder flags heart is aching..
And bad news travels fast........the only way you be over taking!!
,....Nuttin Specail
You could compare me to insulin, the way my rhymes are injected..
And il leave ya like the sig you made....laughed at and rejected!! ****
:shocked: gameover that ended it rii there

overall i think Thagt You did good excepting one bar that I sytedt that it was nuttin specail but the rest was great LOL Really ripped it your punchez hit hard your personals were beyond fabolous so ima give you my vote

Please RTf In any battle link In My sig Please Honestly


and battle stats are in my sig also :roll:

Voted For: Daubs

I think daubs got this..

Daubs -
1. Nice opener... good punches.. 8/10
2. hah.. guess it aind bad... good punch.. 7/10
3. not bad.. but not amazing 6/10
4. not bad.. not amazing again... 6/10
5. errr not feelin it.. 5/10
6. haha not a bad punch.. and personal.. 8/10

Red
1. not a good opener.. shoulda been a punch.. 6/10
2. weak.. no personal no punch.. not feelin 3/10
3. not feelin it.. again kinda weak there... 4/10
4. k fuck it.. its pretty much all filler from here... seriously... work on that shit.. you aint winnin this battle....

DAUBS u got this... hands down..

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Voted For: Daubs

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Daubs:

We know this bitch is cowardly, hence every loss another name change..
And the only way u raise the red flag, is when the white ones stained.. *
Ok, but Not Worded The Best..5/10
Like iraq leaders, your ERA is over so ima lower the FLAG we allso sick of..
And your skill is missed.....like the start of your past names posted above!!**
Ugh...Decent..6/10
After the votes done your murdered.....so your aka the living dead..
Only reason people stop to read your verse... is coz its in light red..
Not Good...3/10
Your impossible, but only because of the way you aint got no chance..
And the only time u have a change of heart....is with an organ transplant..
Ok...5/10
Poor thing never had a chick, so no wonder flags heart is aching..
And bad news travels fast........the only way you be over taking!!
Ok Word Play..5/10
You could compare me to insulin, the way my rhymes are injected..
And il leave ya like the sig you made....laughed at and rejected!! ****
Haha Ok..6/10

Overall: 30/60

Red Flag:

Ya mouths a chatter-box wit dick ya ass is Love Struck
Don't be a bitch homie and say well that vote is begginer's Luck
Wow..That Was Wack..2/10
I begin to tuck, the automatic before i release and have u a death-ceremony
I get AROUND like pepperoni's and let u have face 2 dirt matrimony's
Ok Word Play..3/10
Please check ma stance im ready to dance and knock ma face out ya glance
Let the impact hit hard like the loss to Steve Nash ya crew got no chance
Ok..3/10
Uk. original gangsta's rep that fuck u and weak wanabe hood
I blow ya mainstream of blood out ya ears so you can hear wutz good
Ok..4/10
Livin'Legends are Miss-ing u need a telescope to get ya shit seen
Yet you still battle cats the age of 3 and ya ass if Fifteen
Weak..2/10
Killin cats wit wack tracks is my fuckin rap career Hobby
Got a gay name yes im straight with that claim this dudes name is Daubney.....
Weak Closer...2/10

Overall: 16/60

My Vote - Daubs For Better Overall Verse.

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