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LyricalMa$tamind vs chitownsoulja
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no bullshit ass votes eitha Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-04-05 at 08:32 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 08:50 PM.
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I'm tired of this, n00bs try to "get under my skin" like psoriasis
But I'm more a hazard to ChiTownsoulja's record, than H-I-V viruses... I Beat This Kid With Out My 'Lyrics', Call Me An 'Instrumental' Exploding His 'Brain Cells' With Out Even Touching His 'Mentals' Battlin me's like "hugging furnaces", I bring rookies close to the heat And left in tourniquets, every cut equals opponent's defeat Ya Punches Can't Live In This Battle Just Leave Em' There To-Waist 'Circus Acts' Ya Verse Is Another Reason To Throw A 'Pie' At Ya-'Face' Kid Strains-His-Verse, Remains-Left-Burst, Vebal Reform Him Mayn Often Mistaked For 'G-Unit' Coz He'll Never Make It Far With 'The Game' MURKED HIM!!!!! 10 lines....................................im out GOOD LUCK MAYNE |
chitownsoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 04:14 PM.
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you must be blind, a mastamind, ya mind cant masta mine,
i spit a verse that''lll blow ya mind,throw ya mind,off like a nine popped off that''ll leave a hole in ya spine you cant flow n ya rhymes are like a fat kid runnin fallin behind guns bigger than paul bunyan holdin all the time... you dont want it wit me you''ll see a red dot have you gaspin for breath grabbin ya chest like red foxx one to ya head you''ll be in a red box come once you wont come twice like chicken pox eat that weak shit up like rice ya verse you shoulda tossed like dice lost like christ to those who dont belive in the afterlife if you think you can beat me you aint actin right the fo five leave you leakin like a sink tonite so think before you speak aight |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Chi- Your verse needs elevation, your punches was weak the flow was ok, but the structure needs help. Try to lengthen your lines the same....Uh you didn't have any personals nor punches....nothing special in your verse dawg just plain too basic.. Lyricalmastermind- Nice man, you had a nice verse, good punches with some decent wordplays. I suggest to you to use some more personals dawg and flipping them into a wordplay and a punch, but this verse was good yo nice. Overall=This battle is one-sided, i vote for lyricalmastermind because he had better punches, better wordplays. His punches were effective. Chi your punches was all basic, non-effective, it needs to be better wording and your structure just fucked up the flow of reading, sorry man you need elevation...work on punches and structure...1 Lyricalmaster mind return a favor in this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193594 |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Flow- LM flow was ten times better than the others dudes cuz i could read it N rap it out loud with ease Punches- Lm had nice hard hittin fresh punches while Chi just had punches tht were weak or ive seen before in some shape or form goin towards LM Metas- From wat i could see they were alright Personas-LM was right about dudes lines being stretched So Lyrical Ma$tamind takes this with ease RTF favor N my battles in My sig Holla |
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Wow, Both Had Seriously Weak Punches... You Guys Gotta Work On That Alot... Chi Actually Had Settups For Good Punches... But NEVER Fallowed Through And Just Rambled On With A Bunched Of Crap... Chi Structure Was Also Really Off... Your Syllable Count Was Horrible... Some Lines Wrapped The Page And Some Only Covered Half... You've Got A Bit Of Work Mayn... Uuuum In Terms Of Flow... Masta Had Alot More Of A Stable Flow... While Chi's Lack Of Structure Ruined His Flow For Me... So Ya, Thats Whats Up... Mastamind Definately Took This Battle... But Both Of You Should Really Work On Elevating... Stay Up And Keep Writing... .One. |
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
chitown..... ya drop was wack..... i mean the fucked up structure throws it off completely, i can't even tell where ya rhymes are or if you stuck to the line limit, the flow was shitty, even with the basic ass multies you threw in the mix.....wordplay was non-existent - as in there was none at all.....did you have punches, maybe a couple of near punches, but really ya just doing a lot of shit talkin to me and not good shit talkin, ya rhyme scheme itself was wack, basic as hell so ya need to get more complex with that shit, no creativity and an overall weak spit.......3/10 lyrical..... ok drop here mayne..... structure was tight as hell, the whole flow was cool, everything went well throughout....opener was dope, HIV lines getting kinda played now, but you made a good punch and the rhymin was well complex....punches and personals were in there, some not so hot but then others were fire, ya wordplay was nice although the speechmarks in places make it seem forced, vocabs was tight like hell, multies were in there to, creativity was ok, although a couple of played lines, all in all a nice drop........8/10 ^^ some of the best i seen ya do..... V/ - LyricalMa$tamind RTF!!! on the R-Rated battle....links in my sig!!!! :thumbup: |
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Voted For: chitownsoulja
ChiTownSoulja: you must be blind, a mastamind, ya mind cant masta mine, i spit a verse that''lll blow ya mind,throw ya mind,off like a nine First Line Was Ok, but Second Wack..3/10 popped off that''ll leave a hole in ya spine you cant flow n ya rhymes are like a fat kid runnin fallin behind guns bigger than paul bunyan holdin all the time... Wack and Stretched To Shit..3/10 you dont want it wit me you''ll see a red dot have you gaspin for breath grabbin ya chest like red foxx Wow..Wack...3/10 one to ya head you''ll be in a red box come once you wont come twice like chicken pox eat that weak shit up like rice ya verse you shoulda tossed like dice lost like christ to those Jesus...Gay..2/10 who dont belive in the afterlife if you think you can beat me you aint actin right the fo five leave you leakin like a sink tonite so think before you speak aight Holy Shit..Wack 2/10 Overall: Worse Verse Ever....13/50 LyricalMastermind: I'm tired of this, n00bs try to "get under my skin" like psoriasis But I'm more a hazard to ChiTownsoulja's record, than H-I-V viruses... Played and Not A Real Punch..4/10 I Beat This Kid With Out My 'Lyrics', Call Me An 'Instrumental' Exploding His 'Brain Cells' With Out Even Touching His 'Mentals' Aight..5/10 Battlin me's like "hugging furnaces", I bring rookies close to the heat And left in tourniquets, every cut equals opponent's defeat Blah..3/10 Ya Punches Can't Live In This Battle Just Leave Em' There To-Waist 'Circus Acts' Ya Verse Is Another Reason To Throw A 'Pie' At Ya-'Face' Ok..4/10 Kid Strains-His-Verse, Remains-Left-Burst, Vebal Reform Him Mayn Often Mistaked For 'G-Unit' Coz He'll Never Make It Far With 'The Game' Ok..5/10 Overall: 21/50 My Vote - LyricalMastermind For All Around Better Verse. ~R~ Vote switched |
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change dat vote he clearly voted 4 me in his explanation i win 5-0 K.O |
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