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.Barz Of Steel. vs Young Dollar
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting *3-0 =KO* All Votes Must Be Explained Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-01-05 at 10:38 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 09:53 PM.
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Come check in man!!!!!!!!!
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Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 09:58 PM.
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This kid's "garbage", all he is is talking "trash
But he aint hard, he "soft" as a "toddler's ass" You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste So you talk slick........................................ And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake" You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine" Look dawg, you're pathetic, I got rhymes that defeat y'all You try to answer, but "swing and miss"................. ..............................like "crosseyed kids and tee-ball" |
I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me,
Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me, My style is unfuckable,i can be touch but not damageable Ya ass say your untouchable,when you really very tangable Try to bite my rhymes and ill show u that they very vemonist Put a glock to ya crotch,Watch me sever ur only epididymis You stay wit Manoply Bills, Jefferson Instead of Benjermins Leave u with infertillity by hurting your valuble Vas Deferens Bitch go fuck a bitch, cuz i know your jus an offical Lez Homie gon spit the two letters of what ya initials says Explanation: If you dont know wat vas deferens is N epididymis go take health class and learn ya sex ed..... his two letter initial is B.S. other words bull shit ayo homie no hate after the battle N ups on ya Album cover |
Nice verse homie
Lets get some votes on this motherfucker!!!! |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
.Barz Of Steel. More of makeing sense in his rhymes his structure is nice flow is of da chart and punches killed u Dollar i think he had better punches personals overall better verse to me so i think he deserves the vote Young Dollar you're flow was weak punches we'erent there and personals u need to learn those son cuz they weak like crazy i think u should elavate V/ Barz of steel RTF in Sig... ~1~ EZ... |
Voted For: Young Dollar
Yo young dollar, this was hot. Bars of Steel: Grood drop, dissed him throughout. I like ure punched it hit hard homie. You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste So you talk slick........................................ And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake" You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine" My favourite bit their in yours. Yound Dollar: Sick verse, jus beat him IMO, sick flow, sick punches all dat Your whole verse was amazin, couldnt find a flaw homie, great drop. IP: I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me, Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me, That cracked me up, YO Can YALL PLEASE RTF ON MY BATTLE WITH MURDZ AND/OR MY BATTLE WITH BIG DAWG, LINKS IN THE SIG...... |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
This kid's "garbage", all he is is talking "trash But he aint hard, he "soft" as a "toddler's ass" lol ok You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste So you talk slick........................................ And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake" Pretty simple analogy sorta hits You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine" Nice name personal and it hits Look dawg, you're pathetic, I got rhymes that defeat y'all You try to answer, but "swing and miss"................. ..............................like "crosseyed kids and tee-ball" Haha tight VS I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me, Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me, No i can see this but really what relevance does steel have to words and also if sticks hurt u im damn sure a bar of steel would kill u My style is unfuckable,i can be touch but not damageable Ya ass say your untouchable,when you really very tangable Ok Try to bite my rhymes and ill show u that they very vemonist Put a glock to ya crotch,Watch me sever ur only epididymis lol You stay wit Manoply Bills, Jefferson Instead of Benjermins Leave u with infertillity by hurting your valuble Vas Deferens Stop with this conceptnow its not that nice Bitch go fuck a bitch, cuz i know your jus an offical Lez Homie gon spit the two letters of what ya initials says Nice Please vote unbiasedly on the battle in my sig |
Thanx...Uppin this shit
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preciate da votes uppin............................................. .........
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine" ^^^^ best line in the battle and it won it for ya! Opener-tie Flow-Barz Structure-Barz Wording-Barz Wit-Barz Closer-Barz Overall-Barz, by far.....rtf in my battle vs. topical in FL |
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
Dolla your verse was weak i wasn't feeling anything really about it to be honest with you um flow wasn't to bad your your stucture wasn't to bad but the thing that i thought that really was weak was your punchlines they just dont hit one little bit work on creativty play with words some more and keep elevating 1 Barz um much better verse from you hands down much more flawless verse from you the stucture was pretty good and the flow was very well done your punchlines were what really made me think of you winning this like just a lot more complex and more of a vet at writing punchlines and shit. keep elevating though you could still work its good though 1 v/ Barz Of Steel |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
Lol Nice Battle Homiez but I Got To Give it To BARZ Vote:Barz! Explanation>: This kid's "garbage", all he is is talking "trash But he aint hard, he "soft" as a "toddler's ass" ^Weak 6/10 You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste So you talk slick........................................ And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake" ^(Um)6/10 You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine" LoL Alright^7.5/10 Look dawg, you're pathetic, I got rhymes that defeat y'all You try to answer, but "swing and miss"................. ..............................like "crosseyed kids and tee-ball" Lol^8/10 ______________________________________ Dolla __________________________ I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me, Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me, ^Alright 7/10 My style is unfuckable,i can be touch but not damageable Ya ass say your untouchable,when you really very tangable ^Weak 6/10 Try to bite my rhymes and ill show u that they very vemonist Put a glock to ya crotch,Watch me sever ur only epididymis ^Weak 6/10 You stay wit Manoply Bills, Jefferson Instead of Benjermins Leave u with infertillity by hurting your valuble Vas Deferens ^(WEAK)5.5/10 Bitch go fuck a bitch, cuz i know your jus an offical Lez Homie gon spit the two letters of what ya initials says ^(Um)5/10 ___________________- Barz Ya Verse Was Better Than DOLLAz!DOlla You Could Have USed Alot More better PUNCHES n Better Vocab!But Honest Vote But RTF!Or diz Votes OUT! da Links Below! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191658 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191739 |
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