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Young Blaze vs White Powder
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10-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 6FT VS PSA.............G-luck. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 06-05-05 at 06:53 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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White Powder has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 09:58 AM.
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Yo young, good luck on this battle man... never battled you b4.. soo yeh ill drop next class...
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Young….
Straight off the top…………………….. you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** ** = flatline… aka steady tone… *** = three stooges.. aka 6 feet (Cali = Moe, Diabolic = Curly…Young = Larry) basically text, audio, and topical just picked the other 2, Leader & Co-leader of the crew…no hate.. just a line.. |
Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 11:20 AM.
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Ight Check.....
Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... (W)hite Powde(R) ^^^sit.......back on Psa Bench. |
This was feedback posted for White Powder
Uppin for some votes................................
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
*Leaves detailed feed for both since it wont let me vote*
you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. Bit of filler really an ok way to open Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... Safe I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. Nice rhyme scheme was poor on account of you n you but who carse, the punch hit Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** Nice Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** Nice personal VS Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays Nice U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes Decent needed re-wording though U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's Dope U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers meh Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... ^^ This is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to forced you cant just take two random letters from his name and use it for a personal this was wack Hard to vote, Blaze definetly had the nicest punch of the battle but the last two bars, just fell of where has WP was consistant fru out which won it for him Please return the unbiased favour on the battle in my sig plllease |
HOLY FUCK I SHOULD PUT THIS IN 100 POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhh w.e. uppin for some votes.
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good battle blaze..... good luck.. ......
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Voted For: Young Blaze
Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays NICE OPENER AND WORDPLAY... U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes MEH, WAS OK. U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's BEST PUNCH, NICE WORDPLAY AND NAMEPLAY... U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers WAS OK.... Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... NICE CLOSER.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~# you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. NOT HARD HITTING, BUT OK OPENER... Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... NICE PUNCH, GOOD WORDPLAY. I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. NICE CONCEPT, BUT I DONT THINK YOU WORDED IT TO PERFECTION. Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** NICE PERSONAL PUNCH... Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** NOT FEELIN IT REALLY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YOUNG GETS MAH VOTE AS HE HAD THE HARDER HITTIN PUNCHES AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, BOTH HAD DECENT WORDPLAY AND NICE FLOW THROUGHOUT. NO HATE, RTF BLAZE. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
rightttt... uppin.....
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edit.... dizzie and daubs have the same IP..... wow... dunno if they the same person.. but one said i would have won.. and the other said young won....
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we not same person...........
we in same crew, both live in manchester with same internet provider... |
This was feedback posted for White Powder
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Voted For: White Powder
first young blaze....blaaaaoooooooo Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays pretty played...but was a punch U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes i liked the word play in this line U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's this was ok i dont like the whole G thing 2nd lines was ok simple wordplay U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers meh, i didnt like it, i never like lines that have gun shot stab, or some hood type punch in it Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... meh, its blah blah (W)hite Powde(R) ^^^sit.......back on Psa Bench. overall an ok verse, you had some wordplay most of it was simple punches were ok nothing great, i would say keep elevating and get better and work on incorperating personals into your punches more. WP, CRACKA you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. multis, too bad i dont vote on multis, ok punch here Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... lmao, i liked this line here nice wordplay on both lines prob dopest punch of the battle so far I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. again nice wordplay, took some thought? ight-good punch Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** lol, i'm liking this wordplay ok punch though Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** lol, an ight punch, nice wordplay you had some nice wordplay alot more complex then blaze's i think, you had a couple of punches that took the battle for you, although i have to say i have seen better ight battle though...lol three stooges V/White Powder |
Voted For: Young Blaze
Wow...Young Blaze Murdered him Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays LOL 9/10 U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes Nice!! 9/10 U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's Good...8/10 U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers LMFAO 9/10 Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... Nice 8/10 Overall: 43/50 (86%) White Powder: you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. Weak...4/10 Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... Blah, coulda been worded better but decent...7/10 I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. Good...7/10 Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** OK...6/10 Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** No...3/10 Overall: 27/50 (54%) Weak verse from White Powder...Goin with Young Blaze...No hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^ nice explanations.. that'll be removed.... probably.....
anyways.. uppin... |
Word to that...............................Uppin....
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
white powder gets this one. better lines. structure coulda been better though.
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Uh uppin for some votes...................................
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
Hmmmm nice battle here............Yo uppin for White powder
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Voted For: Young Blaze
Aii This IS What I Think YOung Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays Good concept :thumbup: U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes ....That Was aii... U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's .......Nuttin specail but nice U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers LOL Toothless hookers :roll: Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... ...................NIce:>................... Aii Basically I figured that you couldve done better considering who you are LoL but I guess you ddint have to bcuz of your oppenent you still take this battle to me jus look at my ending remarks Powder you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. ........That was coo Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... ...:nono:.....I wasnt feelin that way too much I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. That was def Played concept but the wording was jus different Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** THE 2nd Bar Was Sort of a BIT off of Lil Wayne "Go DJ" So That Was a DEF NONO You could get dqed for that Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** ..........You Lose.......... Aii man I Think That First of all Your lines were def to strecthed which mad eyour verse that much harder to read and then you put all the marks in your verse which made your structure sloppy and then you actually toke a lil bite off of a lil wayne song.....:nono: I def cannot give you my vote so Peace |
wow.. kid.. u think id bite little wayne... no buddy.. you gatta read the entire line... and aint none of you kids even know about the stooges.. but its explained enough.. soo im not gonna complain.. cuz i know young blaze would bitch fest it if i did... ty for the votes tho..
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UUUUuuupppiinnn.....an u dont want beef an u sayin ima bitch fest cause u came wack an cant see it......wow......Avoid me please an we will have a rematch jus cause i wanna merk u again.......
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Actaully You did Bit a Lil Wayne Line So STFU ....Bcuz I always vote honestly ........And everybody knows who the 3 stooges are That shit was wack man ......Its jus the lines are played....and oh yeah if you gotta porblem with it then Go fuck yourself bcuz id merk you with my keyboard on Alt Bye :thumbup: |
Lol wow d/r;z..................................uh uppin.
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Voted For: White Powder
aiight... yung blay: Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays aiight. 5/10 U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes it's coo 6/10 U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's oh, damn this was hot. 8/10 U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers nah, not that great. 4/10 Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... coo... 5/10 28/50... not bad verse... it flowed pretty coo. good job tho Powder: Young…. Straight off the top…………………….. you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. it's coo... 5/10 Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... haha nice. 7 I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. lmao... dope 9/10 Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** haha.. nice... 6/10 Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** eh... not feelin' it much 4/10 31/50 overall tight verse. nice flow and shit. good punches. good battle. but v/WP |
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Voted For: White Powder
you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. 5...aight, not a real hard hittin punch, but you did throw in a nice little multi in the first line. Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments... Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments... 7...LMAO!!! i never heard a line like the 2nd one before, the speech impediment shit was funny!! I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you.. Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you.. 6...first line was kinda gay, trash lines are so played out, but the keyboard functions with the (/) was nice. Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** 6...decent wordplay with the flatline concept, also anothern ice multi in there. Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** 6...aight personal, not a bad concept and i think you pulled it off alright, but cud've been better. OVERALL: 30/50 Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays 5...kinda weak opener, the whole setup was choppy but the punch was nice, good wordplay. U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes 5...again, the setup line was wack as hell but the punch was nice with more good wordplay. U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's 5...NO!! ya losin it, givin you the L lines are fuckin played like fuck!! U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers 8...LMFAO!!! the setup was funny with the jewish shit, and the punch was hilarious!! Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu... 6...nice closer, some more good wordplay and a little multi in the first line. OVERALL: 29/50 werd.... nice battle... powder, some nice shit from you, some of the best i've seen you do, you had the punchlines in there and stayed consistent throughout the verse, had one real nice line but overall all were relatively hard hittin young...i dont think you brought ya "A" game in this one, you started off half-assed with wack setups and then good punches, you came together at the end, one funny ass line and you closed well, overall i think you weren't consistent enough in this battle. V/ - White Powder |
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This was feedback posted for White Powder
ah, i see W.P. back in text?...
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Voted For: White Powder
White- you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence... Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance.. ^^BLAH Streeeeeeeeeeeeetched but good start, made me laugh a little. Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already... 4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..** ^^Man u could worded this differently but is ok... Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry.. Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.*** ^^this made me laugh.... Young- U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes ^^Interestin...is cool punch and thats it the rest was fillers u fucka... V/Wp i neva gonna read a text battle again....This was the weakest fuckin battle eva |
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