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Twizted. vs Denied Truth
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-05-05 at 08:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Denied Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 10:37 PM.
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he set it up and didn't even show... Well iight Den.. Latez |
Nevermind he dont have to check in untill tomorrow..my fault.. |
Twizted. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 06:28 PM.
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Twizted. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 06:32 PM.
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Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes" Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop |
dropped wack cuz i fink he gwan no show... makes it easier on me... Chea..i know its weak... Church |
[center]Ayo Denied Truth
You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S... Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!... Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes... But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig) You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats... Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy) I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry... Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!... I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse... I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!... Blah |
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This was feedback posted for Denied Truth
Chekin Pollz......................................Nice Verse MA!
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Voted For: Twizted.
v/ Twizted BreakDown... Punches: Twizted (Denied Had None) Personals: Twizted (Got On Her Sig & Avy) Creativity: Denied (Liked Her Use Of Words) Multiples: Neither (Denied Had Some Not Alot Tho) Structure: Neither (Both Was Horrible & Off) Wordplay: Denied (Throughout Her Whole Verse) Vocab: Neither (Not Really Good On Both Sides) Nameplay: Twizted (Used ALOT) Open Lines: Twizted Middle Lines: Twizted Endin Lines: Twizted (Best Line Was Ya Closer) WHY? - Twizted Basically Dissed Her, Shorite Didnt Diss Him...Was Just Sorta Flowin Usin Wordplay, Not Ne Thing Directly At Him... RTF!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Denied Truth
Yo this was an ok battle. i think both of you did well. but i think denied truth had the best verse. i thought his structure was easier to read and therefore made for a better flow. He had better punchlines and stayed consistent with his verse in terms of quality of content. He focused on quality over quantity meanin he concentrated on getting his verse tight rather than having a longer verse. My favourite line in this battle was: "Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes"" because i thought the rhyme structure was nice and the vocab was at a higher level. "Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop" I thought that closer was nice for real, with one final insult to leave him with. I generally wasn't feelin Twisted verse as muc. Ain't nothin personal. Don't get me wrong i thought his verse was ok. i just prefered Denied Truth's verse. Peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Twizted.
Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes" 6...decent wordplay, threw in a nice multi in there to make a dope punch. Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. 4...weak here, the first line to me seems more like ya praisin him than dissin him. Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop 5...an ok punch, decent wordplay, but cud be far better. OVERALL: 15/30 (50%) You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S... Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!... 5...not feelin this opener, first line kinda filler and too basic. Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes... But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig) 6...LoL!! decent personal, very humurous. You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats... Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy) 6...again, nice personal this time playin off the avy, ok wordplay but still cud be better. I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry... Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!... 5...not feelin this, had a weak herb feel to it and more shit talkin than dissin. I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse... I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!... 4...weak, more self-glorifying than punching, not good!! OVERALL: 26/50 (52%) twizted came more consistent had a couple of played concepts, some mediocre lines, but sum decent personals in there to.... denied came consistent, but the consistensy was with basic punches, nuthin that really stood out to me, also didnt utilize the line limit to its advantage.... V/ - Twizted. |
Voted For: Twizted.
Yo ok twizted punches could of been a lot better but its not like you needed it.. Other guys shit was pretty awful if you ask me.. I dont really feel like going through everything bar for bar but to denioed truth, when your using multies you need to remember they still have to make sense.. And a lot of your stuff was jus words placed there that mean nothing.. Your shit had ok flow, but the aim in battles is to entertain the crowd most with jokes about the dude.. So you need to work on your creativity of punches and shit.. Konflicts was the clear winner in this one though.. |
Tell me one line that didn't make sense...that i used a multie in..if u can't understand dont vote...damn.. Anyways Uppin... Dolla |
Those 2 Votes Were Fine.... Rally Didn't Need tHem Takin Away... Shit. Church |
Voted For: Twizted.
Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes... But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig) ^^OK You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats... Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy) ^^^Ok...mediocre again like the bar before I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry... Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!... ^^suks Nutin impressive in ur verse....just mediocre. Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes" ^^suks Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. ^^wak Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop ^^Ok Well twiz's verse was all mediocre...ur verse was below. That mass murder line seemed to complement. Vote-Twizted |
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Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. Look at the next line fools...brusing eyes n ears whhen he drops..erybody get hurts reading his wack ass shhit...mass murder...anyone reading the shit gonna get dey eyes n ears bruised... Dumbfucks Uppin... |
Voted For: Twizted.
Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes" ^good multies, punch was weak Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. ^not a strong diss Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop ^everythin wuz good up until da concept in da second line ''no one wit skills wanna cop''....it ruined the bar overral ur verse wuz a little basic, nuthin really hit hard, good wordplay, but ur punz need sum work [no hate] You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S... Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!... ^good opening line, second wuz weak Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes... But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig) ^ nice pun & playin off da sig You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats... Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..( ^not feelin it I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry... Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!... ^naw, seemed forced I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse... I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!... ^^pretty decent closer, nuthin special Verse wuz str8 dawg, few decent concepts, nuthin 2 personal, few hard hittin punches 2, overall ur verse wuz more consistant Vote=Twizted rtf in my signature vs ''ackrite'' or vote will be removed |
^Aight... I Already Voted There... ...Chea...Uppin |
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Voted For: Twizted.
ok this was kinda a weak battle Twizted - i couldnt understand why ur verse wasnt that good until i read ur last line..then i realized that it made sense..ur tried a couple of personals which was cool but they didnt hit too hard..that nose line was kinda weak..other than that everything flowed well and u had a few punches in there.....6/10 Denied Truth - ur verse was kinda wack..quite possibly couldve been pre written since u didnt have no personals in it..u didnt even mention his name..ur 3rd lines couldve been a compliment so i dont know what u were thinkin with that..nothing really hit.....3/10 Twizted wins!!!!! |
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