Artisticamente r u fucking illiterate?
 

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground


Ok from that verse ur saying there are no punches and theres no flow
and to elevate
I think U need to elevate
Quite obviously flow there if u fucking read it
No punches !! hahahaa r u stupid u just dont understand them calling me wack wtdf? i would fucking own u iv seen ur shit u fucking newbie
Dont lyk bitchin but u dum a fuck

Dude You Suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

to be honest dizzie your structure needs some work and thats whats affecting your flow.......

beef thread yes...but better off perhaps in O/M...

...oh you ain't Dizzee...change ya name be yourself not someone else...Stan

^^ Thank You Mizz Fyre I Love You Hun.........................

just telling dizzee bout how he can improve..........

^^ THen why you trying to battle me?.............................

^^^what d'ya mean why.........?

Well Far As Your verse goes

The only thing really Wrong with your verse Is Your Structure ....But That Doesnt make anybody wack Always Do your bars like This If possible \/

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^ Thats Sloppy Structure

Hope you Use the advice

^^^true i don't think you're WACK at all..........work on your structure....come wit more complex punches and you'll be good...........

^^ Well shit i say he's WHACK..................and stanza you said you wanted to battle me right?.......


GET @ ME ON PM............

BULLSHIT HA HA!!! Structure Haz NOTHIN 2 Do Widda Flow @all Foo'z :shoot:

structure=[da way u prezent da rhymes, & da cleaner ur structure da more complex it looks]

Flow=Da Wording ov verses!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^^what d'ya mean flow comes from the wording of verses................

^^.................................*smh* @ kHAOZ....................

^^^lol i don't agree with anything that he said.........

^^ I wasn't saying you agree'd with him.............................shesh.

^^^lol wow....i wasn't saying that you said i was agreeing with him........i was just stating that fact....sheesh.....

:roll:

are you serious ?

Ok Ok Lemme stop Playing ......Well DO You Do Text

bcuz Im not doin any topicals or poetry battles bcuz im too busy droppin in the league

FIRST OF ALL.......THAT POST WITH THE *SMH* WASNT DIRECTED TO YOU IT WAS DIRECTED TO KHAOz.

^^^i know that................

I only do topicals..................but that dont mean i dont know punches...

:roll:

You Really Dont Know how do you ?

You Suck Man ......Peace You aint worthe my time

^^ Omfg....................prop In Text.......but Lets Go In Topicals......

^^^i gotta see that battle..........

^^ We can entertain you, if he dont duck.....................

Cant You Read .......Im Not doin any Topical/poetry Bcuz Im In The tourny But You Know what Ill Take Your Challenge Bcuz Your very over Rated

Ima set it up

^^ Over-rated!?.....................and Wtf?................set It Up We Gots To Discuss A Fucking Topic!

Thoughts Before Killing Someone

^^^thats an aight one.........

What Do You Think ?........

I dont like your topic.........Plus it's came ou of the blue, you might pre-wrote that.


Uh anyway


Speaking Dreamers
Man in the Mirror
Tame Brainstorms
Mastering Art
Left Behind
Ending Beginnings
High Tide
The Art of Breath
If the mirror could talk
Life's exit 24
Chasing Myself
Counting the moments
lost in stillness

^^ Yeah pik one of them........or go to

1.) Give it up
2.) You make me sick
3.) `Till I got high
4.) Memories never last
5.) 1:30 is too early to be too late
6.) No such thing as angels
7.) Livin in a house of glass
8.) Poker face
9.) Filled with silence
10.) Fake flames
11.) Stages of development
12.) An encounter of fist and face
13.) Play time is over
14.) Thoughts don't count
15.) Duck, duck, you
16.) Gimme my cheese
17.) No place like home
18.) Platonic love gone wrong
19.) A day in the life of an ant
20.) The pavement looks too thin to break my fall
21.) I'll cry if I want to
22.) Take my gun
23.) If you only knew...
24.) Excuses, excuses
25.) Simplicty inspires complex rhymes
26.) Two minutes too late
27.) The world is not enough
28.) Contraband controversy
29.) Illiterate barriers
30.) I never lose

yo i don't mean to interrupt but for our battle i choose
The pavement looks too thin to break my fall...........

^^ Done.................................And i edit more shit on there.

^^^yo where you get all these topics from?

Prewrote?

:roll:

Fuck it man I dont Even Want To BAttle you no more
Maybe we will meet in the league

Peace

^^^yo stan you ducking fam?

those are his same ones from his topic suggestions for the Higher Thinking League

^^ Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

i PUT THEM DOWN ANYWAY...............they're mines thank you!

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