Wicked One vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-06-05 at 11:28 PM

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Win by forfeit

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 09:58 PM.

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-05 02:21 PM.

For A MomenT I Thought You was Gonna Duck me Man .....But I Knew you was better than That

No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch...
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics...
Lace you just for kicks or much less...
Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect...
Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though...
Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals...
Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers...
You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers...
Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain...
I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains...

Voted For: Stanza

Yo I Hit You with 28 Punchez 14 Times so You feel 48 effects
Im Makin You Feel This In The Inside Like My name Was Sex
5...kinda weak...the punch was nuthin to do with the setup, it seemd filler, and usin his record that way wasn't all that good, you shud've used it some other way.
I Thought You Said You Was Leaving so Why Is You Back Bitch
I Guess Lickin all Them Asses Made you Talk A Whole Lot of shit
5...kinda funny. the punch was relevant to the setup but it was around a played concept.
My Bad Did I Hurt Your Feelings I meant to Say Lickin up to Dicks
Washing Chicken Wit Yo tongue is the only Time U ever Kissed A Chick
6...better, concept again is kinda played although not as much, bar was kinda basic and cud be worded better.
The Bars are comin Down to a End Like Twix Sitting In The Sun
I Bet If Someone Pulled out a Hotdog Wicked Would Open His Buns
7...werd!! LoL!!! this bar was funny...hot dog lines have been done before but not like this, funny ass bar!!
Define you?....Whenever In Conflict You Always Get Kicked In Your Ass
Always On a Niggas Dick So Thats How He gets His Ease Ghetto Pass
6...aight closer, you spelt his name out but it really had no effect with the punch, still good though.

OVERALL: 29/50


No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch...
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics...
5...weak opener, a nice multi in the opening line but the whole punch lacked any kind of real power.
Lace you just for kicks or much less...
Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect...
4...GAY!!! hasn't anyone told you biggie and pac lines are played, and usin them both in one line is ultra played!!
Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though...
Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals...
5...ok bit of wordplay in the second line, field goals concept was aight but not used that well.
Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers...
You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers...
6...decent bar, a little multi, a nice setup with the punch although cud've been better, basic wordplay to but still nice.
Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain...
I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains...
6...again, decent wordplay, the rhymin was kinda basic....setup was relevant to the punch, overall an average closer!!

OVERALL: 26/50


average battle.....
both had some played concepts
stanza was more consistent with his punches....tried seplling the name for a punch but didnt pull it off, also the play on his record was weak.......one funny ass new approach to a used concept so that was ok......wicked one came too basic, threw in some multies, but lacked in punches and thats what wins battles.......

V/ - Stanza

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Voted For: Stanza

good punchlines and rhymes by stanza wicked one had sum tight shit too but not many good rhymes

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Jus Checkin This 4 myself .....................My Other account got banned SO LOL ..

Voted For: Stanza

Ima give my vote to stanza. Although this was kinda close battle.

Wicked One
Wordplay was ok
Structure was kinda outta order.
Lines were a bit stretched out
Punches were decent

Stanza
Wordplay was real good.
Opener was good also
He won this battle because his punches were more harder-pause-

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Nice Famz!N Nice @ Stanza but Check'n Pollz Cuz WICKED in ma crew!

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checking da pollz & bumping da battle 4 krrrrreeew

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Voted For: Stanza


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Voted For: Wicked One

aight this came down to the wire.
since what one lacked the other had.
So I had to choose which one was more in importance.

Stanza had personals.The opener's SETUP was
better then the punchline itself,which is not a good thing.
the flow was slightly strech althogh so was wicked ones.
structure was good but I don't pay attention to that as much.
plus the hotdog and buns line is hella played.but I guess
it gave you some points anyway.Overall u get a 4/10

Wicked one.

aight your punches were alot better.Seemed consecutive
with wordplay.Though you lacked in personals (didn't have none) but it kept it comin with disses wordplay and flow too
which lacks alot in text battles.So you did pretty good in my book.Just next time come with more personals.This verse could of been used against me and made sense.Just change the name.I give u a 7/10

vote/wicked one.

peace

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Voted For: Wicked One

boom! dudes got my vote... honestly stanza's punches missed horribly... played concepts and no kinda structure or multi's even... shit was wack to me...

i didnt think wicked one was wonderfull, but he was above average.. i got a feel for a flow with all those multi's they just roll smoovely... i didnt get the catholic line.. alot of ur ppunches i had to think about... but ferreal.. the feild goals and forgetfull shoppers lines were tite.. no doubt... curtains line was meeehhh didnt really like that, spose to have a strong finisher... but this dude has it no questionnn.....

v/ wicked one...

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Voted For: Wicked One

this one has to go to wicked one.no hate, i just think he won. stanza'z verse was just really wierd. he had some odd punches that didnt hit hard at all. just because you put someones name in a line or something about them in a line doesnt make it hard hitting. i understood all the lines but they were just kinda wack to me. stanzas lines werent really played, but his punches werent really hitting or impressive at all. his concepts were weak like the licking chicken line was terrible and you fucking know it homie... haha
that whole acronym shyt is pretty lame too.

wicked one's verse was decent but he had a couple of lines that stood out. the missed field goals line, the forgetful shoppers line and the calling it curtains line were all funny. that calling it curtains line was kinda self glorifying but it was still pretty good.
in this battle, there were a few multies that stood out in wicked one's verse but none really in stanza's and overall, it just came down to punches because each flow was kinda off...
anyways, wicked's punches were waay better which puts him as the winner of this battle
as for stanza, drop some of the played concepts (acronyms sucks)
V/ Wicked One

Voted For: Stanza

stanza- good punches but some punches were wack and unneeded, alotta weird shit but i guess that helps for originality, lol, not really any multies, good personals, decent verse, nice opener and closer also....

wicked one- good flow, but bad structure decent multies, the punches were also decent but no personals in this verse good opener,, iffy closer though

heres the breakdown

opener-tie
closer-S
multies-tie
punches-S
personals-S
structure-S
vocab-W
werdplay-S

my vote goes to stanza

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Aye Man Can We Jus close this battle man bcuz the votes aint gettin nowhere and I need the battle space

So

I forfiet - You Can Have it closed