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Sixth Sense 06-04-05 01:52 PM

Kon vs Pen N' Paper
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 02:22 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

System 06-04-05 01:53 PM

Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 01:53 PM.

System 06-04-05 01:55 PM

Kon has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 01:55 PM.

icy-hot 06-04-05 02:14 PM

I'll inscribe ya name in you, with a tech and a knife
So in Rap, u'r paper N pen i'll be unknown...for the rest of ya life..........
u talk about this is beef?, N cant flow hot even if u mix ya flow with limpton-tea
bullets up-lift-him plez... N drop ya name like i cut down ya family tree....
Yo I'll cut this bitch'n..Give you some ruff incisions
but like killah dream, u about to get murder in my vision....
Nigga I bomb lives, you know that the Don's right
U couldnt 'organize a punch-line' If u bartended on prom night.....
My punches off the chains, while u'rs i can chew-it
I just beat u to a 'pulp', and didnt 'concentrate' to do it....

u bitch nigga........... EZZZZ!!!!!!!!!

Sixth Sense 06-04-05 02:15 PM

This guy is whack RV knows it and especially he knows
Fuck wit me and u’ll be lookin like the next Terry Schiavo
Yo this bitch wanna battle me he about to get hurt
Cuz this is just the second bar and this nigga is merked
I get on the internet and to rapverse and to battle text
This guy is a geek, no bitches, he gets on it to “cyber sex”
Kon, the only con is the people reading ur wack ass verse
Don’t even need to bring hard on here knew he was EZ first
Think u hard and ur rhymes are hard man everyone knows u wrong
Get outta this site bitch cuz RV is a place where u don’t just belong

icy-hot 06-04-05 02:18 PM

nice try thou.......

keep elevateing.........

if i see some more improvement documented murder is looking for ill-heads....

just elevate some more then holla back.....

Bizarre 06-04-05 02:19 PM

Voted For: Kon

Kon....you merked this son of a bitch

icy-hot 06-04-05 02:53 PM

that vote probley wont count cuz u need to explain it.....

but thanks anyways why dont u reply and explain it now so it wont get DQ u know.....

Dizzee Rascal 06-04-05 04:16 PM

Voted For: Kon

I'll inscribe ya name in you, with a tech and a knife
So in Rap, u'r paper N pen i'll be unknown...for the rest of ya life..........

Ok opener

u talk about this is beef?, N cant flow hot even if u mix ya flow with limpton-tea
bullets up-lift-him plez... N drop ya name like i cut down ya family tree....

Decent

Yo I'll cut this bitch'n..Give you some ruff incisions
but like killah dream, u about to get murder in my vision....

Decent

Nigga I bomb lives, you know that the Don's right
U couldnt 'organize a punch-line' If u bartended on prom night.....

Played like the jin punch

My punches off the chains, while u'rs i can chew-it
I just beat u to a 'pulp', and didnt 'concentrate' to do it....

Played aswell

VS

This guy is whack RV knows it and especially he knows
Fuck wit me and u’ll be lookin like the next Terry Schiavo

Ok opener

Yo this bitch wanna battle me he about to get hurt
Cuz this is just the second bar and this nigga is merked

Filler

I get on the internet and to rapverse and to battle text
This guy is a geek, no bitches, he gets on it to “cyber sex”

Weak

Kon, the only con is the people reading ur wack ass verse
Don’t even need to bring hard on here knew he was EZ first

ok

Think u hard and ur rhymes are hard man everyone knows u wrong
Get outta this site bitch cuz RV is a place where u don’t just belong

Ok

Punches - Kon
Personals - NA
Flow = PnP
Metaphors = Kon

Overall - Kon

Ok close because PnP didnt come full potential where as kon had some played punches but they were punches as apposed to filler
Close battle
Stay up

Sixth Sense 06-04-05 07:59 PM

damn i guess i didnt bring it hard when i shoulda oh well uppin

icy-hot 06-05-05 01:23 PM

upp'in this battle for more votes ya..........................

Sixth Sense 06-05-05 04:22 PM

uppin pplz close this down ok

PreZidict 06-05-05 07:37 PM

Voted For: Kon

Pen N' Paper
This guy is whack RV knows it and especially he knows
Fuck wit me and u’ll be lookin like the next Terry Schiavo
2/5...soft punch n played concept fam
Yo this bitch wanna battle me he about to get hurt
Cuz this is just the second bar and this nigga is merked
0/5...that wasnt a hit at all
I get on the internet and to rapverse and to battle text
This guy is a geek, no bitches, he gets on it to “cyber sex”
2/5...coulda worded this personal a lil betta
Kon, the only con is the people reading ur wack ass verse
Don’t even need to bring hard on here knew he was EZ first
3/5...not strong once again
Think u hard and ur rhymes are hard man everyone knows u wrong
Get outta this site bitch cuz RV is a place where u don’t just belong
1/5.....no

Kon
I'll inscribe ya name in you, with a tech and a knife
So in Rap, u'r paper N pen i'll be unknown...for the rest of ya life..........
5/5 best line so far...nice concept
u talk about this is beef?, N cant flow hot even if u mix ya flow with limpton-tea
bullets up-lift-him plez... N drop ya name like i cut down ya family tree....
3/5...nice thought, coulda worded dis betta
Yo I'll cut this bitch'n..Give you some ruff incisions
but like killah dream, u about to get murder in my vision....
3/5...again coulda been worded betta
Nigga I bomb lives, you know that the Don's right
U couldnt 'organize a punch-line' If u bartended on prom night.....
2/5....played concept
My punches off the chains, while u'rs i can chew-it
I just beat u to a 'pulp', and didnt 'concentrate' to do it....
5/5...anotha tight line, good finish

punches-Kon
personals-paper
creativity-Kon
multiz-none
metas-Kon
vocab-paper

overall- Kon

Sixth Sense 06-06-05 09:27 AM

uppin battle close this down plz

icy-hot 06-06-05 11:23 AM

i will pm strobe to close this battle down with a TKO if u want to or just wait for the rest of the votes to come in???

Sixth Sense 06-06-05 12:12 PM

yea go ahead yea do that man u merked ill admit it but neways im not good at text

icy-hot 06-06-05 02:08 PM

no dout honest man i like it.....

we peoples man no beef.....

but dont try to get my crew members to drop out and join u'r crew word....

PrahJect 06-06-05 02:44 PM

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Yo i give Pen dis one homie....he came harder...stronger punches and it landed harder....Yo kon you kept on sayin u were gonna use violence but what Ive learnt is tht to say tht over the net is stupid....ya feel me////pen ure verse was aiite but lacked in flow....half of it was funny n shit but the others were played out...for e.g.

I get on the internet and to rapverse and to battle text
This guy is a geek, no bitches, he gets on it to “cyber sex”

This was jokes.....but then however:


Yo this bitch wanna battle me he about to get hurt
Cuz this is just the second bar and this nigga is merked

Self gloryfying....no reall punch

Think u hard and ur rhymes are hard man everyone knows u wrong
Get outta this site bitch cuz RV is a place where u don’t just belong

Normally a battle is marked out by the best opening and ender...this ender was weak man.....neways keep up...pretty week battle but this goes to pen n paper

PrahJect 06-06-05 02:46 PM

Yo i cant vote sorry...didnt realise kon was in my crew.....yo man take away my vote

PrahJect 06-06-05 02:48 PM

Yo i cant vote sorry...didnt realise kon was in my crew.....yo man take away my vote

sorry bout that but kon still thougght he shudda won.....yo man no hrd feelings

Sixth Sense 06-06-05 03:38 PM

yea thats aight then this battle is gon get closed anyways so kon won he won this battle neways i came very weak in this but thats ok 1

Terumoto 06-06-05 06:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Kon
 
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