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Young Dollar vs K-Trini
Battle Rules:
10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-05-05 at 04:49 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 07:21 PM.
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...847#post2184847
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Look nigga................ K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight Explanation- of barz 1st bar- You have to be dead to be able to touch another ghost. 2nd bar-He said in a thread he'd rather lick his mom pussy......check for authentification in da link N in da quote for proof. 3rd bar-He said somethin about drinkin moms period or drink ya dads cum. N when i say son im callin him my son cuz i own that nigga N he into incest. 4th bar-explanatory N pretty much a filler 5th bar- He aint shit to me or my girl so she even needs to get somebody to handle her light weight in which her case would be him. Ayo drop some hot shit so you wont get carried to badly. Good Luck |
K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 07:30 PM.
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Ayo nigga where u at............ man if u duck dis battle its gon hurt cha record
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This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ |
True story.......................good luck......niggas gotta be spokin crack
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damn....I barely made it....I lost track a time .T's why I took long.
Man....u really scrutinized my previous posts. |
and for one thing NiggaVille is ATL dumbass........know ya shit atleast i aint scared to put up where im from
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Loook at my name retard..........K-TRINI.TRinidad.I'm the first west indian rapper.Believe it homie.
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U forgot New York Trinitiy ave dumbass.....but any ways no hate N keep elevatin
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ight....no hate.
Get some fuckin votes up in this bitch. |
upppin............................................ ........
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Voted For: Young Dollar
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ Decent opener Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ Lmao thats dirty str8 personal Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ Ok personal again Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ Ok True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight Decent closer VS This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ Weak Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ Str8 Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ Ok My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ Weak To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ Lmao doesnt hit but had me rollin Personals = Dolla Punches = Dolla Flow = Both Metaphors/Similes = Dolla Amusement = Both Overall = Dolla Please return the favour in my sig or another battle please Stay up |
Preciate da vote famn N i gotcha ...........uppin for more votes
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Voted For: Young Dollar
k-trini i liked your verse. if you were going up against someone in a lower caliber then young dollar then you koulda won. but he killed ya with the shit you wrote to him. young dollar i liked the opener. ending felt kinda like you just were tryin ta finsih. but on the whole definitly a nice verse. v/young dollar |
Voted For: K-Trini
-Young Dollar- K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ ^^^^ 7/10 good opener.. good punch.. little bit of a played concept Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ ^^^^ 6/10 not feeling this at all Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ ^^^^ 7/10 first line is pretty much a cut-n-paste.. should of worded it different Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ ^^^^ 8/10 ya best line.. good punch True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight ^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch 34/50 = %68 -K-Trini- This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ ^^^^ 7/10 haha.. good opener.. lackin in the punch Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ ^^^^ 9/10 hot bar.. hard punch.. good flow Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ ^^^^ 7/10 ehh self-glory.. could of been better My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ ^^^^ 6/10 weak To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ ^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch 35/50 = %70 -:No hate just honest opinion:- |
Voted For: Young Dollar
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight Pretty Decent Verse, Few Iight Linez Dawg, Nuthin 2 Spectacular. Personalz Were Strong, U Juz Lacked Da Wordplay In Yo Punz 2 Really Come Hard [but u did enuff 2 get da win so its all good] This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ Not A Good Verse, Boring Disses, Closer Sucked Ass, Alot Ov Self Glory, No Personalz & Uncreative Punches, Flow Wuz Off Bcuz Ov Da Seperation Ov Yo Barz, Juz Wuznt Feeling Yo Verse Vote=Young Dolla, Much Better Verse Return Da Favor Or Vote Will Be Removed, Good Job Yall |
Uppin for more votes Lets hurry up N vote for me so we can close dis bia
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Voted For: Young Dollar
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ OK OPENER, PRETTY GOOD. Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ NICE PERSONAL, WITHOUTE THE QUOTE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN WACKED AND PLAINED, AND NOT FEELIN "MUSHY" Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ AGAIN NICE HITTIN PERSONAL... Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ MEH WAS OK.... True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight NOT FEELIN IT... ________________________________________________ This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ OK PERSONAL, NO PUNCH THOUGH. Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ NOPE, SO WHAT IF HE LETS YA TAKE A BREATH... Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ WTF.....NOT HITTING. My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ NO PUNCHES IN YA BARS, MAINLY FILLERS...HERE AGAIN To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ YOUR BEST BAR, WAS OK. _________________________________________________- TRINI, YOU ELEVATED...BUT YOUR STILL WACK ONE PUNCH (YOUR CLOSER HIT) BUT THE REST WERE FILLERS REALLY. STRUCTURE, VOCAB AND FLOW WAS PRETTY MINIMAL TOO. YD GETS THIS DUE TO HIS PUNCHES HITTING, AND COMING HARDER WITH A LOT OF PERSONALS. YOUNG, RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED. YOU HAVE 3 DAYS. |
Preciate the votes lets end dis battle N bring da win back to Dollar
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rtf man, honestly.
Or it WILL be DQ;ed!...... |
Ay uppin on dis battle RTF returned homie..........GIVE A NIGGA A WIN
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Voted For: Young Dollar
Battle Was WEAK!But Young Came A Lil Better! V/Dollar _____________Explanation_________________--- K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ ^7/10 Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ ^7/10 Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ ^Sick(As in VOMITIN) LoL 6/10 Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ ^alright 7/10 True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight ^Alright 7/10 ______________K-trini'z EXPLANATION_____________ This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ ^Kewl 7/10 Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ ^Umm Weak 6/10 Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ ^??6/10 My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ ^6/10 To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ ^WTF 6/10 ________________________- Opener:Dollar Middle:Dollar Closer:Dollar Punches:Dollar Vocab:Dollar No Need No More To Say!Kewl Battle~! [Size=4]RTF In my Link With XQUIZITLYRICIST]@yall! OR THIS VOTE GETS REMOVED! |
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