Strange night(daubs diss)
 

It appeared to be just one of em usual days/
I was one my way home,right after gettin laid/
But then some white fat chick with buck teeth/
Ran her flabby ass straight in tha middle of the street/
I purposely hit the gear,sumtin that ugly didn't deserve to live/
But she was so big,that when I hit her,my car began to skid/
I stepped out tha car and saw that the bitch had a necklace/
And it said Lauren on it,so I took it to pawn it at that place/
I search her pockets,found 10 bucks and a envolope/
Written on it was "Fuck U daubs,there's no hope/
Inside the envelope,was a letter and a picture of a white boy/
The boy was daubs,and he was holding with barbie doll/
He was even uglier than the bitch that I just killed/
To see a boy with that much acne,left me standing still/
I ripped the picture up and began reading the letter/
The start of the letter said "To daubs,it's for the better/

"Listen daubs...I hate to be like this but I gotta be direct/
Shelly told me she tried to give ya head,but ya couldn't erect/
And you need to know that ur white,so stop tryna be black/
And just give up rapping as a whole,cause your whack/
I really feel thaT ur acne is hideous and needs to be treated/
I know you might be cryin like a bitch by now,but keep reading it/
See I want a real man.not no sensitive white acne crazy nerd like you/
So I'm saying this shit really clear to you daubs...Fuck U/"

Afterward I ripped the letter up and went straight to mi casa/
Put on porn while listening to a CD while it plays trinidad tasa/~1~

you are wack...
why go on about someone dead you prick...
expect a diss.

Cause that someone dead was someone you cried about on the net.Go head....make one bout me....I'll just keeping coming back.

but your shit...you battled me, and i absolutely whored you...

so get off my dick

and i didnt cry on the net, i cryed in real life, just think if it were your mother, or wen you older your daughter (if you ever mature). cause it could well be...and i hope it is!

This isn't right, for real. I mean, I know it's the net and all, but you have to have some morals. And dissing someone who died, is just wrong. Oh, and the OM was bad. Some parts didn't rhyme, flow was choppy, etc...

That shit was tasteless.from the content alone, i don't think you even deserve feedback.
Not necessarily because you're wack, cos everyone grows as a lyricist as time passes, but because you took the cheapest shot imaginable.
You should be feelin real bad about yourself right about now..........................

rofl wat da fuck wrong wit you dude you on some real ill shit writin about sum shit like dis its very disrespectful

yo nigga u got some fuckin nerve sayin that shit.. ur the dumest mutha fucka i eva seen.. u dissin someone who dead, u saw how much he cared bout her.. u gunna get a dis from me too bitch...

this was kinda foul but then again, all's fair in love and war. i ain't a big fan of daubs eitha but i wouldn't have even gone this low..all i gotta say tho in tha words of madea" u goin to hellll!!!!!"........wow mayne, just........wow

yeh, i appreaciate...some beef is temp but i have respect for you now^

but fuck him, its ova nothin too called me out and i murked him.

dis shit was whack...i thought i had shit to learn damn..how u gonna talk about a dead girl and u wanna diss someone cuz they are white im a white female and ill murder your punk ass

your new, so you know what he hatin on:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189893

First off,fuck my mother and if I ever have children ....then fuck em too.And second,This verse was a freestyle people.

And fo all you people who wanna judge me.Listen....people have taken advantage of me my whole life.I got no compassion anymore.I hate evereybody in this world.I've fell in love and had my heart broken so many times by insensitive girls.I been picked on and laughed at in elementary and junior high.It's those people who made me who I am.And fo the guy who said I'll go to hell......fuck you.....you don't fuckin know me u prick.If I do go to hell for this shit...I don't give a fuck.My life is already hell/~1~

daubs i can grasp most of da story from what da other cats wrote

soory dats not nebody problem dat ppl took advantage of yo life blah blah blah at dis whining shit so stop bitchin n make ya like betta errybody got problems so wat makes yo problem so fuckin special dat u can dis sum1 cus sum1 special to dem died dats jus disrespectful and rude

word to what mami said yo it aint dat nigga fault u was teased and dissed

fuck who? if that's directed at me then u might as well be committin suicide dawg, no hate or nothin but if u test me i WILL run u outta RV

wat he needs to realize...or wat all of you need to realize is that nobody is as special as daubs was makin this bitch appear to be.

And

I am makin my life better.....by takin out my anger on everyone.

but your gettin laughed at coz ur rhymes are jokes!!

who are you......u the owner a this site or sumtiN?

If wanna do sumtin....let's battle.

Lol.....yo that was nice was to disrespect homie.Fo real my stomach's bout to burst.I'm rolling on the floor right now.


Yeah right.

yea and da thang is you neva gon have good luck or wateva so i pray fo u honestly cus u need it go to church it will amaze you of how it change yo life trust

it wasnt disrespetct it was the truth.

I tried religion......but it didn't work.I prayed and prayed for God to help me...but wat did he do.And fo those that wanna say "ooh,...but make it better"....I'v etried to for a really long time.But now....I'll just say fuck it.Maybe I might get so much bad luck that I'll die.That'd be nice.

Well All i have to say is...............YOU MUST BE UGLY, I MEAN 1 UGLY BOI

:laugh2: :laugh2: :laugh2:

^^^^lmmfao rofl......

Dont pray for him, god dont like ugly neways...............

ima pray fo him jus ccus i feel srry fo him no matta how ugly he is

even if he look like chubaka

^^ Lol..................Well disrespecting the dead wtf?.......GO to hell, yes i said go to hell.


O and BQ you still playing tennis?.............;)

lmao.......son NO NO u do NOT wanna do that.....u commitin suicide. i'm not even a battle rapper and this is gonna be easy...just to make it good tho i'll set it up to where u got til tuesday to post. i'll have my verse up by monday.

lol n how do you kno i play tennis

^^ You told me.........................................

wen? u must have an alias

Shut the fuck up bout suicide.We on the net bitch.Set tha fuckin battle up

i don't give a fuck if we in ya momma bedroom and i'm fuckin her in tha ass while u video tapin it so u can have somethin to beat off to...you'll get dealt with easily

:laugh2: :spit: rofl......hahaha

Wow...

This was truly pathetic man. It doesn't matter what your life has been like, or how much you have been thru. NOTHING, and I mean NOTHING gives ANYBODY the right to take shots at a fallen loved one. That is a bitch move, and will never get you any respect in rap. I know you say you wouldn't care if the shit happend to you, but that is bullshit, because you obviously care if you are going this far to make everyone else feel as shitty as you do. You are a poor excuse for an emcee. This is just disgusting how you could have that little respect for a loved one who has perished. I don't have anything else to say to you.

Well ya know wat....I dun give a fuck about wat it is u had to say about me.I'ma say wat I wanna say.This situation would never happen to me ....simply because I have no loved ones in my life.So Fuck off.And just you but every one of u haters.Fuck off.

god damn....hop off the dude's dick.