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K-Trini vs .:F.ate:.
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-07-05 at 09:47 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
.:F.ate:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 09:52 PM.
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i'll post as soon as u accept... i ain't wastin my time
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K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-05 06:36 PM.
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lmao...let's get dis crackin
check it.... why am i battlin dude he already get's murked by masses this nigga couldn't see me if he took a look thru urkel's glasses he says he's been outcasted, his bitch ass heart's been torn dawg, give tha bullshit a rest and apologize for bein born talkin about "why nobody like me, why bitches wont fuck me well dig..it might have somethin to do with you bein so fuckin ugly so what everybody hates you get used to it nigga be a man even if you don't get pussy you still got ya left and right hand it's about twenty people on rapverse wishin that you would die prefferably by gettin hit by a train but I'll settle for a suicide admit it nigga i'm a menace, consider me tha worst problem u eva had u've officially been sonned consider me tha best father u neva had honestly, i really don't need a fuckin closin line for such a lame i'mma just drop ya silly ass, similar to how 50 did tha game chea...it's a wrap |
lmfao.....a no show like i thought.................
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Cock ya weapons,erect ya fists,and pucker ya lips/
As K-trini unbuckles his belt fo F.A.T.E. to kiss/ I could be right in ya face,and you'd still miss/ Starin at a blank page is how ya lonely ass reminists/ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193877 ^^^^^ Actin tough makin a bunch a threats fromya keyboard/ When ya capable aplacing more casualties than coldwar/ F.A.T.E sayin some dumb shit bout dissin him is suicide/ Well , I dissed you bitch,so where's the homicide?/ *Look at his prof. to get these lines Occupation is gettin pussy,yet you got no job like a bum/ So that pussy can only be the invisible woman or mum/ Ur bio's "U don't know me"????,man fuck you!!!/ It's not like anyone here wanna know you/ Ur skills progress at the same rate of a NY gridlock/ Put it together,I be smocking cigars,you smoke cock/ Ur a white boy,thinking ya ebony and ya can mack/ So I'll lyrically scorch ya ass to discolor it black/ Ya got attitude like ya moms fed ya her prostate juice/ Under her skirts like a rest room,allowing public use/ This shit's better than gettin head from lips wit gloss/ To fuck you up,I dun need guns ,I use dental floss/ The denouement a this battle is as imment as death/ Ur an ametuer to rap as pre schoolers are to sex/ |
Voted For: .:F.ate:.
fate you got a lot of hard puchlines and a very good flow, I loved the whole verse you did a really good job nigga k-trini you didnt come very hard in the puchlines, yu had a nice flow but thats the best thing you had in there so my vote is 4 fate.... |
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This was feedback posted for .:F.ate:.
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.
aight i liked this shit the disses were hot and the structure was good...the 50/game diss was gold |
Voted For: .:F.ate:.
K-Trini: Cock ya weapons,erect ya fists,and pucker ya lips/ As K-trini unbuckles his belt fo F.A.T.E. to kiss/ Wack...2/10 I could be right in ya face,and you'd still miss/ Starin at a blank page is how ya lonely ass reminists/ Wack..2/10 Actin tough makin a bunch a threats fromya keyboard/ When ya capable aplacing more casualties than coldwar/ You Made Him Look Good LoL..2/10 F.A.T.E sayin some dumb shit bout dissin him is suicide/ Well , I dissed you bitch,so where's the homicide?/ :-/....Come On...2/10 Occupation is gettin pussy,yet you got no job like a bum/ So that pussy can only be the invisible woman or mum/ Weak..Weak..2/10 Ur bio's "U don't know me"????,man fuck you!!!/ It's not like anyone here wanna know you/ WTF!? Throw A Punch..2/10 Ur skills progress at the same rate of a NY gridlock/ Put it together,I be smocking cigars,you smoke cock/ Fucking Gay!...2/10 Ur a white boy,thinking ya ebony and ya can mack/ So I'll lyrically scorch ya ass to discolor it black/ Jesus..Go Kill Yourself..2/10 Ya got attitude like ya moms fed ya her prostate juice/ Under her skirts like a rest room,allowing public use/ Ban This Fag off Rapverse Please..2/10 This shit's better than gettin head from lips wit gloss/ To fuck you up,I dun need guns ,I use dental floss/ :'( It Hurts To Read....2/10 The denouement a this battle is as imment as death/ Ur an ametuer to rap as pre schoolers are to sex/ Finally The Torement Is Over! 2/10 Overall: 20/100 F.ATE: why am i battlin dude he already get's murked by masses this nigga couldn't see me if he took a look thru urkel's glasses Ugh...Ok..3/10 he says he's been outcasted, his bitch ass heart's been torn dawg, give tha bullshit a rest and apologize for bein born Blah...4/10 talkin about "why nobody like me, why bitches wont fuck me well dig..it might have somethin to do with you bein so fuckin ugly Haha..Funny but Not Hard Hitting..4/10 so what everybody hates you get used to it nigga be a man even if you don't get pussy you still got ya left and right hand Played...3/10 it's about twenty people on rapverse wishin that you would die prefferably by gettin hit by a train but I'll settle for a suicide Weak..2/10 admit it nigga i'm a menace, consider me tha worst problem u eva had u've officially been sonned consider me tha best father u neva had Weak..2/10 Overall: 18/60 My Vote - F.ATE For Actual Punches and Better Verse. ~R~ |
again??....I got beef wit you pimpress....stop votin in my battles.
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.
K-Trini what can i say about ur verse?..it sucked!..u had no punches..ur personals were sorry.. Occupation is gettin pussy,yet you got no job like a bum/ So that pussy can only be the invisible woman or mum/ Ur bio's "U don't know me"????,man fuck you!!!/ It's not like anyone here wanna know you/ are u serious?..ur whole verse was lame.....3/10(just because u showed up) F.ate much better than trini's verse..using lines like ur first one are kinda played out..but it was still better than other dudes whole verse..every bar u came with an attack..couldve been harder punches but they were much better than ur opponent.....6/10 F.ate wins!!!!! |
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uppin 4 this easy ass win......................bitches
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Voted For: K-Trini
GOOD: Flow - Tie Structure - Tie Punchlines - Tie vocab - K-Trini Wordplay - K-Trini Nameplay - K-Trini BAD: forced Rhymes - no Forced Multis - no Non Sence - Fate CREATIVITY Theme Battle - no Creative Punches - K-Trini creative multi's - no PERSONALS: K-Trini got mo hard hittin personals on this, although Fate droped sum good ones too OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: K-Trini Closing: Tie COMMENT: K-Trini took the battle, but Fate seemed to made a nice effort on this, both of ya'll verses wuz good K-Trini: 8/10 Fate: 6.8/10 V/ K-Trini RTF for more honest votes... c'mon man.. Links on my sight |
^^^^^I meant... Links on m y Sig..... LOL I don't know whut I was feelin' LOL
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lmfao....u bought that vote or somethin? uppin anyway........
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black navigator wit tha porno show in.....
Up and down and Up they goin.... |
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.
my vote goes to fate he had betta punches and a betta verse dis was a good battle actually i thought ktrini couldnt write but he got potential and hes good but he didnt have hard hittin punches like fate did and ktrini take da lines out of the end of ya verse it mess up ya structure and elevate on da vocab good battle return the favor or i will have dis vote removed link in sig |
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