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Spektikul vs RobKilla
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 06-08-05 at 09:33 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 11:16 AM.
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Fuckin herbs...half-assed key to show this kid how I do...
Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger...:thumbup: Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor (bore) Explanations
(For some of yall dumbasses)
Bar 1 = Look at his avy (self-explainitory) Bar 2 = Needle+Thread (Battle thread) Bar 3 = Lost to Hotshh! and lost (first vet he battled aka first loss) Bar 4 = He prolly wont show (Inactivity/herb) Bar 5 = Flipped+Rob (Bore aka Bor) hense the yawning line Vote Bitches! |
RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 06:08 AM.
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his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that
his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats (urban cats) wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist here: -urban cats(herbin cats)= city pussy -his member title is "one of a kind" |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
Opener - Spek > made me laff/ good personl
Closer - Rob > pretty gid Punches - Spek had better left hookz Personals - Spek hit deep Metas - closest was the "sillyest whore" > But i dont think that qualifies so >none. Multies - Dint c any Vocab - Tie Structure - Spex was tighter obviously Comedy - Got more chukls from spex, I think this ones fairly ovious. V/ Spek |
uppin this shyt... if u wanted to vote... then tell strobe in tha emergency battle forum thingie... i dont know if its well explained tho...
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This was feedback posted for RobKilla
polll checkin.......... u won.....last two bars= fiya
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Voted For: Spektikul
Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger ^^decent opener/name play This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread ^^better, basic thou Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned ^^lol,.nice personal Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest ^^eh, got it but on the weaker side You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor (bore) ^^that had ohh factor, nice bar spek . overall opener n closer were nice only one line i wasnt feelin pretty consistent verse, a little basic in areas but you picked it up late-on... . . his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats (urban cats) ^^nice opener wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group ^^nice nameplay you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings ^^nah, dont play off your own bar..diss him this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small ^^woulda been dope had he you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist ^^decent.... . overall you almost matched spek bar for bar/personal for personal,but his opener/3rd bar n closer were a tad bit better, this was damn close thou.. . rob n spek this is an honest vote, im no d/r but if you feel its not a good vote, just delete it.... . no hate,great personal battle, props rob, youve elevated alot |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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Voted For: Spektikul
Ok Both came just average in my eyes with punches, no proper wordplay. Speks structure was better in my opinion and what i think got him this battle was his use of personals throughout. Personals and punches win battles so thats what got him the win here. Rob your Bars ryhed and you did have personals, but no hard hitting punches in my opinion... no hate to you but in the future use more creative wordplay and better punches. Spek RTF so i dont need to DQ this vote!! you have 3 days. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Spektikul
iight this was a pretty weak battle for killa.. as usual even with a key spek u came hard.. lets go into a bit of detail shall we? spek - your verse was pretty sick, flowed realli well, easy to read the whole way through, that can make or break a verse, your punches hit hard and often, where as robs were weak and skatterd, your personals were coo and your vocab has a good range so thats tite, structure was flawless and u had some funny shit in there.. good verse.. pretty dope 8.5/10 rob - you got nothin on spek, he proved it just keyin you, your verse was to genralised, vocab needs to be extended, punches need to be directed more and more consistant, need to work on some more personals and get ur structure workin a bit more, also your flow was a bit off like i said that by itself can turn a match... elevate.. not bad 6.5/10 overall skep u got this one homie.. no hate just how i saw it comphrehensive win.. check ur pm yo.. |
This was feedback posted for RobKilla
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dayum... if this isnt DR then i dont know what is |
Voted For: RobKilla
this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist vs. Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger ^^ only lines i liked so goin by that rob wins.... no hate spek- saw that u didn't and dropped quick because i dont think u even had one bar with wordplay in ya whole verse... rob- those two lines were good wordplay but the punches didn't really hit very hard... need to work on that... spek might win this cuz he threw more punches, but i can tell u put more effort into this and came more creative. honest vote here... return one... links in sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for RobKilla
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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Voted For: Spektikul
Robkilla his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats Bad wordplay and bad personal. wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group Bad rhyme, blah punch. you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings Bad punch. He's not in the KKK. Get over it. this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small Ok personal. you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist No. Absolutely not. Your punch attempts and personals suck. I'm sorry, but this was a bad verse. You had one ok personal, but other then that it was completely random punches and personals. Bad punches on that. Spektikul Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger Haha, ok personal on his av. This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread Eh...bad wording. Personal is blah too. Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned Um, not really a personal or punch. Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest No. Bad punch. You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor Haha, ok wordplay punch. Hint of self glorification though. Overall, not your best verse. Weak personals and punches mostly. You had two bars I liked, which won it for you. Be more consistent. Vote goes to Spek for actually having two punches that hit compared to RK who had nothing. v- Spektikul |
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Voted For: Spektikul
skep-had more punches better personals better everythnig i seen you come harder than this but u still murked him good punches hit hard n onnected well liked Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest that woz good personal hit well wordplay was good rob-good structure need to put more an betta personals opener woz good try bit didnt connect this is jus plainly experience(skep)killin a rookie(rob) well work on ya puches an u will get better |
Voted For: Spektikul
his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats (urban cats) not that good opener 4/10 wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group wtf...2/10 you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings wack.....2/10 this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small ok nice 4/10 you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist aight closer 6/10 18/50 vs. Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger ....lol...nice opener 6/10 This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread ....lol....nice punch there 8/10 Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned aight 4/10 Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest aight nice 4/10 You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor (bore) ok closer 5/10 27/50...... V/ Spek just a better verse cuz of punches and better wordplay as well RK u need to work on that foreal man really..... . . . . . PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN MY SIG OR VOTE GETS REMOVED....... |
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