{Propain} vs Dizzee Rascal
 

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5-8 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 06-08-05 at 12:23 PM

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Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 12:32 PM.

{Propain} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 02:35 PM.

Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all (professional)
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed' (promised)
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!

..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!


...BITCH!

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

polzzzzzzz fo fam..................................

Lol, Alright...

Uppin for some votes on this shit.

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

v/ Dizzee...fuckin hard ass battle 2 vote on...4real

Propain
Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
4/5...punch was kinda weak but still nice delivery
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
2/5...wasnt too impressive...maybe its da wording
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
3/5...nice concept
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
5/5 liked da creativity on this line
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!
5/5...best line u had lmao funny shit

u had creativity...punches...some personals...structure needed a lil work otha than that tight verse altogetha

Dizzee Rascal
Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
5/5...whole 2 lines were tight as fuck
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all
5/5...liked da second line da best...creative
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
2/5...nah not ya best line fam
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed'
4/5...really liked dat shit...mad creative
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!
4/5...feed? nah but nice finisher...

creativity-Dizzee
punches-Propain
personals-Dizzee
metas-Dizzee
vocab-both

open-Dizzee (Pro's wasnt worded real good)
middle-Propain
close-Dizzee

Overall-Dizzee Rascal

mainly cause of da creativeness of his verse...both were creative as fuck but Dizzee's stood out a lil more...no landslide

Voted For: {Propain}

both of u bout on the same level but u had a little better punchlines and metaphors..."My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!"
that probably my fav line..keep elevatin..

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LOL! Both of you about on the same level. Dizzee, you know the deal.

1-1 Uppin

Voted For: {Propain}

Propain
..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
LOL Never Herd That b4 Nice Originality
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
.....That Was Cool ......
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
......Im Guessin Rascal Flat Is a Country Singer ?......LOL if so ....NIce Punch
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
You shouldve took The "with" Out of that last line and it wouldve been better but I still Get what You was sayin
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!
...:shocked:.......:roll: damn That Was Nice
Overall Mayne I Think That You dropped a overall 9/10 verse the way the name play and word playy was set in this verse was crazzy man that why you get my vote now [b]PLEASE

Damn The Rest of my Explanation did not come out LOL

Oh Well Ill Post It in A few..............PLEASE RTF IN ANY BATTLE LINK IN MY SIG .....I PREFER THE ONE WITH THE MOST VOTES

Dizzie Rascal'

Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
Wording Was off mayne BuT THe nameplay was aii
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all (professional)
...:nono: Too Many Words man ....Strcuture was off in That part to
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
...LOL That was hot I Like that LOL
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed' (promised)
......:nono: You alreadt played off his name in That kinda way so why you doin it again? Thats not good
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!
...................That was aii

Aii Dizzie overall Your verse was just aii It wasnt good enough overall to win this battle although you did have some good punchez in there they still werent stronger than Porpains so I had to give him the vote

RTF and vote in any battle link in my sig HONESTLY *no hate please*

Aight post that shit up later if you want..if Dizzee doesnt care then dont even bother.

2-1 Uppin

Thats coo
Pro i know what u mean mayne tell me when u reach my level fam lol
Upping this ill return the favours later on im studying n shit now

Dizzee, please lol..

Now, uppin for more votes

This was feedback posted for {Propain}
 

hot............................................... ........................good drop dizzie

This was feedback posted for {Propain}
 

I think u took this dawg...str8 up...good battle though...I actually read both sides for once...lol

Man u know im not gonna except that lol
Break the verses down and give reasons and it will be excepted if not im getting it removed G

Actually nevermind it was only feedback...........

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Herb must be insane have this newbie praying for mercy g
Cus Diz will bring more 'shots' to pro-pain than intensive surgery
Good opener
Leave u murdered P, i love killing dicks i suppose im obsessional
'Legitimatly' smack this herb till he admits he's wack how we see pro-fessin-all (professional)
nice wordplay here
Recking all in my path, felt belidgerent beatings to witness my wrath
Have P 'bathing in his juices' like urination whilst taking a bath
ok nice line
Bitch like 'sickle cell twister', make the spine of pain twist
U punching? Ha! 'I assure' ull never reach me consider it 'pro-missed' (promised)
nice word play also
Why you still here? amazing im beating this snitch as i maime filler
My punches will leave ur 'limbs numb' no wonder im a pain killer!
ok an aight closer

v.s.

..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!
lol nice opener
..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!
ohhh nice wordplay heere
..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!
ok an aight line
..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!
nah! not good
..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!
lol nice closer


ok both did good to their verses but as u kno dizze came harder wit personals and punches and the flow will have to go to pro but dizze won the battle but good job to both competitors it was a close battle but dizze hit harder wit his punches
v/dizze

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Voted For: {Propain}

haha, Alrigh Alright this is how it breaks down

Rascal-You had some good punches cuz..nice wordplay too. Structure was a little off. It was a pretty tight drop but...

Propain-Came out swingin and landed with "..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!" I about pissed myself laughing, very nice punch. Came back with the Rascal Flats shit, very nice again..structure was off in some places but pretty consistent..

V-Propain
Reason:Both came hard with punches, but Propain took it...Pro had better structure and a better overall drop..your was pretty good too Rascal, but he has ya

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This was feedback posted for {Propain}
 

uppin for em and feedback that I think Pro took it with the punches..mad funny cuz

This was feedback posted for {Propain}
 

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lol at justfies vote being allowed but pen n papers not being allowed
awell
Im not fussed
Swooosh

Voted For: {Propain}

..Its like Im shooting Alph Alpha, Im leaving Rascal Killed..
...And Dizze? lll put an end to ya Daze(days) like Advil Pills..!

nice diss here, 6/10

..My flames turn ya fucking organs to liquid until you Spit Cider..
...And we all know that D.R can only stand for Dickrider..!

nice use of his initials.. DR 7/10

..Cocking triggers so when Im Snapping Back, Im Capping Cats..
...And Its like im abandoning country stars, the way Im leaving Rascal Flat..!

iight i know ho rascal flat is lol so this is a good diss 6/10

..Ill be Spraying Whats Sickening to make you regret Everyday You Living..
...Cuz even when I was young spinning in cirlces, I was still Playing With Dizze..!

not bad, not tha best 5/10

..Murder bitches and fags, Either way Im still Dropping Genders..
...Cuz Im leaving this hoe Mauled (malled) like prostitutes in Shopping Centers..!

not bad not bad 6/10

overall not tha best battle ive seen but i saw enough from propain to get my vote - PROPAIN

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

decent opening ... first line was an ok set up, second line could have been better... wordplay=not bad, but feels kinda forced.. could have been executed better

3rd line= filler.. 4th line was decent, a lil stretched.. i thought the wordplay was creative, but better wording would have made it hit harder.. not bad though

5th line=filler/SG... 6th line was pretty funny lol.. pretty tight

7th line= tight set up line.. your best set up line yet... 8th line was blah... forced wordplay, the part you're playing off of isn't pronounced the same way as his name... wording was off and a lil stretched.. average

9th line.. blah, you talk about maiming filler when the line your using is filler... tenth line was a decent play off of his name

overall verse= 7.5/10

Unless ur the same person , the sick 1s vote aint counted if they jst breaking down pros verse but if it same it coo

Voted For: {Propain}

Alright, 1-3..

Uppin for more votes in this shit.

Voted For: {Propain}

Just checkin polls and also checking something for the league...

^^^ Booooo u voted for him!, i take i can remove it since u didnt mean to vote

Voted For: {Propain}

Nice battl here fellas...

Propain:

Really nice verse from you, you had some real nice creative punches thrown in there and they all connected, which is a major plus. Good wordplay and really funny personals as well. Everything flowed fine and was in place.

Punches: 9/10
Personals: 8/10
Wordplay: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Overall: 36/40 (90%)

Dizzee Rascal:

Pretty good verse from you too man. Had some good punches in there, but I didn't really see any personals. That is really the only thing that you were lacking. Everything flowed nicely together and most of your punches connected, but personals is what fucked you up.

Punches: 8/10
Personals: 5/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Flow: 9/10
Overall: 29/40 (73%)

V/ {Propain}