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13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
Championship Match
13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper 10 Line Minimum - 20 Line Maximum Please Check-In by Thursday, and Drop your verse by Saturday. Good Luck to both of you.. |
13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
Don't hoe-show homie :)
Checkers . . . . King Me |
Checkmate.
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And So... The quest to be king ends here
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(Don't Let Anything Fly Over You)
*A rook is a chess piece, that castle one, and 'ship = chamionship . . Paul says: If I can't make it in time for the chamionship, can you get it postponed? A mind so astute says: All good with me . . . . Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king (it's not self glory, think 'bout it) |
Thank You... Just waiting for 9th to finish his verse and drop it now...
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Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box . . . . Understand everything in both verses or don't vote. Good luck Jack. :thumbup: |
fucka typo, my closer = "grand-gesture"
anyways, dope drop yo, this'll be close |
i wann be the first person to vote... lol
jack the ripper: Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons ^^ lol decent opener, funny punch 8/10 Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" ^^ good concept and good punch 7/10 Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship ^^ haha this was dope man 8.5/10 Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit ^^ this was ok i wasnt really feelin it as much as the others 6.5/10 Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order ^^ nice lol migit, decent nameple and good punch 8/10 You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope ^^ another dope concept and good punch 7.5/10 Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire ^^ this made ma laugh lol 8.5/10 Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' ^^ nice punch, good play on chess, 7.5/10 Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth ^^ lol this made ma laugh this was dope name and crew play 9/10 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king ^^ nice took me a while but it was creative... 8.5/10 overll: 79/100 i liked your verse alot i thought you had some dope wordplay and some real nice punches and concepts, structure was perfect and flow was on point, i thought there was about 2 bars which wern't as good as the otheres but they were still good... overall you had a dope verse and its going to be hard to beat, good job fam 9th degree: Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff ^^ good opener good wordplay and good punch, 7.5/10 He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws ^^ haha very creative man nice. 8/10 What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy ^^ nice again u have good wordplay man 7.5/10 I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket ^^ nice nameplay and more wordplay wit a good punch, 8.5/10 How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness ^^ haha this had me laughing 8.5/10 You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question ^^^ not really feeling this as much as the others 6/10 Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader ^^ nice nameplay agen, nice punch 8/10 Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper ^^ used his whole name lol 7.5/10 Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook ^^ nice flow was a lil bit choppy though 7/10 This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box ^^To me this was your best bar 9/10 overall: 77.5/100 ight man u had a real nice verse.. some dope namplay and some good concepts, structure was different but it worked well... flow was good but it was off in 1 part... other than that u had some real nice shit in there good job fam.. This was real close but imma give it to jack the ripper i felt his punches were more entertaining and had better concepts and wordplay behind them, dont get me wrong 9th had a solid verse but it wasn't enough to stop the ripper lol... v/ Jack The Ripper |
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth A lot of your verse was dope, but WTF @ explaining etc? That was homo, the chess piece line would've been better with no "/" so it seemed forced as fuck, along with that torcher line. And stop with all this structure, i could tell you added extra words here and there to make it look better, fuck structure, its a battle. vs. Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so Inturn I'll comebustchins with a right hook eek fool. I'm mad at you for the axe line. And I used a pasture line before but i'll let it slide since you used it 40636036 times better than I did. The comebustchins could have been worded better but it was good. Compiss line was dope. Y'all made it close, should be close, but I got 9th takin it. v - 9th Degree |
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons —5, decent opener, even thought it was a little-played Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" —3, uhh, nope.. not really liking this Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship —6, pretty decent Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit —3, boo.. weak punch.. could’ve switched it up to make it harder or w/e Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order —5, decent.. not really hard hittin.. but decent-enuff You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope —6, I get this line.. but 9th is not a girl?.. Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire —5.5, meh.. not really what expected of this bar Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' —7, don’t know why.. but I kinda liked this line Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth —4, nope 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king —6, pretty decent line.. sorta hard-hittin Overall – 50.5/100 Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff —5.5, decent opener He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws —6, I get this line also.. kinda hardhittin too What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy —4, not really feelin this line I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket —7, nice.. I liked this punch here How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness —5, decent You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question —6, hah, pretty average Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader —6, persona was good, punch was aight Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper —5, decent.. could’ve been a little-harder Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook —3, boo, not liking this one This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box —6, lol.. nice closer Overall – 53.5/100 v/ 9th Degree |
^^^^^ i think Soc deserves to have his say.... wasnt he (or still is) a mod of the tourney??? not to mention former KORV.... this battle is pretty hard to vote on..... but im still laughin at "compiss on your strategy".... even my boys were rollin off that
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9th Degree - 2
Jack The Ripper - 1 Voting council please vote.. |
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons nice opener 8/10 Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" ok nice 6/10 Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship lol nice wordplay and good punchline 10/10 Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit ok nice 6/10 Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order lol nice 8/10 You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope lol nice wordplay there wit the collar 10/10 Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire ok nice 6/10 Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' ok another wordplay but not that effective 8/10 Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth ok good punchline 8/10 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king ok yea no self-glory but not a good closer 6/10 Overall-76/100 Nice man alot of wordplay personals and alot of effective lines ur verse was very structurized and had 2 perfect 10 counts that is a good job man the vocabulary was ok the flow was ok as well as i said structure was good and punches as u may already kno it was hott man keep doin what ya doin man 4real Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff ok opener 6/10 He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws ok nice wordplay wit cats and paws 8/10 What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy ok nice 6/10 I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket ok nice line 6/10 How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness ok hott punch there 10/10 You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question ok nice 6/10 Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader lol nice word play and punch 10/10 Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper lol nice punch man good one 10/10 Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook kinda stretched but still packed a little more 8/10 This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box lol man thats a good one man best line in both verses 10/10 Overall-84/100 damn u had a little weak lines but u had like 4 perfect punches thats good man and that closer was the best ive seen from both verses so good job on that and structure and flow was a lil off and vocabulary was ok so good job man keep doin ur thing as well Scores: Personals-JR Punches-JR Effectiveness Punches-9D Most Effective Line-9D Flow-none Structure-JR Vocab-vone Points on verse-9D this was a tie battle and cuz it was a tie im gon have to go wit the points on the verse and 9D had the most so my vote is gonna go to 9D cuz he had the most effective verse but both competitors did their thing good job to both competitors v/9th degree |
3-1 9th degree, upping this....
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Word to whoever keeps deleting my votes.
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Hurry the fuck up so I can get my money and vote you damn council members. Jesus.
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one of the best battles ive seen on rv, props
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons ^^nice opener, good wordplay Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" ^^simple, wasnt feelin it Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship ^^nice nameplay, very original, connected well Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit ^^lol, i love this bar....rofl Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order ^^nice nameplay, well worded You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope ^^nice concept, bitch/9th...hmm...releventcy lacked but still koo Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire ^^couldve been worded a tad better Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' ^^nice concept n wordplay Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth ^^ok, but not hard hitting 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king (it's not self glory, think 'bout it) ^^hm, was.nt bad, original but not hard hitting closer shouldve been better n is supposed to be the best or most solid bar in your verse, or close to it.. this 1 lacked . overall, alot of your verse was nice n fresh with good wordplay n nice concept, personals were there n you connected with a tonne of bars.......nice verse . . Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff ^^honestly, i disliked this bar He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws ^^forced ryhme schem, but the wording wasflawless What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy ^^^omg, damn that was nice I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket ^^lol,.decent stuff 9th, bit stretched but still koo How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness ^^well used, even thou pature is gettin kinda played now You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question ^^nah, lol,.. just wrong 9th.....decent but wrong..lol Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader ^^nice, short n sweet Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper ^^nah, wasnt feelin this to much Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook ^^punch was pushed n setup needed work.. This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box ^^ok, but setup n punch held no releventcy to eachother that i could see . overall 9th you had some real dope concepts that were well worded n in my eyes near flawless. yet a couple that were boarderline wack to me.... damn close battle, but imma go with jack just for a more solid hard hitting verse overall, n having original concepts.. .. vote/jack |
9th Degree: 3
Jack The Ripper: 2 Please vote voting council.. |
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hmmmmmmmmmmm...
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Jack The Ripper
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons good open Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!" udderly raw Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship wordplay was good Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit ite, decent Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order smash that analogy You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope! When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope mmmm no Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire decent Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook' best line Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth fire 9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king decent close *aight, your verse was hot, had its own style. you were talking at him more than you were hating. verse was good, some lines were fire, some were just ish. but in the end the verse was good. real hot. 9th Degree Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff hot, just a lil bit He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws real hot bar What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy haha, fire I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket slurred, but good How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness wordplay was good You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question haha, loved this bar Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later" I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader good connect, good personal Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper decent Had enough, friend? That's how it might look But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook wasnt feelin it This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box good close *i loved this verse, the personals were hot, the punches were fire. you had some many genres of lines. this verse was one of the best in the tourney. good read, gets my vote. vote: 9th Degree good reads yall & good luck to both. |
9th Degree: 4
Jack The Ripper: 2 |
meh, wt/v, if 9th wins least I dont get ko'ed
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lol according to you, a win IS a KO
hahah close battle |
^^ No, 4-1 is a ko to me, and on most other sites too, and you lost, 5-1 :)
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9th Degree: 4
Jack The Ripper: 2 First to 5 wins.. |
I didnt wanna vote on this cuz of bein in the fam and cuz im cool with 9th but i guess ill take a shot at it since it looks like its needed
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ur opener and closer shoulda been alot better in this battle, but still real nice, and prolly ur best verse so far in the tourney 72/100 Quote:
u guys seemed real even in all..... bujt someone hasd to win and by my bar by bar scoring, 9th got 73/100 V/9th altho its hard for me to give either of u the vote |
9th Degree wins 5-2.
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