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E.C vs Ackrite
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10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting damn rv crashed lol ill set it agen if u still wanna battle.. 30 mins check 30 mins drop... ill do mine now.. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 06-08-05 at 06:21 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 05:52 PM.
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AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 05:52 PM.
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Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! (1) He's From U.K......Spell It Backwards (2) Gay Ppl's Color Is Rainbow....So You Get It Now (3) Since He Grew Up Diseased He Thinks He's Related To It (4) Some Immigrants Are Forced 2 Come Here, His Raps Are Forced To Come On Rapverse.. (5) DIRECTORS = ACTORS = For Plays, Movies, Etc...Ppl Send Formal Invitations When They Havin A Dress-Up Type Of Party (6) Water Is Pure....Purified....Get It |
you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) -------------------------------------------- _explanations_ 1st bar: Athsma-dust-choke lol 2nd bar: check his sig he looks like marques housten 3rd bar: checkl his user title.. went off that phatter (fatter) 4th bar: hook- string, fishing... bait lol not hard to work out 5th bar: pane of glass pain get it? ight sry bout before fam rv was messed up i didnt even think i posted lol so g'luck pzz |
ight good verse man... uppin for votess...........
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Nice Verse But This Shits Bull....They Betta Take That Loss Away Man....Cuz Da Site Got Slow When I Started 2 Post Neva Got Da Chance 2 Get It Up
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Aeyo Uppin This Shit Lets Get Da Votin Started.........Dis Shit Aint Stayin Up 4 Months!
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Voted For: AckRite
AckRite=Vote... Creativity=Tie...well done wit this.. Punches=Ackrite..Had more Wordplay=E.Cs whas easier and seemed to need less explanation... I Felt AckRite's Verse Mo...Nice Battle Fellas And Nice Drops... RTF!!! Truth vs. Twizted...or Truth vs..Dat other cat i'm battlin..caint remember...its been open... |
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Voted For: E.C
you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", ^^ok, but basic The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, ^^nice personal...ownage Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, ^^decent, but come off as self glory a bit I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, ^^lol,.ok You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) ^^seen this concept b4 off 9th dgree.. . overall you had a dope bar/personal in there alot of soso bars...overall consistent verse in a sense that nothin was wack........., , . . Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! ^^ok, but you forced ya ryhme scheme bad here Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) ^^nah,i got it but to far fetched...ko dont=ku Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! ^^decent wordplay i was feelin this Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! ^^wasnt feeling the wordin or punch My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! ^^feeling the meta..setup was iffy thou.. . overall you had a decent verse n the consistency was there but you lacked in hard hitting punches...this was very close. you just didnt capitalize on your bars n make them effective enough..good battle thou..cuz itwas close |
ight uppin for more votes...............................
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Voted For: AckRite
Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! ^^ Meh the link dont work, but nice personal and a punch. Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) ^^ Ahhhh Nice personal with a decent punch. Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! ^^ Meh i didnt like this bar of punch...gay jokes are played. Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! ^^ Alright both bars of punches was the rapist line got me rolling, nice decent punch w/ the closer. you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", ^^ Meh i didnt like this opener in my eyes, ok punch. The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, ^^ Ok punch, should've word it better, then it'll be a decent punch, but its an ok punch. Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, ^^ LMAO! i like this punch, here decent with a personal. good wordplay. I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, -Meh man this was played....I've seen this line so many times but word differently but still played out You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) ^^ Alright i got it, it was a good wordplay with a punch. Conlcusion=Both had good verse, but my vote goes to AckRite, he had decent wordplays with a punches w/ personals. E.C. you had few good lines, but the punches wasn't hitting harder than ackrite, for the reason because your punches wasn't word correctly, i suggest next time do more wordplays with personals and make it a punch, cause that "phaat" line was a example, but dawg the rest didnt hit harder.. Blah return a favor E.C. And ACKRITE |
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Voted For: E.C
you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) Pretty decent flow throughout, good personalz in da verse 2..wasnt feelin yo opener, bout da only line dat wuz whack az fuck lol da thong thing izza lil played, but datz ok, u used it 2 iight effect, punz were hard hittin 4 da most part, overall it wuz a decent verse, good job.. Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! Dope shyt, sum iight lines, wuznt feelin dat uk thing & i wuznt feelin yo closer, very weak closer & dat infectionm/relation thing wuz a good idea, juz worded wrongly....good creativity in yo wordplay, no personals & da punz wuznt exactly hard hittin, but yo punz wuld ov been improved if u added a few personalz in yo verse, good job though Vote=E.C Return da favor in da link below or vote will be removed http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194485 |
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Voted For: E.C
Ackrite Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! ^ can't access ya PM box...shoulda quoted it after the verse...coz this link is wasted...effected bar too Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) ^ Wordplay on UK is mmm ok...an aight bar...kinda self-glory though Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! ^ Blah gay bars played...creativity needs to be upped Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! ^ ok bar...an aight punch nuthin to make me go OHHH though My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! ^ closer isn't dope...ok...but coulda been better Overall Just an average verse really rhymes flow & structure good jus punches were meh/ok and opener was ruined coz of no access to ya PM box...average at best...needed work though E.C's Verse you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", ^ Opener better than 1st verse 1st line a lil meh though but punch/diss on point The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, ^ good personal...slight self-g though... Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, ^ blah self-g punch wasted diss there Atkins thing bought this up though I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, ^ lol best bar of battle so far IMO 1st line a lil used now though 2nd line picked it up You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) ^ Good closer nice wordplay...punch...ok...good closer... Overall E.C ya got this...only just though...basically more effective on punches again not much OHHHH standard but enough damage was done to pick up the win... V/E.C...no RTF required as E.C dropped a vote in Got Skillz...so this is my RTF |
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Voted For: AckRite
Wow E.C. I really expected much better from you man E.C.: you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", Weak 3/10 The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, LOL funny personal, but weak set-up...5/10 Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, Gay and played man 4/10 I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, OK 5/10 You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) Decent closer...6/10 Overall: 23/50 (46%) Ackrite: Good verse from you, pretty much what I expected Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! Links are played, but the line was nice 7/10 Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) LOL decent, but there is no 'O' in 'UK' LOL 6/10 Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! Nice...7/10 Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! Weak...4/10 My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! Decent closer, coulda been better 6/10 Overall: 30/50 (60%) V/ Ackrite |
BTW, please RTF or I will remove this vote.
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Voted For: E.C
e.c good flow very simple to read and understand good vocab kinda basic but not that simple punches were acurate and clever and hit pretty well also kinda made me laugh whichis always good inna battle to have sum humour marques huston line was my fav lolol ackrite-good flow also very easy to read vocab was good not that basic either but not to complex punches were ok but not all that acurate sum where and then they just got plain but u also had sum funny lines but that uk line was dumb didnt do anything for me xept made be like uh oh other than that cant really fault anything else but e.c gets this imo simply becuz his punches stayed consitent good drop both yall.......... vote/e.c |
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Voted For: E.C
Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM! OK.... Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.) NAH..... Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation & 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion! OK.... Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation! Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration! GOOD... My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations Ya Brain Misplacement .................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations! AIGHT.... =7.5/10 NOT YOUR BEST VERSE WITH JUST SOME OK PUNCHES!!!!! VS you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust, Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust", LOL..... The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights, How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike, NICE... Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees" Must be you who's losing weight, ....................... coz you could never be phatter than me, OK... I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs, You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along, SO-SO... You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein, Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain) TITE... =9/10 A REALLY TITE VERSE DAWG. YOU CAME WI SOME REALLY DOPE PUNCHES!!!!!! V/E.C FOR HAVING A LOT BETTER PUNCHES... |
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