E.C vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes
No d/r

g'luck fam...

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 06-09-05 at 11:31 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 11:15 AM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 11:18 AM.

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****

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_explanations_

* his writing style had more dots that words hence bullet holes
** he used a polo mint concept in our last battle and oldham atheletic is the football team he supports for all u u.s heads
*** he is m-eazy's right hand man in his crew
**** he says rep u.k till death

ight just a lil summet for ya ass lol... g'luck fam :evilgrin: i dint come wit bad personals this time lol

nice verse man, good look......

lets see what the voters say!

werd good verse man... uppin for some votess.......

Voted For: E.C

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^ I like this good pesonal with a punch.

Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^ Alright alright good personal with a punch.

You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^ HAHAHAHA nice personal with a punch once again.

How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^ Meh could've been better, but it was an ok closer.\

Overall= E.C. nice verse you had lots of personals and good punches, they were good and i suggest the next time you battle put down some wordplays.





Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ Alright, this punch was played, seen it before but its word it differently but still not a good punch.


Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^^ Meh i felt this wasn't a good punch.


Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^ Meh this wasn't a good punch either, and the explanation wasn't good, i first i thought you ment "Grind as in dicks", but blah still wasn't a good punch.

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^ I find this closer very weak.....Not a good punch.

Overall= DAUBS, what happen you falled off?. You had a ok verse here , but the gay punches are played,and the punches were just weak, i suggest you word it more differently.


Conclusion= IN my eyes i think E.C. won this, because he had a better punches w/ personals. Daubs i didnt vote for you because your punches were weak, it's not that i didnt get them, it just that it wasn't word correctly to make it a decent punch. and the 3'rd bar was played man stop with the gay jokes. The 1st bar was ok, but didnt feel that was a effective punch w/ a personal, sorry man my votes goes to E.C. for harder punches and personals.

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ok, but i dint have a gay punch, so obviousely you dont understand.


uppin.

Voted For: E.C

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^this was an alright concept....personal
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^wasnt feelin this much
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^decent punch
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^imo,weak closer.......
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your vere was jumpy, 1 good bar,1 bad.ect
it was consistent but you had 2 good punches
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Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ok, decent but basic
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^^eh, not hard hitting
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^decent similie
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^nah, it was like self glory for the punch..
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overall your vere was ok, but you need to be more
complex n try to use more original nameplays...
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not a bad battle,both relatively close

ight thanks for the feed......

if he KO's me, il never forget lmao!

haha... uppin for more votes............................

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Nice Famz But Im Just Checkin Pollz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeh up................................................ ..

Voted For: Daubs

Breakdown...


Daubs:
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
7/10...Tight 2nd Line
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
8/10...Liked Tha Set Up & Da 2nd Line Hit Hard
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
7.5/10...Set Up Was Good, Da 2nd Line Was Nice...Not Dat Strong Tho
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
6.5/10...Brought You Down, Glory? But Nice Either Way

Was Feelin Ya Verse, You Had Hard Hittin Punches A Few Personals (You Beat Him B4)...Structure Was Straight, Word Choice Was On Point...Nothin Really Bad About Ya Verse Except Da Closer Was Weak


E.C.
Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
8/10...LOL I Dont Know If Dat Was Humorous, But It Had Me Rollin
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
7/10...First Line Was BLAH, Set Up Horribly But Da Personal Was Tight
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
7.5/10...Again Ya 1st Could Be Worded Betta, 2nd Line Was Funni
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
6/10...Really Didnt Like This Closer Either


VOTE: Daubs....Both Closer's Were Weak As Fuck But Yall Middle Bars Were On Da Same Level, E.C. Brought More Humor & Daubs Came Wit Hard Hitters...Loved Da Loose Ends Line, Only Reason Daubs Got This Was Because His Openin Lines Were Worded Alot Betta Than E.C.'s...E.C's My Nig, But Jus Work On Ya Set Ups Ya Lines Tight But Da Set Up Kinda Takes Points Away....Tight Battle Tho Both Niggaz
RTF...Any Battle I Got Open

ight fam link me.. upin for more votes.............

Voted For: E.C

Ya know what this was a good battle. But i think E.C took this one. Don't get me wrong i thought Daubs' verse had a lot of humour in in with lines such as:

"Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!"

and

"Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ.."

but EC traded humour for a sick verse with better punches, and flows. I prefered ECs structure of his verse and i found it more interseting to read cos the humour was more subtle so you had to read it carefully to understand some lines.
I think the line that finally made me vote for EC is his closing line:

"How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,"

I thought that was a decent personal and all out nice rhyme.

So there you have it: My vote goes to EC

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uppin for more votes.............................................

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Voted For: E.C


Quick verse
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ wack
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^this aint really a puunch imo.
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^yeah thats more like it...
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^ur best bar


Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^nice personal lol
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^yeah, another good personal
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^ouch!
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^nah...not a good punch but a personal again...

No hate to any1 here, but E.C. takes this due to his use of personals and better punches! sorry daubs! no hate, 1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Daubs

breakin it dooooowwwnnnn...

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^Alright... that was kinda wack... nothing in there appealed to me what so ever... but it was alright
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^Also rather wack... no hate or anything but your verse kinda sucked
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^alright personal, nothing all that good though, first line was wack
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^Best bar in your verse

Well... Your verse was rather weak... I didn't enjoy reading it that much and nothing made me laugh and its always good to make the reader laugh... but um... 4/10



Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^haha, first line was wack but made up for it with that funny shit...
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^Decent... wasn't all too appealing but good
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^good personal, very effective..
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^Only wack bar... Didn't like that at all...

Ok, Daubs wins this in my opinion because of his humor, shit was funny and his punches hit harder... E.C., yours was alright but not all too good and nothing that kept me reading.. (though i read it all)

wow... i feel daubs is getting robbed................

lol i feel im getting robbed aftwer that lol... o well uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

juz checking da pollz really nyce drop frum both ov u

few unexplained votes, ima get strobe to remove any shit ones :thumbup:

werd lol knew that was coming.... uppin for more votes.....

uppin for the last vote..............................

bumpin da battle 4 yall 2..........................

Voted For: Daubs

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yo return the vote...

Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^^all good wordplay but not a single hard punch... feelin the wordplay but u didn't direct the wordplay into punches really...

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e.c-
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
^^^this is like your only wordplay in ya verse and your sayin he sets the bar... thats a compliment.
aslo... your first bar is not a punch... second is callin him unathletic which isn't a hard hittin concept... 3rd bar was a gay punch, never a good idea... and the last bar was a good concept but was way too basic, it didn't have wordplay or nothin, just too simple... u needed to come with more wordplay and better concepts

vote- daubs cuz he was more creative... but need to direct more punches... no hate someone return an honest vote please!!! link at top

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Voted For: E.C

hmmm decent battle let me break it down:

E.C:-

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
Blah didnt really like this, personal but no real punch

Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
Quite nice punch, not hard but creative which was gud

You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
first line wasn't feelin, second line was dope, best so far

How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
Quite nice nothin special but o.k finisher

Overall:- o.k verse had its ups and downs but was pretty consistant without bein really dope, right hand man line i liked alot though


Daubs:

Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
concept was o.k but not hard hittin personal really

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
O.k this was pretty gud

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
Creative but wasn't really feelin this

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
Played, basic, bad closer

Overall:- not gud really again was alrite but i've seen much beta from you in the punchline league, seemed rushin, was creative but nothin hit hard

Verdict

E.C gets this for the right hand man line, thought it was the only quotable in the battle and that was the difference

pz

thnx for the vote man.. uppib for the last vote...

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

Real good verses from both. Cant decide who to vote for, So I am just wishing you both good luck and checking the polls

ight... uppin for the last vote..........................

uppin for hte last mother fucking vote....................

Voted For: E.C

Blah, ok battle.

Daubs: Aight, I can see you were trying to be creative, but your punches just didn't hit hard. I'm still trying to figure out how you made that granny punch. I liked your creativity though, nice to see different concepts. However, I think your punches just weren't that good, just creative. Only a few personals, which hurt you, no real wordplay, basically too simple of a verse. Work on making more effective punches and including more personals.

E.C: Personals helped you win this battle. Some of your first lines in your bars felt like fillers though, so you need to watch that. Make them relevant and not just there so things rhyme. Personals hit somewhat, but nothing that ground shaking. I laughed at the ... one cuz of his verse. Overall, I think you need to work on including more wordplay. I liked your personals, but I didn't like the few fillers I found.

v- E.C