Kon.Tay.Juz vs Souljah
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Unexplained votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-12-05 at 12:29 PM

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Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 07:26 PM.

I'll leave you broken in pieces, leave you deceased
You fuckin round wid a beast, who'll yam* you like feast,
Crushin your neckbone in my lyrical teeth,
Ripped apart i see yo fam layin' a wreathe,
It would take audacity for you to try attack dis,
The only thing "Kon.Tay.Juz" bout yo ass iz yo wackness,
Yo man don't fuck wid me yo punches are played,
Plus you gotta stay away, til your rash fades**,
Yo kid i'll twist you round my flow like braids,
Dent yo ego til that shits uncurable like AIDS...

*yam-UK slang meaning 'eat'
**Kon.Tay.Juz-contagious-you get it?

Kon.Tay.Juz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 11:32 AM.

Listen, I'm grippin techs, this kids still holdin his mamma's tits..
this kids spits are similar to toilets....hold up.......I gotta shit..
Battlin you...how emberassing....no one becomes famous,
.................................................. ..battling circus freaks..
My raps are on some hulk, bully shit..........we merkin geeks..
Don't get suprised when men come to you....... like Hello!..
...cuz When he say he got a clique...souljaz refferrin below..
fucka 16...no r.kelly attempts....slap this hoe white,
..............................................and say im pullin a kobe..
im statin the impossible, but if you win one more battle,
.............................................i'll consider u my homie..
Kids a fagget, if hes "cummin for beef" then that acc-..
.................-ually that hes bustin a load on his big mac..
imma keep this real simple, rapping you better quit..
Or you and vanilla ice both gon' be makin banana splits..

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

soulja: opener was weak...most of ur barz were very basic...work on metas...and wordplay...use personals...try and deversify all of your lines a little bit...overall i say ur verse was a 5/10...

kon.: nice opener...structure was a little weard...metas and wordplay were good...personals werent there at all...u had a good variety of wordplay that made the verse fun to read...overall i give it a 7/10...



v/ kon.

btw...please rtf...link is in the sig.............

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

ok both did their thing but kon had the better everythin from the flow, creativity, punches, lines almost everythin kon i like the opener and closer wasnt that good and next time dont put so many ....... ok but still a hott verse soulja u had an ok verse but nothin i was feelin no punches that did damage so work on delivery and stretch ur lines a little more and more wordplay as well but good job to both of yall keep elevatin soulja and kon keep doin ur thing
v/kon

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

v/ Kon

Punches: Kon
Personals: Neitha
Wordplay: Souljah
Multiples: Neitha
Structure: Kon
Creativity: Kon

Souljah...Ya Not Creative At All Fam...Ya Flow Was Aight But Nothin Else

Kon...I've Seen MUCH Betta From You Fam...Whats Da Problem? Best Line Was...

Don't get suprised when men come to you....... like Hello!..
...cuz When he say he got a clique...souljaz refferrin below..

Outta Both Verses....So Vote = Kon.Tay.Juz

RTF...Any Battle I Got

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uppin this battle.,.......................................... ..

uppin this...................get at me............................................ill rtf....................................

uppin this battle.......................
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This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

just check-in polls good drop fam.....................

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

SOUKAH=

Weak verse man....nothin too hard hittin'...wordplay lacked creativity, didnt notice a real punchline in ya whole verse? an you're personals was non existant, this is an easy win for the homeboy Konfliktz.........


Kon=
decent verse, you did enough for the win, seen much better from you, but i guess if you goin up against a nigga like souljah, you can take it ''easy''....some humouress rhymes tho'...the kobe shit was nice...prolly your best bar...

you did enough too get this hands down, should be an easy K.O

Return the vote in my signature or i will have this shits removed :Thumbup:

Peace out, good job y'all.

yo its cool.
i aint even denyin that my verse was off.

uppin for more votes............................................

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

souljah:
I'll leave you broken in pieces, leave you deceased
You fuckin round wid a beast, who'll yam* you like feast,
^^^DECENT...NO PUNCH OR ANYTHING
Crushin your neckbone in my lyrical teeth,
Ripped apart i see yo fam layin' a wreathe,
^^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ...NOTHIN HERE
It would take audacity for you to try attack dis,
The only thing "Kon.Tay.Juz" bout yo ass iz yo wackness,
^^^^NOW UR GETTIN SOMEWHERE...OKAY PERSONAL
Yo man don't fuck wid me yo punches are played,
Plus you gotta stay away, til your rash fades**,
^^^WASN'T FEELIN
Yo kid i'll twist you round my flow like braids,
Dent yo ego til that shits uncurable like AIDS...
^^^WEAK CLOSER....YA WHOLE VERSE WAS BASICALLY FILLER...NOTHIN CREATIVE NO GOOD PERSONALS

kon.tay.juz:
Listen, I'm grippin techs, this kids still holdin his mamma's tits..
this kids spits are similar to toilets....hold up.......I gotta shit..
^^^^LOL GOOD OPENER
Battlin you...how emberassing....no one becomes famous,
.................................................. ..battling circus freaks..
My raps are on some hulk, bully shit..........we merkin geeks..
^^^NICE RYHME SCHEME
Don't get suprised when men come to you....... like Hello!..
...cuz When he say he got a clique...souljaz refferrin below..
^^^?????
fucka 16...no r.kelly attempts....slap this hoe white,
..............................................and say im pullin a kobe..
im statin the impossible, but if you win one more battle,
.............................................i'll consider u my homie..
^^^^^WAIT....U LOST ME WITH DA STRUCTURE...IF YA BAR IS 2 LONG JUST LEAVE IT ALONE
Kids a fagget, if hes "cummin for beef" then that acc-..
.................-ually that hes bustin a load on his big mac..
^^^OKAY
imma keep this real simple, rapping you better quit..
Or you and vanilla ice both gon' be makin banana splits..
^^^^LMAOOOO...NUFF SAID

V/KON....EASILY

RETURN DA FAVOR I GOT LIKE 5 BATTLES OPEN