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Malone Aka 06-10-05 02:01 AM

eph vs Malone Aka
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Due Asap..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 02:01 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 06-10-05 02:02 AM

Malone Aka has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 02:02 AM.

System 06-10-05 02:03 AM

eph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 02:03 AM.

Malone Aka 06-10-05 02:27 AM

Death of eph

*intestine - In Testing
*eph - F
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yo,

yo,

aint scared to pass.. no way i got faith, cause my eight'll blast
and hit ya chest in till you 'missing intestines' like being late for class!
save ya ass.. run away trick or ill gun a stray prick, my deuce is spitten
cause when it comes to sex!.. eph 'palm gettin screwed' more than 'crucifixions'!
depictions unordinary, sorta scary how nigga think he see me
how this be? when aint nobody hearin 'eph(F) words' like 'censord cd's'!!
gassed? my punches got the cure to fill you up quick, im cocky see
but you just bout to b e.. like i got the ph gone w/o mixing acidic bounderies!
astounding me? son your cold garbage like trash in a freezer
so when i come with the heater.. i leave your 'whole body warm' like sauna breezers!



-EZ-

eph 06-10-05 02:39 AM

Malone aka Untouchable:

the only thing you push is luck, like ceiling ducts do.
wat i dont get is, why ya brag that girls wont touch you.
when you get W's...they never seem to end in IN.
could call you kelvin broadus, ya poultry from limb to limb.
you dont Get No Better, so i assume you record wit Cassidy.
stupid shit, ya like Jessica trying figure which rapper is Rhapsody.
stay on the net, hopin puberty hits you in a near, future week.
Malone...
thats the dumbest name since, micheal was mentioned in Super Freak.
wants a girl to feel him, so im writing to this fatherless kid.
bastard battled me...just to get his name in my sig.
theres 10 lines, shit...

good luck

Malone Aka 06-10-05 02:53 AM

wtf... who the hell is untouchable?
you just wrote a whole verse directed at a dude that isnt even me.. lmfao..
where do you get your sources of who people are?

Malone Aka 06-10-05 03:13 AM

Thats An Herb Move.. On The Real.. You Have Been Pm'd So This Is MY Last Freepost..
Fuckin Herb..

Implicit 06-10-05 03:40 AM

Voted For: Malone Aka

ok this was lopsided in my opinion

eph-ur verse was kinda wack..ur opener was probably ur best bar..other than that none of the other "punches" really hit..i think u really underestimated him.....6/10



Malone-ur verse was much better..good punches and personals throughout the verse..ur opener i think was better than eph's whole verse..not much more to say.....9/10



Malone wins this easily

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Malone Aka 06-10-05 01:46 PM

Lets Gets Some More Votes Up In Here... This Site Got The Most Memebers I Ever Been To.. And Still Dont Vote.. Guahah

Malone Aka 06-10-05 07:29 PM

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Malone Aka 06-11-05 12:14 AM

wow....................................... yall cant vote......

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Malone Aka 06-11-05 05:42 PM

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K-Trini 06-11-05 07:04 PM

Voted For: eph

aint scared to pass.. no way i got faith, cause my eight'll blast
and hit ya chest in till you 'missing intestines' like being late for class!
^^corny ass werdplay
save ya ass.. run away trick or ill gun a stray prick, my deuce is spitten
cause when it comes to sex!.. eph 'palm gettin screwed' more than 'crucifixions'!
^^mediocre
depictions unordinary, sorta scary how nigga think he see me
how this be? when aint nobody hearin 'eph(F) words' like 'censord cd's'!!
^^nice way to rip his name.
gassed? my punches got the cure to fill you up quick, im cocky see
but you just bout to b e.. like i got the ph gone w/o mixing acidic bounderies!
^^Nah..ain't feelin it
astounding me? son your cold garbage like trash in a freezer
so when i come with the heater.. i leave your 'whole body warm' like sauna breezers!
^^terrible

the only thing you push is luck, like ceiling ducts do.
wat i dont get is, why ya brag that girls wont touch you.
^^give a link bout that 2nd line&ceilind ducts push luck?u seem to be sayin that cause it rhymes.
when you get W's...they never seem to end in IN.
could call you kelvin broadus, ya poultry from limb to limb.
^^suks
you dont Get No Better, so i assume you record wit Cassidy.
stupid shit, ya like Jessica trying figure which rapper is Rhapsody.
^^nice..speccially that 1st line
stay on the net, hopin puberty hits you in a near, future week.
Malone...
thats the dumbest name since, micheal was mentioned in Super Freak.
^^decent
wants a girl to feel him, so im writing to this fatherless kid.
bastard battled me...just to get his name in my sig.
^^nice

Vote-for eph for better punchlines despite starting off really weak...his verse got better at the end.Malone..I see what u tryin to do wit ya werdplay..but it ain't connectin.

Vote-eph

MyNamesGrafhYall 06-11-05 07:05 PM

Voted For: eph

Eph:
good strong verse, few decent personals, nuthin 2 spectacular, but neither did malone, so u got lucky wit dat, punchline concepts cant be faulted & yo the ''ya like jessica trying to figure which rapper is rhapsody'' line, yo i aint mad @ dat, datz hot right there!...u overall bought everythin u need in da recipe 4 da sickness, good puns, humouress witty wordplay, lacked personalz lyked i said, but good job, u got diz ez

Malone:
not a strong verse, i mean DAMN u had sum really nyce shit, then other lines wuz plain garvage & too stretched [no hate]

improve ur wordplay, it wuz all 2 basic u kno?...concepts ov ur punz were all uncreative, datz wat let u down

vote-eph

return da favor in signature or vote will be removed, Eph [sorry 2 sound lyke a bastard but i need dat ackrite battle closed!]

Sik Wit It 06-11-05 11:10 PM

Voted For: eph

aint scared to pass.. no way i got faith, cause my eight'll blast
and hit ya chest in till you 'missing intestines' like being late for class!
wack opener
save ya ass.. run away trick or ill gun a stray prick, my deuce is spitten
cause when it comes to sex!.. eph 'palm gettin screwed' more than 'crucifixions'!
omg.. wtf was this kid? ..nope
depictions unordinary, sorta scary how nigga think he see me
how this be? when aint nobody hearin 'eph(F) words' like 'censord cd's'!!
decent
gassed? my punches got the cure to fill you up quick, im cocky see
but you just bout to b e.. like i got the ph gone w/o mixing acidic bounderies!
nope
astounding me? son your cold garbage like trash in a freezer
so when i come with the heater.. i leave your 'whole body warm' like sauna breezers!
nope


the only thing you push is luck, like ceiling ducts do.
wat i dont get is, why ya brag that girls wont touch you.
decent opener
when you get W's...they never seem to end in IN.
could call you kelvin broadus, ya poultry from limb to limb.
good punch
you dont Get No Better, so i assume you record wit Cassidy.
stupid shit, ya like Jessica trying figure which rapper is Rhapsody.
meh.. this one was kinda weak
stay on the net, hopin puberty hits you in a near, future week.
Malone...
thats the dumbest name since, micheal was mentioned in Super Freak.
hah.. this shit was nice
wants a girl to feel him, so im writing to this fatherless kid.
bastard battled me...just to get his name in my sig.
meh.. weak

eph – u had an aight drop.. punches were connecting & the
flow was pretty decent.. structure was aight here.. & the vocab
was blah.. but anyway.. u had an aight drop though

Malone – u had a wack drop.. those punches need some elevating..
..seriously.. ur flow was okay.. & the structure needs help..
overall u need to elevate more & work on ur punches though

Overall - eph took this one.. her punches were just better & harder
hittin.. in this battle

Malone Aka 06-12-05 12:07 AM

wow... there are a ton of dickriders on this fuckin site...

Sik Wit It 06-12-05 12:10 AM

^nah b... ur just wack

Malone Aka 06-13-05 12:16 AM

Come on now.. lets get more voters like skriptz.. cause hes dope... lmfao

Sik Wit It 06-13-05 06:52 AM

& who said I was dope, plus 95% of RV would
say ur shit.. is wack.. so don't cry bout it kiddo

Dizzee Rascal 06-13-05 07:14 AM

Voted For: Malone Aka

Lemme do this real quick landslide

Punches - Mal
Creativity - Mal
Flow - mal
Personals - Mal
Amusement - Mal

Overall - Mal

Best line = aint scared to pass.. no way i got faith, cause my eight'll blast
and hit ya chest in till you 'missing intestines' like being late for class!

Malone Aka 06-13-05 09:28 AM

Cool.... More Voters Like Skriptz please? or we could get some that know how to vote..

Sik Wit It 06-14-05 08:53 PM

ah, so ur saying Dizzee up there knows how 2 vote?
.. stupid fuck

Pea 06-21-05 07:16 PM

Voted For: eph

eph wutafuckaesendata................................. .................

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