R-Rated vs pictureperfect2
 

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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 12:40 PM.

R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 12:42 PM.

Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare

^^^
explain:
that last line; metaphors compare things and in his sig he says ‘horizon of thoughts’ which is a metaphor… I personally liked that one so hope u get it.

uppin... by the way wheres waldo books are mainly just pictures theres not really any lines in them.

^Don't Say....and If You Read The Line Again...."Waldo" Wears A Striped Shirt That Horizontal...and Those Are Called "Lines" and He's Always Lost In A "Line" People.

Dont Sway Dog...That Line Is Dope..

Uppin This Piece.

~R~

Voted For: R-Rated

yo this shit hott as fuck...."This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too.." damn u wiped the floor wit him and his name...had dope flow and good lyrics..especcially the metaphors..."Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches.." the first line on that was dope as fuck so were the rest but not as good as the first..had dope metaphors again...damn u dont stop do u??...."Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??.."damn....that was just as good..damn u'd be a straight ghost writer...and a good maybe a good rapper havent heard ur shit yet...8.5/10...good..and the other one is kinda out of the picture...a little basic and crooked in punches
but u can work at ur skills dawg....well u got my rating dawg

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Voted For: R-Rated

This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too..
^not a bad concept, i aint mad @ dat yo

PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant..
Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
^nyce

I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches..
^nyce first line second wuz really weak

Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
^not bad, seen better frum u

He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..
^nyce metta

Good verse, few weak concepts & punz but 4 da most part u came pretty raw wit da flow dawg


Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
^pretty played, but...i luvd it, really nyce bar

this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
^ok metta, nuthin special

it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
^really feelin dat, decent hit dawg, real nyce

your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
^not really feeling it, a lil basic

you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare
^not bad, i aint mad @ dat pun yo

Vote=R-Rated, juz had a lil more 2 offer in punchlinez, mettas went 2 Picture wordplay wuz pretty equal, but r'z punches really hit hard 4 da most part, both had inconsistant verses but R over shadowed pictureperfect wit da nyce punz

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

Checking the polls yo................................

^^^
wow get off the kids dick... uppin...

I Dunno Why Your Trying To Delay Your Defeat By Deleting Votes LoL...You Lost Straight Up.

~R~

listen kid, just cuz u vote on every battle on here and ask for bias votes to be returned doesn't mean u the dope shit on this site... fuck outta here

^LoL Don't Get Upset...My Shit Was Just Better Than Yours..:)

Upping This Motherfucker

~R~

Upping This Motherfucking Piece of Shit Slept Ass Battle.

~R~

Uppin This Battle..Please Vote...Fucking Fucks.

~R~

get up there............... :throws battle to top:

Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

~R~

Voted For: R-Rated

I think R took this one close, because his punches were harder hitting, and wayy more interesting. this was a close battle, but it came down to one thing that R had better...his verse was more interesting, which made his punches hit harder. i think personals were pretty much the same in this one, but r had some wayy funnier and intelligent disses. his wordplay was on point. picture perfect came with coo rhymin, and nice flow to his verse and he had some coo disses, but like i said before, his verse was boring. r rated takes my vote. more interesting verse, which made everything hit harder for him.

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Voted For: R-Rated

This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too..
^Nice play off his name... second line was funny aswell
PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant..
Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
^Not as good as your first bar but was good, nice punch in the second line
I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches..
^Nice shit right there, first line was dopeness and well as the second line.. nice punch hoe
Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
^Pretty decent too.. Not your best in this verse though
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..
^haha, dope bar right there... second like = funny as shit

Overall you were very consistent with your punches and there wasn't really any fillers within your verse, each line shitted on him which is always good... And you had some funny lines in there too... nice verse



Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
^Started out well but then the second line fucked it up... breast implant lines = gay as fuck
this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
^Meh... nice punch but setup was shitty... first line i felt was forced out and just a filler
it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
^Like your other bars.. the first line is good but the second is wack... well it wasn't wack but not as good as R-Rated
your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
^meh... kinda wack... I guess decent but could have been set up alot better and worded better
you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare
^Meh... not much of a punch...

Overall your verse was decent but punches and consistency didn't compare with R-Rated... and yours was rather boring... nothing made me want to continue reading it... but alright verse..

vote- R-Rated

Uppin This Motherfucker For Some Vizotes..

Bitches..:shoot:

~R~

Voted For: R-Rated

Aii Breakdown

Flow- Aii The flow has to go To PP2 But Only Bcuz His line were shorten and had less to say Than R Rated

Punchez DonT make me laught the punchez go To R-Rated He really Out did himself in this battle im still laughing from this bar
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..

Only bcuz Last week I couldnt find waldo In the book LOL

personal-Although There was no really Good use of personals In This battle the only person who used personals was PP2 so id have to give it to him

Multies- None Used from Either of you
Vocab- It has to go to R-Rated LOL I Mean He didnt use any BIG WORDs but he used the right words in the right way so he gets that category

Originality- R-Rated .......Verse didnt have any played concepts or any Overused words or Wordplay so He takes Originality with ease


Overall i think That My vote has to go to R-Rated only Bcuz he Used His Wordplay in such a Magnificent way That i was like :thumbup: So He gets my vote in this battle

v/ R- Rated

RTF In any battle link in my sig please

Voted For: R-Rated

R.....................

Nice verse, really camer hard with the name play, propps for that.,...punches hit they mark like you planned them too.

Waldo shit is played, but other then that, you're originality was down too a T, Nice verse, you killed pitcure with it....not much more i can say on your peice but Tight drop!


Pitcure..........

Verse was far too basic, wasnt feelin the closer in which you said was ill, nothin much came out of the personal you attempted, punches were basic, not very effective for real dog...

propps on the r-rated screening bar tho...it was decent, stood out, could of came alot harder, need too be more creativite an imaginative with the wordplay.......

Vote=R-Rated

Return the favor in my signature vs marvjay or vote will be removed

Peace out y'all, good job both.