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Indephz vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
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10-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-15-05 at 01:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. CLosed... expired / old battle win |
Indephz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 01:19 PM.
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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 01:24 PM.
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g'luck fam Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT... that fake quote,would probably work better when named. that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope... yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope. and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in... nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence. westside till you die,then after this you are midwest... no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset. Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?... shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez. explination:He spells "of" OV in his explination box.. and read his sig,it explaisn the rest of it. |
Dawg, Check It...
Yo!.. Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''* ''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar! battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline 0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time! we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses'' he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs ..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow'' shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now ------------------------------------------------------- Explanationz= ''Strap up''=dat wuz da name ov his callout thread skriptz+him=i beat skriptz now im battlin him...''sonned'' lol ''old redman vids''=he had & old skool track called ''time 4 sum aksion''[action] get it? yall shuld get da nirvana line 2, sporry 2 explain i kno u frown upon it, but if u didnt understand da rhymes then u do now lol |
This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
skriptz+him=i beat skriptz now im battlin him...''sonned'' lol
^yea.. & I will get my payback too.. in 4 days |
This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
I think khaoz got this, but he fam...................
both came nice. |
uppin this man............................................... ........
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Tha closer was mad dope. This whole verse was. I could sit back on this site n take Livin' Legendz to tha top without even spittin one rhyme. Ya'll all dope. Good shit! Vote removed |
My Bad...I'm goin right now to take that off.....That should stay tho, cause we all kno he took it.
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^hah.. that shit was almost funny |
please no more crew votes fam,let's keep it chill.
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itz kool dawg he requested 4 it 2 be removed, lets get sum voters on diz pplz
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This actually was a good batle though.
Let's keep it comin' ya'll. |
Yea it was, both came nyce...bump, bump...........
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upin this yet again............................................. ............
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uppin again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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Damnit, where iz da voters? fuck.......................
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Voted For: Indephz
Ok... KhAoz, I was feeling your verse, but you did not come as hard as he did. Your punches, personals, wordplay, and metaphors were all there, but IMO he just out-did you. You were not very consistent, and you came with a few played lines, which lost you some points. I KNOW that you can do better man, but you have just either been slacking off lately or underestimating your opponents, and that is something that you should never do. Indephz, real nice verse from you man. Haven't really seen much from you before, but you have talent. You came consistent with one creative punch after another, and they all connected. Had some good/funny wordplay in your verse as well (i.e. your closer, LMAO). Personals were there and they were hitting where it hurts. Overall, a good verse from you. V. Indephz |
lol Ok, upping 4 more voters on diz...............
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uppin for more votes
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uupin diz battle...................................
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Voted For: Indephz
BREAKDOWN INDEPHZ: A nice drop from you, I think that the overall flow of your verse was near perfect. The fact that you added in several multies assisted your verse. Structure was cool to, you didn't stretch lines, you kept them short and simple and straight to the point. The vocabs in your verse weren't all that complex, pretty basic and wordplay in your verse wasn't all that high really. Punchwise I think you were consistent all the way through, a lot of hard hitting ones and most of them were funny. The opener was the only one I wasn't feeling that much, closer though was dope especially the last line, that made me laugh. One thing to work on, try upping your vocabs making the verse more complex and try and add more wordplay in there. 7/10 KHAOZ THEORY: You also had a nice drop, your lines were a tad stretched at times, it made your flow seem choppy in places, if you would of added multies in there it would've been dope. Punchwise you had some killer ones in there, but also you had some weak ones. The punch where you brought Skriptz into the bar was weak because he isn't in this battle so it was pointless. The wordplay was dope as usual, but only gets you real points if you utilise it with affective punches which I feel you didn't do. Some of the concepts you used were a little played, I think that you are battling too much or something because lately your verses haven't been as good as they were when you first started on RV. 6/10 V/ - INDEPHZ Return the favour on my Wicked One battle, link is in my sig!!! |
keep da voes cominnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Nah voting is gay.PLEASE don't VOTE.PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE.
I hate when bitches vote.If u vote you are a true fag. |
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Nah voting is gay.PLEASE don't VOTE.PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE.
I hate when bitches vote.If u vote you are a true fag. |
Voted For: Indephz
khaoz lose just off of his ryhme scheme....da way u make ya words ryhme suck....4real... khaoz theory: Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''* ''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar! ^^^^WEAK OPENER....DAT SHIT AINT MAKE NO SENSE battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline 0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time! ^^^^VERY BASIC... we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses'' he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His ^^^^WHY U STUDDERIN FAM??..IT IT LOL...WHERE'S YA CREATIVITY THO First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^^^^WAS DIS A PUNCHLINE??...CUZZ IT REALLY DIDN'T LOOK LIKE 1 if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs ..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs ^^^WHO??? I NEVA HEARD OF DEM I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids ^^^LMAOOOO YO U REALLY SUCK...REAL TALK...CANT U CUM UP WITH SOMTHIN HOTT Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow'' shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now ^^^??????????? 1ndeph: Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT... that fake quote,would probably work better when named. ^^^WAIT & NAMED..DONT RYHME that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope... yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope. ^^^OKAY and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in... nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence. ^^^I CAN SEE UR NOT A CREATIVE PERSON.... westside till you die,then after this you are midwest... no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset. ^^^OKAY Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?... shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez. ^^^OKAYU..LOL V/1NDEPH....... RETURN DA FAVOR |
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I'm uppin this battle and what not................
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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL..........Daaaaaaaaaaamn, OWNED Indeph, got nothin' against you, but SHIT....that was nice. Good battle here y'all, good luck in this.. |
LOL...3-0?
What the fuck Indeph?...how are you pullin this win off? LOL.....SMH |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT... that fake quote,would probably work better when named. ^^Ok personal that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope... yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope. ^^^whack...too simple and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in... nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence. ^^^uncreative...shit's pre-school westside till you die,then after this you are midwest... no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset. ^^^suks Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?... shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez. ^^^whack Ight look.....ur shit flowed nicely and was structured nicely....but ur punches suked.They were too basic."Everyone is at ur level a excellence?".What the hell is dat.That shit's pre-school.Gotta add complexity. Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''* ''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar! ^^that shit's played out to death battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline 0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time! ^^Nice we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses'' he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His ^^ight First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^^whack if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs ..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs ^^whack I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids ^^OK Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow'' shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now ^^ight Look...ur shit was no Dope by any means.But it was better than Indeph.Manly cause you had werdplay and metas or bassically.....complexity which was lost in indeph's verse.U killed him. Vote-khaoz theory(please vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php? |
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This was feedback posted for Indephz
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This was feedback posted for Indephz
werd, nice verse 1ndeph make this bitch bleeddddddddddddd
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