K-Trini vs kid~ca$
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-12-05 at 03:55 PM

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kid~ca$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 03:51 PM.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 03:52 PM.

k trini dont heseitate,i know u pre writin yo diss....
you battlin me yet u got merked by pimptress.....
i know u try but com on homie be real and start rappin...
cause all i seen from you so far is your fukin lipz smackin
im just lettin u know your lightweight,never be heavy....
its like skillz versus none,like fordz against chevyz....
these r off tha top of my dome,so dont get it twisted....
only way this guys got punches is if his ass was fisted...

U makin it?There's a better chance a Bill Cosby bein a rapist/
You could dive in an all girl pornstar gangbang...and still be the fakest/

Proof ya got no home,as ur profile say ur location is one the streets/
A "pedicurist" should be set in ur eyesight,cause you just tasted "da-feet"/

If this shit was a flick........then this whole battle be the comedic relief a hip-hop/
Always mad cause your album's like a "turkey"........all it does is "flop"/

Dislexia a factor in ur life...cause this battle u should have thought about/
As my verse is reaching the "lather",like the saliva usually does in ur motuh/

1st. bar-self explanatory
2nd. bar-defeat,da-feet...pedicurist is someone who manicures feet
3rd. bar-Turkey moves about by flopping or moving clumsily
4rd. bar-latter-end......lather-foamy buildup

the last word was sopposed to say mouth for those that don't know

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Voted For: kid~ca$

Ok

This was a good battle overal but i would have to say kid Ca$ won

let me break it down

Vocab went to K-Trini because she used longer words and her lines were stretched out
Kid Ca$ was close but u didnt give me enough to exceed K-trini

Wordplay went to Kid CA$. It seam like he forced it like when he said
"these r off tha top of my dome,so dont get it twisted....
only way this guys got punches is if his ass was fisted..."
He kind of fell off but it was enough to beat K trini

Multis were a tie because there werent any

and punchhes went to Kid Ca$ because he had good metas and set ups

overal vote

KID CA$

werd uppin fo mo votes and mav i get at u soon as i get onna dif comp cuz it wont let me access my bank so when my boi comes on ill get him to send for yas

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Voted For: K-Trini

U makin it?There's a better chance a Bill Cosby bein a rapist/
You could dive in an all girl pornstar gangbang...and still be the fakest/

Proof ya got no home,as ur profile say ur location is one the streets/
A "pedicurist" should be set in ur eyesight,cause you just tasted "da-feet"/

If this shit was a flick........then this whole battle be the comedic relief a hip-hop/
Always mad cause your album's like a "turkey"........all it does is "flop"/

Dislexia a factor in ur life...cause this battle u should have thought about/
As my verse is reaching the "lather",like the saliva usually does in ur motuh/

Pretty solid verse....Flow good...metas good....Personals good....like i said not perfect and not the worst but...homeboy can do a little better no hate.....

k trini dont heseitate,i know u pre writin yo diss....
you battlin me yet u got merked by pimptress.....
i know u try but com on homie be real and start rappin...
cause all i seen from you so far is your fukin lipz smackin
im just lettin u know your lightweight,never be heavy....
its like skillz versus none,like fordz against chevyz....
these r off tha top of my dome,so dont get it twisted....
only way this guys got punches is if his ass was fisted...

This was sorta an elevation verse...when i read a battle if the first 2 bars don't catch my attention...i normally don't vote...on that battle period but i'm glad i didn't do that. This verse went from bad to aight...but some punches were good the verse sounded like someone tryin to get done quick wit the battle but came heavier in the end.

In this battle i'd have to go wit K-Trini cuz he came harder and seemed like he took his time about what he ahd to say....i woulda vote for cas but it came a lil weak in the beginning and hotter at the end... but both of you good ass verses but step both y'all's game up....no hate...keep hip hop alive

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This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

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Voted For: K-Trini

K-Trini : pretty good punches and decent wordplay, some wack stuff but overall not bad
kid cas : i hope u didnt try.. not really any hard punches, closer was ur best, no wordplay..
both of u keep doin ur thing

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Voted For: kid~ca$

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This was feedback posted for kid~ca$
 

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Voted For: K-Trini

wow....

K-Trini - u had an ok verse..nothing special..ur opener was really weak..sorry..ur 2nd bar is played..all the de-feat lines are played..turkey and flop?..not really..i see u tried some wordplay..ur closer was kinda weak also..but the good thing about ur verse was that u had a punch in every bar.....5/10




kid~ca$ - ur verse was sorry..no punches at all..ur personal although true sucked..i really hope u keyed this in about a minute because u didnt have anything to offer with it..all of ur lines didnt really hit at all.....3/10




K-Trini wins

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Voted For: K-Trini

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cas shoudnt have come off tha dome cuz K flamed dat nigga...its like dis...

open: cas: he got it cuz of tha personal...it was iight
close: K: dat was funny as hell, had to read it twice
personals: tie: only seen 1 good personal from both
metas: K: damn, they was all on point, tha "da-feet" one had me dead
punches: K: like i said, kept me laughin tha whole time, had to keep stopin in cas verse
multis: niether: wasnt feelin ya multis, not sayin they wasnt there, jus wasnt feelin em

win: K-Trini got dis one...dont like my vote, sue me for my RV dollars

Voted For: K-Trini

GOOD:

Flow - tie
Structure - tie
Punchlines - K-trini, got em more original and hard hittin
vocab - tie
Wordplay - K-trini
Nameplay - nope

BAD:

forced Rhymes - no
Forced Multis - no
Non Sence - no

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - nah
Creative Punches - K-Trini
creative multi's - nope

PERSONALS:
is there any? oh, thre it is. K-trini got two... Kid-Cash didn't seem to have one

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Kid Ca$h
Closing: Kid Ca$h

COMMENT:
Kid cash is good at rappin but not battle rapping, u see him doin great lines but ain't hard hittin, so the punchlines by K-trini wuz stronger....

Kid Cash - 8/10
K Trini - 9/10

V/ K Trini

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