Round II: Phenom-in-all Vs Omen
 

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Verse Due By Saturday 11:59 PM EST

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should b good ... good luck homie...

aight lol... i just finished recording my verse... prolly the longest battle verse i ever done, plus i threw in what i beleive are my best punches....EVER.... lol now ima have dv mix it for me cuz my quality is really ass sounding this time for sum reason... but my verse should b up by today, pretty soon.... wooooooooooo!!!!! gonna need an army to harm me baby....g'luck me boy....

^loooollll..... aight word... bu tyea tha underdog is back widda nutha one!! holler at me!
phenom diss rapverse round 2

ima write my lyrics next.... good luck man...

aight some1 just told me that the limit for this shyt is 3 minutes... let me know if i have to cut this shyt .... but yea, rite now i still got plently of time i just dont wanna get called out on some gay shyt so lemme know b4 due date is up... cuz thats gay... but peep...

aight yea i see what tha rule i s.... phenom gets to decide if i can keep tha whole verse or if i gotta cut i t down to 3 mins... let me know if u would be a gentleman and let this stay n have a fair match.. cuz i really dont care if n e ones shyt goes over tha time limit, but the rules state that it is your option phenom... so post here n let me know if i gotta cut homie... thanks...

boom heres tha lyrics... i appollogize for over writing in this thread...

stick em up! you know what i came for!
get tha pump hit em up! its case closed/
sick em dog, get em off, i waste foes!/
rock tha mic, drop tha hype have tha stage blown!/

sit back relax,witcha ya bitch ass!/
ya get slashed by tha blade of my pick axe/
yerra small fry shittttt cat,/
you should learn not to mess widda big mac...
get back, you really not ready f dis/
gotta machetti gripd, severin ya neck n ya limbs/
rydin wif four horsemen i gotda torch scorchin/
he got weinaz in his grill like george forman/
phenominal its time ta fall. im ona roll/
takin ya wax off u should call me armoral/
this is tha art a war. start more beef than a carnavore/
illl give ya a "sharp thought" dart a "sword thru ya skull" heart n pour/
gas on ya mandabol, grabahold ofa match ima animol, blast u from canada
blap! u bedda hope thatcha casket aint flammable/
o pleeez u aint tryna fuck wif o g's
cuz i kno ya "countrys flag" n i "smoke leaves"/
ya not fuckin wif tha 7 oh three/
cuz mah rimes are "off tha scale", like a "fresh o z"/
n these lines aint phat, they obese,"obie's"/
like i got "trice" to write em, straight from tha dome peice/
i open my mouth n shyne like gold teeth/
ill beatchu to a bloody pulp n leave tha pulp beat/
ohh sheet, ya gurl betta not kiss n tell/
im "satan, impregnatem," "makin life" a "livin hell"/
wish em well. bitch ill letchu hit this el/
wif a o n two s'es,shit ill letchu mix em round/ (l o s s)
sit em down, wif his face on tha canvas/
ya facin a "mantis" man youu betta "pray" fer a cannon/
dont care who ya clan is, i came to make damage/
and im anch chis ta haveya sprayin ya pampaz/
take it fer granted ill leave u "jacked sonn", like "janet"/
tha last one to panic got his ass jumped n handed/
back to um by bandits, slashup tha amatuers
you hear me "click"n "see tha light" flash up like "cameras"/
cats wanna bang widdus, i got this pleez/
ill leave him "cut short" like i "chopped his knees"/
off ya feet, gotta lodda ways to rock this beat/
stop n peep tha new era dude ya obsolete/
im two steeppps ahead of youuu doooo tha math/
how you plan to "light me up" wen u showd u "blew tha match"/
ill leave u bruised n patched up choose ya path
cuz, like "dickie roberts" ya needa "loose tha act"/
chump ya done, jump tha gun u wantin some?/
tha frontins done,punk now tha guns pumpin son/
ima son of a bitch, bumpin with, thunderous hits/
"feedin ya punches" like ya gota "hunga f' fists"/
now son, dont be mad cuz u lost round 1/(verse me)
even if u rigged tha votes widda fixed outcome/
now it might sound dumb wen i snatch tha crown from/
tha toppa tha ring poppin them things,like, bloaw ya dun!/

now how many lines duz it take to catch tha big fish?/
im like fuck tha bait. reach in n grab this bitch/
damn, u know ima pimp bitch/
ys that? cuz i putcha chick on mah hitlist/ o
n i wolk widda knickle plated biscut/
pistol whip a giant, switch it up n taze a midgit/
this kid is goin "belly up" just like a "middrift"/
gettha hint shyt, i got feet, u got inches/
lemme finish, u wanna trade? n maybe ull get vicious/
illl "take it inch by inch" "give ya defeat", bitch ya get it?/yesssssss!

damn, ima redo this n mix it better. tha vocals are too high and ima get some better eq done... so let me know if i gotta cut it down to 3 mins... so i can get back to work...

"omen advances"" yuppppppppp!!!!!

lol.. ^hes about to upload now so if u wanan let him still contend, its up to and voke :P

damn, we'll in that case hold tha voting till i get my verse re "mixed" cuz i cleaned it up but thought he wasnt showin so... well just wait till i do that.. cuz my shit is sloppy...

damn.. takin 30 mins to upload? im tryin to hear this b4 i go to bed... im tired now.. ima let it slide... for maybe like 15 more mins... but dont make me stay up and then not drop lol... damn *yawn*** if ur gonna drop it let me know now so i know if i should stay up feel me?

damn.. he's had more than enuf time to upload it to soundclick.. been almost an hour... and he's not even on rv.... so i dunno. im goin to sleep.. good luk phen...

hes bou tot post
RIGHT now.. no joke.. im talkin to him on aim..

aiiiiiiiiiiiiiight

www.soundclick.com/phenominall

omen went over the time limit in his track, so i went over the time limit to post. wordizzle - this is funny. OWNAGE.

ps - its only 11:40 where im at.

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pps - lyrics:

C'mon omen.... you thought you could beat me/
but we both know the only thing you could really beat's your pee pee/
You came really hard against me son, and thats great/
thanks to all the accidental practice, when you ejaculate/
Heard "fall back", another bite off of 'lean back'/
You think you got a good mic the way your tracks ain't get no feedback/
I got dick ridas? Well then they follow your lead/
you look like Carson Jet the way you jockin this stead/
You got a few nice lines - but remember you're not me/
my lines are designer, my verse ends with a a-saw-chee/ (versace)
That line was prolly over ya head like ya hood/
but you wouldn't know nothin about that - whats good/
I light you up like 4th of July, I'm that dope/
When I'm done they wont be nuthin left but rap smoke/
Recognize my level - I'm like the fat pope/
ain't no one above me, but Christ - and thats known/
you couldn't ever beat me - cause like Strobe - I run it/
you couldn't make play HOT 97, in RV's top hundred/
you brag in your verse about all your pounds of herbs/
you shoulda used a punchline usin nouns n verbs/ (basic)
How can you claim to be a original gangsta?/
you ain't even old enough to be a original wansta/
You brag to all your e-pals - how you so blown smokin it/
but behind ya monitor, you alone at home chokin it/
cause your gun talk is played - omen - you're not a O.G./
You're lonely - with no crew, and the girls - they are homely/
you said no ones touchin you, then I guess you don't know me/
but we both know, B, I'm the only "One"... like Obi/
You reppin VA,(ya) you be holdin it down/
but I bet your the only kid who knows you rap in the town/
I'd say you bit your rhymes, but I ain't got the time/
to go to holla front, and google ya openin line/
I spit realistic, while this cat is simplictic/
ya dissed-kid, n if you owned me, I missed-it/
You like a mix of Beyonce and Omarion when you flow/
you got all the fellas watchin when you make MEN say "Oooooh"/ (homo)
You bust rhymes about as much as your gun-do/ (neva)
after I spit I know it'll be mommy you run-to/
ya done foo, it's sa-ra-nara, when I kung-fu/
ya lung too, and whip you, then I gotta son you/
Omen - you aint even my son, boo - you wifey/
i bend you over all day, then say goodnight-b/
I might-be the greatest, and thats why you like me/
All I got is my word & my nutz... so bite dez/

Ok, Phenom, you can't be serious right? Selena, with some bass is not a battle beat. You verse was all self-glorification, PLAYED TEXT LINES. And WTF, since when has Canada had ANY hood you could be runnin? I'm not even gunna vote, cuz I didn't listen to omens but like 3 people IM'ed me to say how whack this was. But I can guarantee you lost. Jesus. Did you really think that Omarion punch had anything less than "I'M A HOMO" written all over it.

Wow.

lol.....he speaks the truth...

lol.... This is the beat Jada used to diss Beanie Sigel dumbass. *ahem* hate vote *ahem* Just cause you can't see me is no reason to post in the thread. lol what are you 3?

If you look at my post you'll see exactly why I replied. And WTF @ hate vote, I already said I wasn't voting, lmfao. Try again. ;)

*checks nuts.... brushes soc off them*

thats better....

OH SHIT, YOU GOT ME!!!

*falls back* :bored:

*listen*

phenom

iono y...but i fuckin luv this beat...i'd murder this shit.....flow is cool....delivery is good...now punches
a few played some nice...i liked the nouncs and verbs punch.....va line was hot....i think u slipped a personal or 2 in here not really sure....ok verse.....nice little punches solid track here....




omen

ok chuch this beat is hard as fuck......nice lil hook...flow comes in nsty....delivery is sick...i like ur preence....punches
damn.,...u had punches all in this shit....wordplay was fuckin superb........i was feelin this shit all the way...str8 murder here.....smoked leaves.....pulp beat...u blew thatmatch....whoooooooyea this shit right here was str8 flames

nice battle but omen took it with creativity with mixin the wordplay with sik punches and makin a nigga say oooo...nice shit omen

vote-omen

cool shyt phenom, i'm glad you showed... well, since the voting has already started.. i dunno if ima still have time to mix my verse... cuz my aol is down for a tos violation (i think i was rippin tha 12 year old gurls too hard in tha cipher chats) lol, but now i have no e mail access to send n e one my accapella, so fuck it ima stay wif this for now... i think i'm safe... never know tho... good shyt phenom! let tha votes come in

lmao Phenom. you can't battle dude. face it. Good shit Omen, killed this wack mofo. This ain't a vote either. but jus like I said, all your wins against wack nuccas. You face average or good people you lose. And our battle, it's on man. prepare to get owned. word.

v/ omen....

he had better punches, and delivery....flow was equal, omen just had better punches

c'mon yo, lets get some votes...

phenom- sounded like a freestyle, very basic rhyme schemes, not very effectively written, could have used more complexity and more effort.

omen- some of your lines were great, some were too textish for me- seemed like you used alot of unoriginal concepts that were just re-worded, either way, you can tell more effort when into this, and it was alot more solid than phenoms. vote omen.

Pheno, - mannn LMAO.. i was right there son.. so i know whats up LOL... i mean.. it was aight.. aight job for the rush job u pulled off LOL.. that was crazy..



the omen - lol.. im reaslly dissapointed omen.. if all those punches werent just re-woded that would have been one of the best verses iv heard in a while on RV.. but every punch was just reworded.. it wasent even really flipped... just re worded lol.. i mean, its not hard to put together a verse with all played punches =/...i mean u pulkled off a decent verse at most.. ya flow was weird.. but it worked well... very enjoyable verse tho.. so points there..


Verdict - hate to do it.. but vote Omen.... but omen, dont think u stiole it, cause even with phenom doing a half assed rush job, you barely got it due to the length of ya shit.. everyone of your punches was played.. you just had so many of them, that i mean, fuck... thats not a compliment and not dissin the track.. just getmore creative man... i can see you past next round if u actually had original punches..

but yea.. votes omen

P- Man u could come betta on this, like every1 already listened u underestimated Omen.No creativeness shown feel me.

O- i heard yours 2 days ago, Reverb as ussual...lol sounds like u doubled yo accapella as ussual. But punches were there, Flow was there but yea i have to give it to you on this 1

V/O

to pheonix....

what do u mean my punches were reworded??? im not gettin it? plus alot of these punches were FAAAAARRRR from unoriginal... i've gotten alot of ppl with credibility sayin this shit is creative... i know there are a few in there that may have been slightly played... but as for all of them played... i dont see it personally.... i've never seen 95% of my lines used by ANYONE before, in any REWORDED fassion lol.. but thats just my oppinion... thanks for voting every1...

i mean, maybe you asking the wonr people lol.. cause i been round and shit.. iv heard almost every single one of those punches.. a variation at least.. a few off the top i mean, weiners and george foman grill is a really played one... just certain lines u say, iv heard ALOT.. i mean, it aint your fault if u never heard em before.. but im just sayin alot of us have heard those before..