K.MurD3r vs SpOkEn1
 

Battle Rules:

5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feedin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 09:28 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

SpOkEn1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 03:31 PM.

K.MurD3r has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 07:09 PM.

1 dday left!!!!!!!

hes a n00b who anit gonna turn up!

Alright here we go....

[i]The Kid Got Crazy Spits, Steppin To Me Get Baked-N-Shipped....
This Fake-Is-Shit And I'll 'Screw A Belt To Your Waist' Like 'Replacement Hips'....
Blow Your Chest-In-A-Bag Leave You Restin-Wit-Mags....
This Battle Like A 'Gays Takin A Quiz' The Way Im Testin-This-Fag....
Im Prime-Contention So This Kid Certainly Wouldnt Mind-Attention....
But Its A Fact 'Spoken's Not Wanted Here' Like Fuckin 'Mime Conventions!!!'....
This Lame-Detected, One Shot Will Cause Brain-Erections....
Your Not Funny! The Only Time You Got Someone 'Crackin Up' Is Durin 'Caine-Injection!!!'....
This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....

Blah, Jus Start Votin.

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This was feedback posted for SpOkEn1
 

nice verse pro i liked it alot... u had some good wordplay in there and flow was real good, you should take this fam it was a strong verse

lmfao! DR :o

joke!!!

:D :) :P Got ya back :P :) :D

Voted For: SpOkEn1

The Kid Got Crazy Spits, Steppin To Me Get Baked-N-Shipped....
This Fake-Is-Shit And I'll 'Screw A Belt To Your Waist' Like 'Replacement Hips'....
^^nice flowing.....but wak ass punch
Blow Your Chest-In-A-Bag Leave You Restin-Wit-Mags....
This Battle Like A 'Gays Takin A Quiz' The Way Im Testin-This-Fag....
^^^Ur testin hiM?
Im Prime-Contention So This Kid Certainly Wouldnt Mind-Attention....
But Its A Fact 'Spoken's Not Wanted Here' Like Fuckin 'Mime Conventions!!!'....
^^Mime shit is played
This Lame-Detected, One Shot Will Cause Brain-Erections....
Your Not Funny! The Only Time You Got Someone 'Crackin Up' Is Durin 'Caine-Injection!!!'....
^^OK
This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....
^^weak ass werdplay

You had nice flow throughout the verse butyour punches were horrible.Onlyattempt at werdplay was the last line and that was garbage.

now.. time u "pan" down on wack emcees, like d12 i murder mitten,
only difference ill use a "butchers knive", so its domestic in the "kitchen",
^^stupuid....
if my lyrics were straight fire, theorotically speaking i would burn ya,
coz killing off your crew, is the only time u documenting murder,
^^Why would he kill his own crew,or u talkin bout u killin his crew?
like being in a booth, you need different things, like beats with acoustic,
but when u step in, you fuck up the cycle and thats how you murder musik,
^^OK
I heard u wanna be a drag queen, but yet u were raised in the ghetto?
does it make u feel bigger when u get raised in your stilletoes,
^^complmentin him sayin he from the ghetto
rappings like riding a bike... you never forget once you grow up,
but u still got stableizers, so i guess thats why this faggot never blew up
^^OK

Ur punches were weak.....but better than K.MurD3r.Main problem was that you had you were uncreative.YOu had no wordplay or metas.Change that next time

Vote-Spoken1(vote in link below or vote dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795

This was feedback posted for K.MurD3r
 

Can't vote..........jus checking polls

Bump.............................................. .......................

^^yo....I'm serious..........return tha fovor in my battle or my vote dq'd.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851
^^^vote in this one.....the other one finished.

Reason I'm doin this shit is because you voted inadequately in daubs one

Voted For: K.MurD3r

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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

i voted fair.............................................. ........

This was feedback posted for K.MurD3r
 

just check'in polls............................................. .

upp'in this.........................................

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Voted For: SpOkEn1

iight .. first off was a clean fight lol .. no blood way i like em lol i mean hate me !! lol

k murda: homie .. first drop ive seen from u , wasnt to bad homie .. ya had flow .. had some punches but not hittin him . had 2 real personals .. ya 3rd & 4th bars .. but metaphors .. some not hot ones .. !
overall : 5\10 a decent spit

Spoken 1: homie hot spit my 1st time c'in ya battle, multis were shown, personalls were killin. punches were hittin, flow was hot .metaphors were hot !
overall: 8\10

hot spit from u both ya both know where u fucked up .. yall learn from mistakes !

vote: Spoken 1

This was feedback posted for SpOkEn1
 

checkin polls.....................................

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Voted For: K.MurD3r


[i]The Kid Got Crazy Spits, Steppin To Me Get Baked-N-Shipped....
This Fake-Is-Shit And I'll 'Screw A Belt To Your Waist' Like 'Replacement Hips'....
nice flow... punch lack'in thou..

Blow Your Chest-In-A-Bag Leave You Restin-Wit-Mags....
This Battle Like A 'Gays Takin A Quiz' The Way Im Testin-This-Fag....
decent... but gay...

Im Prime-Contention So This Kid Certainly Wouldnt Mind-Attention....
But Its A Fact 'Spoken's Not Wanted Here' Like Fuckin 'Mime Conventions!!!'....
good..

This Lame-Detected, One Shot Will Cause Brain-Erections....
Your Not Funny! The Only Time You Got Someone 'Crackin Up' Is Durin 'Caine-Injection!!!'....
lol nice...

This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....
nice name playa nd word playa nd soild ending...

vs

now.. time u "pan" down on wack emcees, like d12 i murder mitten,
only difference ill use a "butchers knive", so its domestic in the "kitchen",
aight...

if my lyrics were straight fire, theorotically speaking i would burn ya,
coz killing off your crew, is the only time u documenting murder,
nah...

like being in a booth, you need different things, like beats with acoustic,
but when u step in, you fuck up the cycle and thats how you murder musik,
aight...

I heard u wanna be a drag queen, but yet u were raised in the ghetto?
does it make u feel bigger when u get raised in your stilletoes,
lol gay but not a good punch...

rappings like riding a bike... you never forget once you grow up,
but u still got stableizers, so i guess thats why this faggot never blew up,
ok ending...

nice battle ya but the winner is k.murder more soild hitting punches with better flow and more creative with a nice bit of multis in there nice battle ya...

This was feedback posted for K.MurD3r
 

checkin why my names mentioned .....................

Voted For: K.MurD3r

This battle was pretty damn one sided....Murder staight killed Spkoken one in pretty much every catorgery....nice drop Murder...


This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....


^^ that was the dopest bar of the battle...

good shit tho

Voted For: K.MurD3r

I say u got my vote u flowed well and u put ur words together good on a scale on 1-10 u got a 7 and ur opponent got a 6 so decent but not great battle if ya'll tryin to get down wit a crew go to the B.E.S.T crew try-out thread!

Voted For: K.MurD3r

Hmmm.

Spoken1/Provoked: Decent verse. Mildly entertaining punches to start, but it got reallllly weak son. Drag Queen? Stablizers? Really? Like, seriously? Come on now. Make it more personal. Try harder.
Score: 4

K.MurD3r: Funny lines, much more comfortable punches, a lot of personals. Just a solid verse. Done well. Multiple syllable rhyme scheme. Very good.
Score: 7

Sweep. Easily.

Voted For: K.MurD3r

Battle was aight. Murder had some pretty good punches, but some that were just multies.

Spoken's verse wasn't bad, but it wasn't great.
Overall, Murder edged Spoken out by a lil bit.

Keep spittin' guys!