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1ndeph vs Un'Touched
Battle Rules: 6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 min to check in 30 to spit Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-14-05 at 05:33 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
1ndeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:04 PM.
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Un'Touched has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:05 PM.
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You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work (fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september) you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. |
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb"....
Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... |
Upping for votes haha Crew votes are allowed considering were in the same crew |
Voted For: Un'Touched
ahhh this wuz a great match up i'd havta say that it wuz pretty equal xcept for un'touched's vocab and he had more multiz this wuz a good ass battle tho really short but ehhh |
Voted For: 1ndeph
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb".... Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... ^^stretched n weak, lots of filler Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... ^^nope, lack of wit n complexity Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... ^^better but still weak Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... ^^wack....wheres the wit? .. You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. ^^wasnt feelin it. its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. ^^dope personal n wording(connected) september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work (fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september) ^^decent you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. ^^lol,.nah... . . indeph for having the single witty personal punch that connected out of the entire duration of this battle you both need to step it up n bring better more complex concepts if you wanna get ya wins up...... |
Daz you supposed to DR us.YOU FAGFACEHOESLUTNUT
People should know I can't take constructive critisism!!!! fuck you daz lol next! |
haha 1-1 uppin for some more votes ......................... |
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damn its a voting madhouse!!! calm down with all the votes god damn!
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Indeph- your verse was nice i thought...you had some good punches...they connected and hit nicely...Had some good personals also...structure was plain and simple easy to read n all dat...but overall 8.5/10.....cuz you had better punches and personals... Untouched- your verse was nice too...but your punches were aight but some were weak..or didnt connect too well honestly...your structure was also plain and simple...easy to read n all...But also you really didnt have any personals...but overall 7.4/10.....you had decent punches...but some were just weak & you really didnt have any personals either... |
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my feed was constructive.... lol,...if this was a farm building match... . . indepth, remember that song i posted for you on soundclick.."dv8 fuckin rules"...lmfao, ol'good times.. |
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lmao word that was mad bogus. |
Voted For: Un'Touched
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb".... Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... useless multies, weak punch Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... coo Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... eh.. this one was aight Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... weak closer You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. decent its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. wack september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work eh.. okay you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. decent closer weak battle.. ..but un’touched took this shit, came harder with the punches.. ..had decent multies, and the structure was aight indeph.. ..work on ur punches 4’real though, cuz ur shit’s were wack no hate though.. ..but elevated (both) |
Voted For: Un'Touched
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb".... Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... ^^^ GOOD MULTIES, WEAK CONCEPTS TOO YOU'RE PUNCHES Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... ^^^ NAW, NOT FEELIN IT Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... ^^^ WEAKEST BAR IN THE BATTLE Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... ^^^ ACTUALLY USED THE MULTIES TOO GOOD EFFECT HERE CLOSER WAS YA ONLY BAR I WAS WITH, I'M NOT A BIG FAN ON MULTIES UNLESS YOU USE THEM TOO REAL NICE FFECT WITH GOOD PUNCHES, SOMETIMES THEY CAN COME ACROSS AS FORCED IN MY OPINNON, AN THATS WHAT ALOT OF YOUR VERSE SEEMED LIKE TOO ME, NO HATE....KEEP DOIN' WHAT YOU DO DOG You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. ^^^ YOUR WEAKEST BAR, SHIT WAS TOO BASIC its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. ^^^ REALLY NICE PUNCH, GOOD HIT september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work ^^^ PRETTY DECENT, WASNT NOTHIN SPECIAL you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. ^^^ GOOD CONCEPT, POORLY WORDED NOT YOUR BEST VERSE, THE UN-TOUCHED LINE WAS THE BEST PUNCH IN A VERY WEAK BATTLE...I EXPECTED ALOT BETTER FROM Y'ALL TWO HEADS, BUT INDEPHZ UNTOUCHED PUNCHLINE WAS THE BEST SHIT IN THE BATTE, BOTH WAS VERY INCONSISTANT WITH THE RHYMES....BUT INDEPH GETS IT FOR THAT PUNCHLINE ALONE. RETURN THE FAVOR IN SIG AGAINST MARVJAY OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED INDEPH Vote removed by request |
Voted For: Un'Touched
1ndeph: You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. ^^^^^WiTH ME & THE RING DONT RYHME FAM...U FORCE DIS its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. ^^^LMAOOOO....GOOD SHIT september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work ^^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN DIS you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. ^^^^NAH...WEAK CLOSER....U HAD 1 HOTT BAR FAM un'touched: Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb".... Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... ^^^OKAY..NOTHIN SPECIAL Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... ^^^^LOL WHUT???? Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... ^^^^DECENT.... Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... ^^^^DA HOT IS WUT U NOT....SHIT WAS GOOD BUT U FUKKED IT UP WHEN DA DROPPED LIKE U SHOT V/UNTOUCHED....HE DIDN'T HAVE NO SPECTACULAR LINES THEY WERE JUST ALL DECENT ONES....AND 1NDEPH U HAD 1 HOT BAR DATZ ALL I CAN SAY RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL |
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This was feedback posted for Un'Touched
just checkin da polls.......a tite 1
an ok battle |
Voted For: 1ndeph
good structure and flow work on vocab nice personals pretty good verse untouched good punches but u were lackin personals work on it and work on ur structure ur lines r mad stretched good battle to both |
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