Maverick vs Tekneek
 

Battle Rules: 30 min check...then 30 min to drop.

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

200 posts to vote.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-15-05 at 02:04 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 01:36 PM.

Maverick has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 01:44 PM.

Yo... I'm back-in-the-place cuz rap-is-my-fate, i spit 'heat' like a 'gat-in-the-waist'... u wack, only time i'll 'feel ya spit' is if u 'spat-in-my-face'...
He only 'run tracks-in-a-race', make this nigga feel 'insecure' cuz i'm 'crackin-his-safe'... ya see grim, but all I see is ‘pussy’ like my girl ‘sat-on-my-face’…
But fuck it i'm crackin-his-face n snatchin-his-cake, i'm packin so don't get boddied-clown... cuz i ‘crack-headz’ like 'Whitney Houston n Bobby-Brown'...
no vocab, only time he use 'big words' is when his 'font-is-large'... here’s a ‘personal’ i fucked ya sister n ya girl in ya moms-garage...
my flow is perpetual, intellectual, bars 'harder' than 'the correctional'... u a rookie i'm a professional, make this 'pussy bleed' like he on his 'menstrual'!!!

jus summik real quick ...still be enough though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo...
Man u aint Memphis bleek U aint got no "tekneek"
U shouldnt have excepted shulda turned ya cheek
this is a blowout not a battle war pussy raps on his keyboard
like starwars ur punchlines couldnt hit even if u had a longsword
"Tekneek" humph after this battle ill leave u none
i dont have to use guns my words will leave u sonned
ya rap "Tekneek" will have u on the corner like a bum
peaceful ass nun tryna cop my style cuz urs aint ill
ya lines put me to sleep like big bottles of benedryl
U owe me my time back so ima leave u wit $100 bill

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werent really feeling that maverik........i expected better
.........but anyway....bumping this

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Voted For: Tekneek

Dayummmmmmmmmmm........hot verse Tek: lets break it down:

Yo...
Man u aint Memphis bleek U aint got no "tekneek"
U shouldnt have excepted shulda turned ya cheek

^^^ Yo I was feelin this one hurr, good intro

this is a blowout not a battle war pussy raps on his keyboard
like starwars ur punchlines couldnt hit even if u had a longsword

This was aiite, average

"Tekneek" humph after this battle ill leave u none
i dont have to use guns my words will leave u sonned

Na man that aint workin homie

ya rap "Tekneek" will have u on the corner like a bum
peaceful ass nun tryna cop my style cuz urs aint ill

Noooo, that bad

ya lines put me to sleep like big bottles of benedryl
U owe me my time back so ima leave u wit $100 bill

Aiite this was really good outro......u messed up2 bars....if cleaned up u wudda won



Yo... I'm back-in-the-place cuz rap-is-my-fate, i spit 'heat' like a 'gat-in-the-waist'... u wack, only time i'll 'feel ya spit' is if u 'spat-in-my-face'...

^^ This was hottttt best line so far

He only 'run tracks-in-a-race', make this nigga feel 'insecure' cuz i'm 'crackin-his-safe'... ya see grim, but all I see is ‘pussy’ like my girl ‘sat-on-my-face’…

Haha bringing the jokes yo these 2 bars won it for me

But fuck it i'm crackin-his-face n snatchin-his-cake, i'm packin so don't get boddied-clown... cuz i ‘crack-headz’ like 'Whitney Houston n Bobby-Brown'...

Aiite aiite....

no vocab, only time he use 'big words' is when his 'font-is-large'... here’s a ‘personal’ i fucked ya sister n ya girl in ya moms-garage...

This was jokes tek.....dayumm

my flow is perpetual, intellectual, bars 'harder' than 'the correctional'... u a rookie i'm a professional, make this 'pussy bleed' like he on his 'menstrual'!!!

HAHAHAHAHA......shit was funny

Yo man my conclusion is that Tekneek wins because he had hard punches through out, yo maverick u had some disses but they didnt match to tek neeks...........RTF to my battle with MADDRAPPER.....link in sig

nice vote..............................
fa sho i'll hit up ya battle and leave my opinion v/soon

uppin this mother fucker

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Voted For: Tekneek

my vote goes to tekneek he came hard wit da punches his structure wasnt good but his verse was nice you had a nice flow also to add to ur win up yo vocab n structure
return the favor link n sig or i will have dis vote removed

fa sho...................................soon as i finish ma battle..............
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Voted For: Tekneek

Your first bar whored his whole verse, his is easy...
tek gets it dueto using mad multis and havin better punches although a couple of played concepts were used.

Mav, yours was just weak son, elevate.

will ex. more if needed.
no hate
rtf

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uppin this.............................................. .

Voted For: Tekneek

finiush him.............................................

Voted For: Tekneek

Maverick
Yo...
Man u aint Memphis bleek U aint got no "tekneek"
U shouldnt have excepted shulda turned ya cheek
Bad wordplay and bad wording of punch
this is a blowout not a battle war pussy raps on his keyboard
like starwars ur punchlines couldnt hit even if u had a longsword
Dissed yourself, bad similie to stars wars.
"Tekneek" humph after this battle ill leave u none
i dont have to use guns my words will leave u sonned
Self glorification and the wordplay wasn't even there.
ya rap "Tekneek" will have u on the corner like a bum
peaceful ass nun tryna cop my style cuz urs aint ill
Bad similie with self glorification again.
ya lines put me to sleep like big bottles of benedryl
U owe me my time back so ima leave u wit $100 bill
Decent idea, bad wording.

Overall, this verse sucked. Punches and personals were worded horribly and most of this verse was self glorification. You need to work on real punches and personals. Wordplay wasn't that creative either. Tried to get too much from his name. I didn't like anything from your verse.

Tekneek
Yo... I'm back-in-the-place cuz rap-is-my-fate, i spit 'heat' like a 'gat-in-the-waist'... u wack, only time i'll 'feel ya spit' is if u 'spat-in-my-face'...
First off, work on your structure. Decent punch. Kind of dissed yourself, but ya.
He only 'run tracks-in-a-race', make this nigga feel 'insecure' cuz i'm 'crackin-his-safe'... ya see grim, but all I see is ‘pussy’ like my girl ‘sat-on-my-face’…
Forcing multis in here. Flow is off. Bad punch
But fuck it i'm crackin-his-face n snatchin-his-cake, i'm packin so don't get boddied-clown... cuz i ‘crack-headz’ like 'Whitney Houston n Bobby-Brown'...
Self glorification and forced multis.
no vocab, only time he use 'big words' is when his 'font-is-large'... here’s a ‘personal’ i fucked ya sister n ya girl in ya moms-garage...
Doing good till the end. Fake personal. booooo
my flow is perpetual, intellectual, bars 'harder' than 'the correctional'... u a rookie i'm a professional, make this 'pussy bleed' like he on his 'menstrual'!!!
Played punch.

Overall, don't force your multis so much. Your flow is really choppy and your punches suffer because of it.

I vote for Tekneek for some punches and a personal or two.

v-Tekneek