Dizzee Rascal vs slik flo
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-15-05 at 05:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

slik flo has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 02:34 PM.

CHECK IT...

GO BACK HOME...UR JUST A DIZZEE WANNABE
WEN YOU GROW UP...U AINT GONNA HAVE A FAMILY
U NO WHY...COZ I'M DA BEST FREESTYLIN MC IN HISTORY

I'M THE ILLEST REALEST MC,I'LL MAKE YA HEAD IN A SPIN
COZ EVERYBODY KNOWS HUS GONNA WIN..

U AINT A RASCAL HOMEBOI....
YOUR JUST A BUMBA CLAAT
NO TRACE THAT..UR GAY FAMILYS A RAT

I SAW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER...
UR DUMD DAD..and fat mum DIED...WHAT A BUMMER...

UR FAMILYS A DISGRACE TO THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE.THAT JUST MAKES ME SICKEN..
THAT YO MUM GAVE BIRTH TO A BURNT CHICKEN

Hurry Up I Aint Got All Day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 04:03 PM.

Give a pound donation as u lie looking from the foor in admiration
My fist'l let the expiration on flow-age with gradual deformation *
Wiv creation splitting organisms str8 faced son it aint funny
Ull never see a sick-ill-sell didnt u know ethiopians have no money
As i son thee as u run home left skinned down to the bone
Cus i make battles hard for flow like competetive kidney stones
Home in on the known leave u homeless cus u seem new-to-me
And branch wins? Nobody see sick-nest like constant immunity *2
Getting screwed over g, open micz like this bar just skipped
.................................................. ........................................
So cant u see im working on ko's see as i employ three
And dates? Know that nobody calls sick like loyal
employees

* flowage is the gradual deformation
*2 Sickness/nest hence the branch bit, blah lol

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

damn waste of bars huh @ dizzee

lmaoo


punches...dizzee
personals...slik u tried
creativity...dizzee
wordplay...dizzee
multiz...none
humor...dizzee[ tha ethiopian line
vocab...dizzee needs more tho
enjoyment...dizzee

SLIK FLO....needs ALOT of work....easy win V=Dizzee Rascal

Werd 1-0 nice looking swoooooooooooooooooooooooosh

swoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooosh

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

dizzie u shouldnt be herb bashin yo..................

Still Uppin Votes................:thumbup::thumbup::thumbup::t humbup:

sickseed son...........you make me sick...........go take a dump man....yo wurds are tight but loose

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

uppin for Rascal............................................ ............

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

GO BACK HOME...UR JUST A DIZZEE WANNABE
WEN YOU GROW UP...U AINT GONNA HAVE A FAMILY
U NO WHY...COZ I'M DA BEST FREESTYLIN MC IN HISTORY

I'M THE ILLEST REALEST MC,I'LL MAKE YA HEAD IN A SPIN
COZ EVERYBODY KNOWS HUS GONNA WIN..

U AINT A RASCAL HOMEBOI....
YOUR JUST A BUMBA CLAAT
NO TRACE THAT..UR GAY FAMILYS A RAT

I SAW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER...
UR DUMD DAD..and fat mum DIED...WHAT A BUMMER...

UR FAMILYS A DISGRACE TO THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE.THAT JUST MAKES ME SICKEN..
THAT YO MUM GAVE BIRTH TO A BURNT CHICKEN

LoL!!!!!!That was horrible.Did you read the tutorials before doin this shit?No punches watsoever.READ TUTORIALS.


Give a pound donation as u lie looking from the foor in admiration
My fist'l let the expiration on flow-age with gradual deformation *
Wiv creation splitting organisms str8 faced son it aint funny
Ull never see a sick-ill-sell didnt u know ethiopians have no money
As i son thee as u run home left skinned down to the bone
Cus i make battles hard for flow like competetive kidney stones
Home in on the known leave u homeless cus u seem new-to-me
And branch wins? Nobody see sick-nest like constant immunity *2
Getting screwed over g, open micz like this bar just skipped

^^You didn't need to post that much cause the other guy doesn't even know how to make a verse.I'm still rolling on how stupuid the other guy's verse was.Anyways...ur punches/flow was nutin special...you could get merked easy by some vets.

Vote-Dizzie(return the fovaor in the link or vote will be dq'd.)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851
^^vote in it dizzie rascal

Voted For: slik flo

GOOD:

Flow - Tie
Structure - Rascal
Punchlines - Tie
vocab - Slik
Multi's - hmmmm Slik
Wordplay - nope
Nameplay - Slik

BAD:

forced Rhymes - nope
Forced Multis - nope
Non Sence - nope

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - nope
Creative Punches - Slik
creative multi's - no

PERSONALS:
No good Personals

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Slik
Closing: Tie

COMMENT:
Slik had better creativity and better punches, he had a better opening, and both had good flow, so the winner is slik

V/ Slick

RTF!!!!!!!!!!!!! links on my sig....................

Werd ill get round to rtf soon
and ax dogg lmao
u r not allowed to vote on my battles again cus u dnt know wot ur talkin about

Comoooooooooooooooone vooooooooooooooooooooooooooote

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

lol i even have to explain? iight slik you reeeallllyyy need to elevate cuz that was pure garbage,,,no punch's at all...
UR DUMD DAD..and fat mum DIED...WHAT A BUMMER... yo WTF was that? anyway dizzee pretty dope man...dope vocab man...nice structure ...flik never but NEVER talk about you in your battles...never talk about how dope u are man

vote : Dizzee Rascal

Good looking on breakdowns voters appreciated

Swoosh

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Dizzee gets this due to the fact that he actually used punches, had a good strucure decent flow reasdonable vocab.

slik you dint, you need to hit up some tutorials on punchlines for real breh...

rtf

I fort he bit crazy titch at 1st,,,,,,
anyway ill hit em up tomorow g

its tommorow dawg.....

links in sig fam, good lookin.

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Mac Donald's.......................................... .............

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Lets get some more votes so i can up by bloody thread in higher league lol

lmfao dum bastard, a well at least u gave him some votes homie
swooooooooooosh this bitch

Upping this for closure................................

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

dizzee took this easy. word................................