Murdz vs Mimesis
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-16-05 at 02:44 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 02:17 AM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 02:27 AM.

Time to de-rust myself. All the personals I use are legit.

Stick to the small font, son. Nothing you type will be big anyway.

Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
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Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins

Fuck outta here..

I knew the small font was coming :shoot:


:o..

lmao.. damnit and i was seriously thinkin i should leave it normal size.. but stoopid me.. :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Murdz
 

damn, nice mlties fam, nice punches mim.

good luck.

mim owned. ez .

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Checking This Out.....................................

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

my opinion.....mim took this

murdz....yea you had the multies going on and some ok wordplay in there at points, but mostly you were talkin shit and it seriously lacked for any kind of effective punches, i think the highlight of ya verse was the slim-to-nun line......

mim.....can tell ya a little rusty, an ok drop though still, you had some good punches in there, some not so good, that lil cali one wasn't all that hot, but the following bar was funny i thought.....

aight drops from both....both were lackin in places
but mimesis takes it in my opinion

thanks for ur feed solo... and daubz appreciated....

Voted For: Mimesis

My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
^^lots of meaningless multi's
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
^^nope, flow fell off in setup too
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
^^blah, wheres the punch?
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
^^flow fell way off in setup, punch is generic n lame
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
^^ok, but whats with all the filler
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!
^^eh, wouldve been good used against a different opponent
like hotshh... but it had no releventcy in this battle n was weak....
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overall you need to work on not putting tonnes of filler in your bars, make your personals connect, actually just get some in your verse first...... so many bars were wack with
meaningless multi's, your better off not to right with them if you can't use them right...
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Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
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^^decent, good opener, straight to the point
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Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
^^lol, good nameplay....connected
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
^^decent
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
^^good personal, simple but good
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
^^lol,...decent
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
^^closer was iffy to me....
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overall i was feeling your personals n i could tell you didnt bother putting filler into your verse like murdz did , best line was the mu-line, shit was creative n had me crackin up..
both dropped decent but murdz had no personals n just generic blahness...

Word. Thanks for the vote.

1-0 Me.

Holla at cha boobies.

werd.... gud battle mimesis ... uppin for thisssssssssssssssssssssss

It's already at the top, but I feel like upping again so I can feel cool!!

lmao yeah ill do the same.. yo man lol usually id be pissed at loosin but i dont mind loosin cause i knew ud beat me gud battle yo....

Lol. It's all good yo.

If ever want to collab or something get at me..

Word.

Voted For: Murdz

Mimesis - ur opener was creative but kinda weak..ur next bar was nice..good personal..the lil cali line..didnt really hit hard..but it was still an ok personal..ur last 2 barz werent very good..ur closer was pretty weak..overall i think ur verse was decent..i had a good flow..it didnt seem like anything was forced..i expected u to come harder in ur verse.....6/10




Murdz - now ur verse was really strange..ur multis seemed forced..ur first line was dumb..well ur whole opener was weak..but after that u did well..i think i liked ur slim to nun bar the best..good stuff..the one thing ur verse lacked was personals..the only thing u had about him was when u said Mimesis beating murdz?..thats it..woulda liked to see more personals..ok closer..overall i think u need to stop using the multis cause they make ur lines streched.....8/10




Murdz wins

I don't get how you only say one positive thing about his verse in your breakdown, but give him an 8/10 :confused:

S'all good though.

1-1 Uppin.

woah.. lol yeah man ima have to hold back on ma multies.. uppin yo..

his wordplay was a lot better than yours..and even though some of his punches didnt hit really hard they were enough to beat urs..the only good line i think u had was the draft pick line..everything else wasnt really creative and didnt hit very hard..tryin to clarify this so it doesnt seem like im hatin on Mimesis

Nah, I wasn't taking it as hate.

I'm just trying to get back into the swing of things, battle wise, so I just wanted to know why you thought I lost.

It's all good yo.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Mimesis took this one...

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Polls..yeup...

Dope drop...

The Establishment is wicked like woah..

Word to 2 votes and like, 6 people peeping polls.

:wtf:

Voted For: Mimesis

I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
^^^liked this shit... good creativity and all but the whole concept of "your ganna lose" is beyond played and is selfglorifying

mim-
Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
^^feelin and a decently unplayed concept
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
^^^ also good concept and good wordplay

out of your verses u had equal lines i liked but outta those i liked mims better... cuz they was less played concepts and also not selfglorifying

battle links in sig return honest votes please.

Thanks for the vote.

2-1 Me.

Upping for more..

Voted For: Murdz

explanation

Mimesis
Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
Niec Starter
Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
oHH oK i sEE tHE NaME pLAY lol dINT sE iT aT fIRST
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
LOL Funny ..>Decent BuT funny
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
..:shocked: Im < Of course as you can see
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
....Sloppy..
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
...LOl Nice ender..

Overall i Think That You couldve/ shouldve done better considering your talents i Think That You lacked off on Murdz But I think That Murdz Takes this battle although very close I Think that You Should never let your gaurds down I dont care who you battling always be ready Ya Heard?

Murdz
My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
....Nice Multi's Although The Punch wasnt very Effective..
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
...LOL That Was Nice I Liked That...
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
/.....Nice Multis but as before The Attempted punch wasnt very effective
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
......Ok Wordplay couldve be stated better....
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
.....LOl That Was It Man i Like That...
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!
....Nice wordplay ...
Overall I Think That You Focus to much on multis and stuff but when you throw a punch the shit is deadly man Nice stuff I think That although I respect Mim I Think That You take this battle man Really

HOT ASS BATTLE DEF WORTHE READING

RTF In any battle link in my Sig Or Mim Can Pay me a mill and Murdz RTF

Lmao. This is a lot closer then I expected it to be.

Whatever.

lol damn yo... werd.. alot closer...................

Lmao. It's whatever yo..

2-2 Upping this shit..

Voted For: Mimesis

ight this was an ok battle here......

mim:

ive seen you drop alot better man, so obviously you were a lil rusty in this battle, you did good though, personals were decent some of your punches were good, flow and structure is on point, you should battle more and get to where u were originally..... here is a couple lines i liked...

Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
^^ this made me laugh lol nice punch

Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
^^ anotehr dope punch man i liekd this one the best

overall you had a decent verse it was solid in all aspects really, can't complain u did what u needed to do good job.

murdz:

haha dope use of multies but the punches were weak in this really, they wee talking bout what yuor going to do for example, im gonna shoot you n all that disperce your wig.. that aint really a punch in my eyes so thats why i aint giving this battle to you..... sorry man u did an ight job but it wasn't good enough... pz


v/ mim for haveing consistant punches and having a more enjoyable verse

plz rtf on my marv battle or this vote gets removed link is in the sig, pz

thats iight yo.. thanks for the votein..................

ight yo... think u can hit my marv battle up wit an honest vote for me fam??

Voted For: Murdz

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

^i see why you duck me......cuz damn...you suck so mutha fuckin much...dat verse=wackness......but i'm not gonna vote...but if i did it would go to murdz wit no hate...and honesty i thought you would win...lol...but when you grow a decent size balls come see me...~1~

Lmao. Did you not see the part of my verse where I said "Time to de-rust myself?" I haven't battled in a shit load of time.

Just shut the fuck up.

3-3 uppin.

Voted For: Mimesis

Aight...this was close actually...each person has their pros and cons...i basically chose mimesis because he was more on a punchline-personal basis...his punches were directly toward you and in a battle state basically...murdz lines were good with wordplay and vocabulary...but he didnt hit mimesis hard they were mostly threats and didnt feel like you were dissing HIM but instead saying random lines...

overall even thought murdz had good wordplay and vocab...he just wasnt going directly toward mim with solid punches like mim was doin...

good luck to both no hate
peace

Word. 4-3 Me.

Upping this shit again yo..

Vote up.