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Some Funny Punchlines to SABOTAGE
SABOTAGE Even with a cab and garage you couldn’t
Drive straight just a jive fake with no wheels you wouldn’t Know rhymes if JAY-Z gave you some you behave dumb Like an uneducated chump, devastated punk bitch you plumb Crazy with dilapidated funk say what? you elevated to a cunt? Your rap voice is like a strap on a horse wet with sweat don’t front With a rope you couldn’t tie down a flow try clown But a hoe you blind and fat where fuck your rhymes at? |
2 words of advice to you : quit rapping.......
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hahahahahahah hey yo sabotage you got those beats made yet bro? |
yeah man i got a bunch
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werd! you got anything with a dark feel to it...sort of a royce 5'9 feel to it?
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i got exactly what u need homey.....
...i know what u mean....... i'll have it to you by friday....... |
thanks bro
*seals himself in a box with a timer on it to open friday* |
yes it is dope.....
....dope i tell you........ |
im still wonderin how u came up with this stuff........
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no match this shit was off the hook like cannned bait
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got a lot of fake ass punks if they say that whack ass no vocab below average shit SABOTAGE WROTE was betterf than this
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yo man this was sooooooooooooooooooo fuckiiiiiiiiiiin weeeeekkkk............get outtttt man ure so shittttttt
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That was hot as fuck.
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Kein Witz thanks for the props and being honest it seems cats like intermental go tproblems and can't come true
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look...its not all about vocab.....this isnt an english class.....
...okay ya verse here seriously wasnt that good..ur verse flowed well and everything was even but you really didnt have any punchlines..punches are meant to hit the opponent hard and none of those lines did that..yeah ur ok with the multis but if u title ur verse "punchlines to sabotage" then come out with punchlines.. thats real feedback....... |
Lmao. Just kidding, Madrapper.
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shit was funny and cats below average and can't write punchlines
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seemed like a long run on sentence to me... i mean you can ryhme but the punches needed some refinement n rewording to be considered punches maddrapper...is this supposed to be audio...or are you text? what gives..? cuz alot of what you put in there wasnt relative to the entirety of your bars n verse as a whole... |
thank you..someone agrees with me..
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damn bitch u realli do suck, im glad to be the president of the MADDRAPPER IS WACK ASSOCIATION, it will get alot of support..
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LOL.....I agree with Murdz and im provin it right now im whoopin tht bitch 3-0 in battles rite now
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the only thing being proved is that these cats are below average and use played out punchlines and not on my level they can really use some maddrapper's classroom work right not they can't write punchlines the least bit WELL ANYWAY THANKS FOR RESPONDING AND TAKE NOTES PLEASE TIRED OF READING THE PLAYED OUT BELOW AVERAGE GARBAGE YALL WRITE)
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