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MADDRAPPER 06-16-05 02:52 AM

Some Funny Punchlines to SABOTAGE
 
SABOTAGE Even with a cab and garage you couldn’t
Drive straight just a jive fake with no wheels you wouldn’t
Know rhymes if JAY-Z gave you some you behave dumb
Like an uneducated chump, devastated punk bitch you plumb
Crazy with dilapidated funk say what? you elevated to a cunt?
Your rap voice is like a strap on a horse wet with sweat don’t front
With a rope you couldn’t tie down a flow try clown
But a hoe you blind and fat where fuck your rhymes at?

Implicit 06-16-05 04:02 AM

2 words of advice to you : quit rapping.......

Ysdat 06-16-05 04:09 AM

^^^^^^^^
hahahahahahah

hey yo sabotage you got those beats made yet bro?

Implicit 06-16-05 04:10 AM

yeah man i got a bunch

Ysdat 06-16-05 04:13 AM

werd! you got anything with a dark feel to it...sort of a royce 5'9 feel to it?

Implicit 06-16-05 04:20 AM

i got exactly what u need homey.....

...i know what u mean.......

i'll have it to you by friday.......

Ysdat 06-16-05 04:34 AM

thanks bro

*seals himself in a box with a timer on it to open friday*

Implicit 06-16-05 04:42 AM

yes it is dope.....

....dope i tell you........

Implicit 06-16-05 05:32 AM

im still wonderin how u came up with this stuff........

MADDRAPPER 06-16-05 08:48 AM

no match this shit was off the hook like cannned bait

MADDRAPPER 06-16-05 02:57 PM

got a lot of fake ass punks if they say that whack ass no vocab below average shit SABOTAGE WROTE was betterf than this

PrahJect 06-16-05 03:02 PM

yo man this was sooooooooooooooooooo fuckiiiiiiiiiiin weeeeekkkk............get outtttt man ure so shittttttt

Crazy Hades 06-16-05 03:08 PM

That was hot as fuck.

MADDRAPPER 06-17-05 11:43 AM

Kein Witz thanks for the props and being honest it seems cats like intermental go tproblems and can't come true

Implicit 06-17-05 04:26 PM

look...its not all about vocab.....this isnt an english class.....

...okay ya verse here seriously wasnt that good..ur verse flowed well and everything was even but you really didnt have any punchlines..punches are meant to hit the opponent hard and none of those lines did that..yeah ur ok with the multis but if u title ur verse "punchlines to sabotage" then come out with punchlines..

thats real feedback.......

Crazy Hades 06-17-05 04:33 PM

Lmao. Just kidding, Madrapper.

MADDRAPPER 06-18-05 01:40 AM

shit was funny and cats below average and can't write punchlines

¤ÐÅž¤ 06-18-05 02:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sabotage
look...its not all about vocab.....this isnt an english class.....

...okay ya verse here seriously wasnt that good..ur verse flowed well and everything was even but you really didnt have any punchlines..punches are meant to hit the opponent hard and none of those lines did that..yeah ur ok with the multis but if u title ur verse "punchlines to sabotage" then come out with punchlines..

thats real feedback.......

seemed like a long run on sentence to me...
i mean you can ryhme but the punches needed some
refinement n rewording to be considered punches
maddrapper...is this supposed to be audio...or are you text?
what gives..? cuz alot of what you put in there wasnt
relative to the entirety of your bars n verse as a whole...

Implicit 06-18-05 05:10 AM

thank you..someone agrees with me..

BiZzO 06-18-05 06:59 AM

damn bitch u realli do suck, im glad to be the president of the MADDRAPPER IS WACK ASSOCIATION, it will get alot of support..

PrahJect 06-18-05 07:42 AM

LOL.....I agree with Murdz and im provin it right now im whoopin tht bitch 3-0 in battles rite now

MADDRAPPER 06-18-05 11:34 AM

the only thing being proved is that these cats are below average and use played out punchlines and not on my level they can really use some maddrapper's classroom work right not they can't write punchlines the least bit WELL ANYWAY THANKS FOR RESPONDING AND TAKE NOTES PLEASE TIRED OF READING THE PLAYED OUT BELOW AVERAGE GARBAGE YALL WRITE)


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