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SNE DAWG vs Ax Dogg
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6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 06-19-05 at 10:27 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
SNE DAWG has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 10:29 PM.
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Am ready to murder your ass, take the victory and get laid with your bunny lass
Your gurl is here testin ma “stash”, you aint got nuthin, all you talk about is smokin grass Ax Dogg I´ll axe your dick, you think you good battlin..but who the hell is this prick You dont even got clique, prayin all day in church thats where your ass should stick “Sellin weed to children”, I dont care if your a perverted bitch, dont worry we still friends I kill niggaz like you n´still bill em´,he may be a “dogg” but a return every bark he sends No one is in your forum cause you dont “spit magic”,you kiss ma shoes and we know it, you a faggit You aint no “Weedman”* when you havent tasted the chronic,you aint no gangsta watchin “The Supersonics” “Ax”, am here rappin bout medival weapons, I wouldn´t battle this if I didn´t know that I can kill you in seconds Heaven n´Hell, the other worlds send us,but I killed you so the evil power wins and another mark in the records But I dont have all time to battle bitches, so I may just stop this so you dont end up wit stiches Thats it this is the most your life reaches, post your verse bitch am sure I´ll find glitches *"Weedman":he made a post in open mic named weedman, and he had and image sayin AxDogg Weedman in his sig before |
Ax Dogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 11:11 PM.
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Ladies & Gentlemen, Pimps n playas, Time for Ax to bring the chaos
Sne I don't understand why u rap bout hoes cuz u neither a pimp or a playa Let it go dawg, u ain't the best of the site, You diss real emcees with mexican Jokes I have to spit after him, cuz he either bites or he just spits half half and chokes The only vote U've got on any battle was by me, and it was a mistake Why do I drop personals on this bitch, U see?, Murk you is a piece of cake I' ain't droppin usin a good vocab, He might not understand, Don't anybody in here get it??.... S.N.E. Stupids Never End This ain't "your culture", leave this game alone, cuz My Rap is A Sculpture This is "just-a-torture", But still think u belong to here, like if u was a Martyr My rap leaves you full with perturbation, So hot it makes u practice masturbation, This ain't a war declaration, if it was It left you breathless, its a devastation If u need explanations PM me..... |
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Voted For: SNE DAWG
HIS START UP WAS WHACK...I MEAN..IC UD DO BETTA THAN AX DOGG...WHAT A FUCKIN NAME Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: SNE DAWG
Ladies & Gentlemen, Pimps n playas, Time for Ax to bring the chaos Sne I don't understand why u rap bout hoes cuz u neither a pimp or a playa ^^^Basic Let it go dawg, u ain't the best of the site, You diss real emcees with mexican Jokes I have to spit after him, cuz he either bites or he just spits half half and chokes ^^Whack as fuq The only vote U've got on any battle was by me, and it was a mistake Why do I drop personals on this bitch, U see?, Murk you is a piece of cake ^^good punchline?.....merkin him is a peice a cake? I' ain't droppin usin a good vocab, He might not understand, Don't anybody in here get it??.... S.N.E. Stupids Never End ^^good....nice rip on his name This ain't "your culture", leave this game alone, cuz My Rap is A Sculpture This is "just-a-torture", But still think u belong to here, like if u was a Martyr ^^^nope...suks My rap leaves you full with perturbation, So hot it makes u practice masturbation, This ain't a war declaration, if it was It left you breathless, its a devastation ^^wak Really....you only had one decent line and that was when you ripped his name.You need to drasticall improve ya punches. Am ready to murder your ass, take the victory and get laid with your bunny lass Your gurl is here testin ma “stash”, you aint got nuthin, all you talk about is smokin grass ^^so wat if he talks bout smoking grass Ax Dogg I´ll axe your dick, you think you good battlin..but who the hell is this prick You dont even got clique, prayin all day in church thats where your ass should stick ^^wak...but at least an attempt “Sellin weed to children”, I dont care if your a perverted bitch, dont worry we still friends I kill niggaz like you n´still bill em´,he may be a “dogg” but a return every bark he sends ^^wtf? No one is in your forum cause you dont “spit magic”,you kiss ma shoes and we know it, you a faggit You aint no “Weedman”* when you havent tasted the chronic,you aint no gangsta watchin “The Supersonics” ^^didn't rhmye “Ax”, am here rappin bout medival weapons, I wouldn´t battle this if I didn´t know that I can kill you in seconds Heaven n´Hell, the other worlds send us,but I killed you so the evil power wins and another mark in the records ^^stretched out as fuq But I dont have all time to battle bitches, so I may just stop this so you dont end up wit stiches Thats it this is the most your life reaches, post your verse bitch am sure I´ll find glitches ^^wak Ur shit was stretches....had no structure...wakest punches.No werdplay,multid,or metas.Whack. Vote0-Ax Dogg(returntha favor or vote's dq'd) “http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845 Unexplained vote removed |
ooh...shit ..my bad.........I'll report the vote.....I meant to vote for AX Dogg.
Sry bout that AX. |
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Voted For: SNE DAWG
this was an ok battle SNE Dawg - ur verse was alright..u tried some wordplay but it didnt work too well..ur punches?..not really..ur best line in ur verse was about sending back every bark he sends..the weedman line was kinda weak..but u did ur thing.....7/10 Ax Dogg - u had an alright verse..it flowed well..u didnt ret to strech ur lines too much..u had a few multis..u didnt really have any punches in there that i thought were very good..u did ok..nothing really special..u should check out the punchline cypher to get a better idea of a punch and to help you out.....5/10 SNE Dawg wins please return the favor |
This was feedback posted for SNE DAWG
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Voted For: Ax Dogg
before I vote I want to get clear that this ain't a hate vote, and I know he gonna say it becouse he bit my lines and I told the site admin. vote = Ax first off the flow was ok in both verses, structure was fucked up from Sne, punchlines were stupid from both verses... The only good personals were like 3 (2 Ax and 1 Sne) the point of Sne's battle was that he bit lines from Babble.On writin em diferently, but ok... they were good, the multi's were tight only on Ax's battle, Nameplay was a tie definetly, as well as creativity. Ax 8 out of ten and sne 7 out ten, good battle this was a honest, no hate vote... so don't talk shit man, am tellin you this as an RV voter. |
Voted For: Ax Dogg
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This was feedback posted for SNE DAWG
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Voted For: Ax Dogg
dis vote is goin to Ax 4sho...only because his punches hit harder...however, both of yall verses were a bit on tha ass side open: tie: dont know who could get dis one...both of em wasnt good close: Ax: damn kid, ya multis was fiya fareal...nice one personals: Ax: i guess u get it cuz tha otha verse had none metas: Ax: was more creative than SNE punches: Ax: yeah, i told u dat multis: SNE: multis was sick, but dats bout it...step ya battle game up win: Ax Dogg gets my vote...dont like it, sue me for all my RV money |
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let me ask you sumthing..... who is winnin on here??? your only vote should be deleted cuz its a hate vote but I don't know eith who you went n cried so it wasn't deleted... oh... and by the way: jealus is spelled jealous..... |
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Voted For: Ax Dogg
Ax dogg-came hard with perfect structure,nice punches,good personals,and nice word play. fav line The only vote U've got on any battle was by me, and it was a mistake Why do I drop personals on this bitch, U see?, Murk you is a piece of cake I' ain't droppin usin a good vocab, He might not understand, Don't anybody in here get it??.... S.N.E. Stupids Never End S.N.E-aight punches,good wordplay,but you had a horrible structure and your rhems didnt hit hard fav line “Ax”, am here rappin bout medival weapons, I wouldn´t battle this if I didn´t know that I can kill you in seconds Heaven n´Hell, the other worlds send us,but I killed you so the evil power wins and another mark in the records overall i think ax dogg got this but it was a good battle |
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^^^thanx man... Favor will be returned *honestly* lol
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Voted For: Ax Dogg
i vote ax dogg his punches were better and he had some good personals sne u had some attempt at personals but they were not as good as they could be. and your punches were not a hard as they could have been either. work on these things and ull be okay. ax dogg need a lil work but overall keep doin what u doin |
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