Wayne vs Dizzee Rascal
 

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8 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 11:03 AM

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Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 12:00 PM.

im the sickest FORCE and im CLEVER, i have ya CORPSE SEVERED and DISMEMBERED tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD
got 9's bust at this GUY 'like you started laugin' i split ya SIDE, bludgeon his THIGHS, wit icepicks shoved in ya EYES
i hate these WACK KIDS with who i ATTACK WITH SPITS, leave him with CRACKED RIBS, and FRACTURED HIPS,all is SONNIN-THIS BITCH,MAULED-RUN IN AND-SPLIFFEDwhen tha TEK RIPS ill DRAW BLOOOD FROM THIS PRICK like 'DIABETICS'!
ill have this BITCH catch shots from the MAC, till his DOME SPLITS and CRACKS, im QUICK with ATTACKS
tear him apart till hes CRUDE BONES, my shots have you ~in graved~(engraved) like TOMBSTONES
i come with INTENSE SCRIPTS, with TEXT-SICK, i have tha TEK SPIT, i DENT KIDS, with BENT RIBS, i make ya HEAD SPLIT when i COMMEND HITS, with ya NECK SLIT
ya raps are HARDLY DECENT, but i got venomous WORDPLAY last time you had a 'SWEET 16' was at ya BIRTHDAY (16 lines)

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 08:47 AM.

Seems insane like de-hydrated slaves have u fall at the cane
But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne (Bruce Wayne)
Same similes? caressing angry how this pussys jaw fist bound
As u say weighin/wayne in last like bulimics piling on the pounds
On the ground like jelous hobo's hence at my 'dis-pence'
With bars of jibberish no wonder ur 'multis-pack' non-sense *
Seem tense? u should campaign for a loss see the mass elects
Shit on this ledge-end/legend like seagulls with bowel defects *2
Stretched marks ur slayed taking ur last words u should pray
As ill put humilation in waynes-world lik garth say "IM GAY"
But hey ur not THAT bad drugin satan leave ur death enhanced
Couldnt be felt underground as i drain ur spirit from existance ( just think )
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers *3


*Stands over the humilated fetus in accomplishment*

* He always floods his verse with pointless multis
*2 Hes in living legendz hence ledge-end/legend
*3 Appendix pronounced A-pen-dicks hence the gay writer reference and gift=present

Blah if u dont understand the metaphors piss off

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

alot of useless rymes because of the forced multies, an your structure is awful @ wayne...


Tight verse D.R, Do you, man...good punches, you should have this wrapped up for real


Uppin this for famlaaaaay.........

Upping this for some votes...................nice lukin teph

Sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepe rs lol

il return favour for 2 if u do this in the next hour

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Wayne- Your verse was so jumbled up its not even funny.. But anyway... I sense you're going for a multi type of style which i've learned honestly does not much of anything in a battle without placing the proper punches... You onyl had like 4 punches in your whole 16, the rest was just aiming for multis... Too much gangsta talk aswell... Not very consistent... the punches you did do were well done but still couldn't match up to D.R.s...

Dizzee Rascal- First line was alright and the second was dope, that bruise wayne shit was clever... nice play of his name... Very consistent with the dope punches... Punches hit much harder than wayne's but alot of the reason this was so is because he was very consistent and his shit was so jumbled... Nice personals about how he raps aswell...

Dizzee Rascal took this easy...

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

ehh, this battle wuz kinda weak, wayne, u didnt have any punches, except that last line, bout tha 16 lines, that wuz nice. but u just try n put a bunch of multies n shit, but u gotta concentrate on ya punches. n ya structure wuz all ova tha place. dizzee rascal, u didnt have very good punches, i didnt even git most of them, n most of tha ones i did git i thot were kinda stupid, LOL. but no hate 2 either 1 of u, it wuz a retardedly close battle, but ima have 2 go wit dizzee on this 1
......................... $JOHN DOE$

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lol at not getting some
ight thought

2-0 upping this

This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

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nice closer.

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

umm a 1 sided battle here if u ask me...

dizzee... you had some dope lines in there, nice wordplay and some real dope punches... flow and structure were good, personals were decent fam... here is 1 bar i did like:

Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
^^ lol mad wordplay in this man thios was your dopest line easy...


wayne... man u need to fix up on alot of things your multie4s are ight but they are pointless they aint gonna win u battles... punches do and i didn't really see any decent punches in there the first line was self glorification so naa not feeling it really, i couldn't tell where your lines end n shit u need to fix up on that... lose the multies and look up punches you'll get better wit time...

v/ dizzee he had alot better punches more creative lines better wordplay and a more enjoyable verse ... pz

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

i think that diz took it by surpise.....

Wayne over there....recycled....

check on line 5 CRACKED

and on line 8 CRACKS

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lol, fuckin herb^^

recycled...lmfao. ..

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

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Upping this.............................................. .................

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Well, this didnt need much of an explaination in my opinion. Dizzee took this easily. Wayne came with alot of basic concepts and his verse was just weak. Dizee had some nice nameplay and some hard hitting punches to go along with it.

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Dizzee

But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne

This was creative. It hit but it still could have been alot better.

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Wayne

tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD

This is one of the lines that fucked up ya verse. This is really played and I have heard it a million times. You should have came more original here.

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Anyway, Dizzee gets the win for better nameplay and stronger punches.

Vote- Dizee rascal

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Wayne ur a little bitch getting votes DQ's because ur upset
Man whatever
Upping this then, never gon get closed if u keep bitchin about votes

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stop cryin you know i wasnt online and you got ya dickrider together to vote

Yes i got my dickriders......Every single 1 of them infact sorry iv been getting them every battle so far....
seriously ur the 1 that couldnt face defeat but whatever
u wont benefit from dislusion

But nvm we can argue all u want once this is over
swoooooooooosh

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Dizzee took this battle
Flow: Dizzee
Structure: Dizzee
Punch's: Dizzee
Creativity: Dizzee
Multis: Wayne definitly
WordPlay: Wayne

this was a close battle but dizzee won bcuz of the structure...no hate only an honest voter

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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

aiight let's see:

Wayne:
im the sickest FORCE and im CLEVER, i have ya CORPSE SEVERED and DISMEMBERED tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD
blah.. ok.,..... 3/10
got 9's bust at this GUY 'like you started laugin' i split ya SIDE, bludgeon his THIGHS, wit icepicks shoved in ya EYES
no...... 2/10
i hate these WACK KIDS with who i ATTACK WITH SPITS, leave him with CRACKED RIBS, and FRACTURED HIPS,all is SONNIN-THIS BITCH,MAULED-RUN IN AND-SPLIFFEDwhen tha TEK RIPS ill DRAW BLOOOD FROM THIS PRICK like 'DIABETICS'!
ill have this BITCH catch shots from the MAC, till his DOME SPLITS and CRACKS, im QUICK with ATTACKS
tear him apart till hes CRUDE BONES, my shots have you ~in graved~(engraved) like TOMBSTONES
i come with INTENSE SCRIPTS, with TEXT-SICK, i have tha TEK SPIT, i DENT KIDS, with BENT RIBS, i make ya HEAD SPLIT when i COMMEND HITS, with ya NECK SLIT
ya raps are HARDLY DECENT, but i got venomous WORDPLAY last time you had a 'SWEET 16' was at ya BIRTHDAY

wow..... um, your strutute real hard to read. So I'm jus gonna put it all here. Your verse was decent. No real hard hittin' punches. Flow was ok. but damn, fix your structure up.


Dizze:
Seems insane like de-hydrated slaves have u fall at the cane
But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne
lmao.... haha....... nice shit.. 8/10
Same similes? caressing angry how this pussys jaw fist bound
As u say weighin/wayne in last like bulimics piling on the pounds
lmao.. nice name flip and word play 8/10
On the ground like jelous hobo's hence at my 'dis-pence'
With bars of jibberish no wonder ur 'multis-pack' non-sense
haha, good again.....6/10
Seem tense? u should campaign for a loss see the mass elects
Shit on this ledge-end/legend like seagulls with bowel defects
damn, good wordplay again 6/10
Stretched marks ur slayed taking ur last words u should pray
As ill put humilation in waynes-world lik garth say "IM GAY"
eh, this alright 5/10
But hey ur not THAT bad drugin satan leave ur death enhanced
Couldnt be felt underground as i drain ur spirit from existance
wow.... real nice..... 8/10
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
lmao. word. nice.... 8/10

shit, your whole verse had me goin' "oh!!!" and shit like that. Real nice shit, yo. RV better watch out for you. dope shit. 49/70


v/Dizzeee

oh, and dizzie RTF on this battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402


aigiht thanks. cp

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

checkin polls..

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal


im the sickest FORCE and im CLEVER, i have ya CORPSE SEVERED and DISMEMBERED tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD
got 9's bust at this GUY 'like you started laugin' i split ya SIDE, bludgeon his THIGHS, wit icepicks shoved in ya EYES
^^whack.....more like gangsta talk
i hate these WACK KIDS with who i ATTACK WITH SPITS, leave him with CRACKED RIBS, and FRACTURED HIPS,all is SONNIN-THIS BITCH,MAULED-RUN IN AND-SPLIFFEDwhen tha TEK RIPS ill DRAW BLOOOD FROM THIS PRICK like 'DIABETICS'!
^^stop talkin about killin him
ill have this BITCH catch shots from the MAC, till his DOME SPLITS and CRACKS, im QUICK with ATTACKS
tear him apart till hes CRUDE BONES, my shots have you ~in graved~(engraved) like TOMBSTONES
^^self glorifying
i come with INTENSE SCRIPTS, with TEXT-SICK, i have tha TEK SPIT, i DENT KIDS, with BENT RIBS, i make ya HEAD SPLIT when i COMMEND HITS, with ya NECK SLIT
ya raps are HARDLY DECENT, but i got venomous WORDPLAY last time you had a 'SWEET 16' was at ya BIRTHDAY
^^same as the others

BAssically...the problem is that you spoke about kill him.TAlkin bout"punchin him,fracturing his hips...etc".That's not battle rap.That's self glorifying gangsta talk.Take all that murder shit and make a song to put on Open mic.



Seems insane like de-hydrated slaves have u fall at the cane
But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne (Bruce Wayne)
^^mediocre
Same similes? caressing angry how this pussys jaw fist bound
As u say weighin/wayne in last like bulimics piling on the pounds
^^OK
On the ground like jelous hobo's hence at my 'dis-pence'
With bars of jibberish no wonder ur 'multis-pack' non-sense *
^^^Agreed...after his readin his verse,there's proof
Seem tense? u should campaign for a loss see the mass elects
Shit on this ledge-end/legend like seagulls with bowel defects *2
^^Nice,but for real?he in LL?how he get in?
Stretched marks ur slayed taking ur last words u should pray
As ill put humilation in waynes-world lik garth say "IM GAY"
^^OK
But hey ur not THAT bad drugin satan leave ur death enhanced
Couldnt be felt underground as i drain ur spirit from existance ( just think )
^^^OK
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
^^Nice

Ur verse was nice.Light years ahead of the other guy's because you didn't self glorify as much.U had some nice werdplay in ur shit too.That personal with his mutlis packing gibebresh would have been whack...but his verse made it good because it showed proof.

Vote-Dizzie(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589