MADDRAPPER vs Intermental
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 12:43 PM

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Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 12:44 PM.

When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse
I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse
You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea
Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear
Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT
MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT
Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him
This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win


Merked nigga

MADDRAPPER has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 12:55 PM.

Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach
People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach
Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak
And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak.
Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan
To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand?

yo uppin for votes i will RTF people................

Voted For: Intermental

Intermental u took this battle easy.........
flow
vocab
punches
were all yours........
and the closer was a nice lil personal........although u could of came a bit harder....i read ya poen mic piece and was really feeling it.

badrapper...oop's.... i mean madrapper.......
......iz gotta be hounest.......u need a lot of work kid.......
..keep trying though.....u will get there...

how thanks tekneek.....haha badrapper....now we jus gonna knw u whack

uppin dis.....lets get this over cos i know this faggot got no chance

Voted For: Intermental

wack battle...

Madd.. ya had no personals, no punches and the flow was bad. Only thing ya had was mutli's... those wont get you a win... sorry mang

Intermental... ya had a decent verse... punches were decent, flow was good, what really ruined the verse was ya 3rd bar.... STRETCHED!!!... damn... didnt really have good personals... givin ya the win cause you actually had punches and somewhat of personals

aiiite thank you uppid dis i wanna get this bitch closed

Voted For: Intermental

okay here's how it went down maddrapper hd a bunch of rhyming words. alot of his verse didn't make sence. he didn't have multi's, or punchlines, and he had some weak personals.
Intermental merked this kidd not becaus his verse was great, it did have personals and punchlines, but because maddraper, oops i mean maddrappers verse really sucked.

This was feedback posted for MADDRAPPER
 

this is not a hating post..

you seriously are not good at battling..maybe i could see you doing topicals..but not battling..you have no punches at all..i think youre getting caught up with the multis and ur flow too much..u should really stop and sit down and think of creative punches like just starting out with simple similies..its not that hard..im not voting..

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uppin dis i want this closed....i will RETURN WITH HONEST FEED

This was feedback posted for Intermental
 

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Voted For: Intermental

ight umm this was a weak battle in my eyes but imma break it down....

mad rapper:

Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach
People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach
^^ ok line weak punch though
Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak
And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak.
^^ not feeling this at all
Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan
To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand?
^^ nop again man

i wasn't feeling your verse at all really.. u need to think of punches coz the ones u are throwing now are weak real weak... so think of ceoncepts and word them good andf then you'll be on your way...

inter:

When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse
I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse
^^ ok line not really hard hitting
You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea
Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear
^^ not feeling this at all sorry man
Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT
MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT
^^ lmao talk about stretched it was ok just alor stretched
Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him
This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win
^^ lol umm ok personals not really feeling the last line

ight man u have some elevating to do in the punches and structure aspect they are better than mad's but the are still weak... hit up teph and see how u can improve on punches all u need to do for your structure is match upo your syllable count from 12-15 syllabls in 1 line...

ight

v/inter he had better punches and a better all around verse pz

hey let me tell yall cats my punchlines are brand new the average cat will never ever think of these punchlines how can they be weak when you can't even think of punchlines like this you can say as you please i won this on mere creactivity WHY YALL LOVE THAT OLD PLAYED OUT SHIT? HE DIDN'T WIN THIS HE'S THINKING TOO SIMPLE HA! HA! HA!

Voted For: Intermental

Intermental

When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse
I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse
^okay opener, no punch though

You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea
Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear
^lolz likin this

Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT
MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT
^dayummmmmm, hot bar right here! Got everyting in it, wordplay, multi, personal, punch...Whoa...

Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him
This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win
^good closer

That one bar just killed it fo real, others were kinda basic and nothing special but then BAM....bold one...structure was cool, flow was aight, vocab okay and punches/personals were there

MADDRAPPER[/b]

Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach
People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach
^not really feelin opener but aight

Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak
And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak.
^cool bar, nice punch

Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan
To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand?
^coo closer

Aight, solid verse right here, had some punches, no real personals though, flow was excellent as well as structure and vocab but I feel it couldn't compete with that one bar from Intermental, no hate man