NaRc-UzI vs Black Queen
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-18-05 at 12:48 PM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

Closed by Narc-Uzi and Black Queen's request
-strobe

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 09:50 AM.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 09:51 AM.

its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate


bored needed sumin to do vote up ill return da favor

AIGHT CHECK IT

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"(lmao)

thats should be enough

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

NaRc-UzI: you got sum verse right there dawg you came hard wit the punchez n' the multis...you got a good flow, and that kept me feelin your verse...the structure was good, sum lines weren't even but still you came out very good...

Black Queen: ya verse was aight n' you make sum very good punchez....the flow wasnt that good but it was ok...the structre was very good in your verse and that must've been the only thing you surpassed Narc-UzI on but you know in battles is all about punches n' you didnt came as hard as NaRc so sorry my vote is for him

hey yo NaRc dont forget to Return the favor on ma battles

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

LOL. Nice verse NaRc, you killed it for real........

Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
^^
dope.


In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
^^^^
LMAOOOOO, Best bar in the battle, without a damn doubt, you should have this one wrapped up fa' sho'...you killin 'em dog....nice verse.


Uppin this for famlay!!

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

haha THE WHOLE THING WAS DOPE CUZZZZZ...........................you fucked her up no disrespect queen but damn baby....i wish i cud vote but he in my crew

im up 1-0 still uppin.................................

can somebody vote on this,i will return the favor if you vote

Uppin this.............................................

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

you bit........i can prove it to but it doesn't really matter to me.....just checkin polls

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

Checking pollz fam safe verse


..............EZ

who did i bite from smartass and prove it .................................

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas - nice

can we please get some votes in
i will return the favor in your batteles

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

ayo my boy narc killed you.....

......nice verse man keep it up....

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my bad i meant to post that as feedback............

Still uppin this batytle if you vote i will return the favor

uuupppppppiiiiiinnnnnn............................ ...

Voted For: Black Queen

punches...narc
personals...black queen
creativity...black queen
wordplay...narc
flow...black queen
multiz...narc
vocab...black queen
enjoyment...black queen

uzi ya punches were good but u od'd when u kept talkin bout sexual shit, jus cuz u battlin a chic u kept talkin bout shit like dat....it gets restless, made ya verse borin cuz who doesnt do that when battlin a girl?? exactly

V/Black Queen


RTF

3 sexual refrences and you say i OD'D lmao! whatever nigga.

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

black queen- punches were simple......i couldn't make sense of your first two lines....you had weak personals tho you did come creative at one point and you used aight wordplay but still i didn't feel that you did enough to take the win

take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
^^^i felt that line the most...keep doing what you do

Narc- uzi- first time i've read one of your battles and your verse was pretty sick.....the wordplay was real nice.....your opener was good
After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"

and you kept it consistent....coming hard with the punches....tho i think the whole battle was lacking in personals and i think both of ya'll should use them more....however my vote goes to Narc-Uzi

uppin dis battle.........................................

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

NaRc-UzI

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
^hehe, 2nd line is bit self-glorifying but it works though

Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
^haha lmao @ the last line, bold one man lolz

You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
^cool bar, nice wordplay

Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
^good, nice usage of same sounds

In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
^haha nice bar right here, funny shit

"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"(lmao)
^wordplay's good right here, aight closer

Stayed nice consistent with funny punches, had some personals in there too by playing out the entire girl/queen-thing. Flow was excellent as well as your vocab, structure was nice and the wordplay was definitely there. Good battle!

Black Queen

its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
^uhm ain't really feelin opener

this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
^coo bar, no real punch though

take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
^good bar

It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
^nice wordplay first line, second is random punch

In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
^i'm diggin first one, second is bit bleh

You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
^coo, bit basic though

I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
^okay okay

I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate
^loving last line

Seen way better battles from you actually, it's like you didn't even try you know. Had some coo punches but some stuff was real basic, it's just weird to see it from you cause I'm used to seein mad creative shit lolz. Flow was good though, structure was cool and overall it was solid

thanks for voting im up 3-1 still uppin..........................

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Voted For: Black Queen

my vote//NaRc
Punches- NaRc
Wordplay-NaRc
Meta's-NaRc
Flow- Tie
Personals- n/e
Overall- NaRc's verse wasn't that tight, his world play was a bit corny at times, but the majority of his punches landed nicely, with the occacional filler. On the other hand Blck Queen had ok set ups...and her bars just drifted like light wood...never landing as she may have expected. Keep ya heads up...deUce

Unexplained vote removed

Im Up 4-1 Still Uppin This..................................

Voted For: Black Queen

I think bQ took this one because her disses were stronger, and made more since. I wasnt too much feelin tha personals from either one of you, and BQ's disses couldve been directed towards anyone (most of em), but they were still by far, stronger. her structure and flow to her verse was wayy better also. BQ get's my vote. Easyily. She just came harder and wanted this one more. Narc, all them " "'s are not needed. Most of em didnt even have good wordplay, and they were simple, and irrelevant.

peace-sums

Voted For: Black Queen

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
—weak opener
Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
—nah, 2nd line is played here
You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
—aight..
Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
—fuck outta hea
In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
—okay, this one was aight
"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"
—wack closer

overall your drop was weak, punches were pretty much weak
throughout the whole shit, one of them was aight, & another one
was played here, the structure was okay, & the flow was lackin here
ur punches need to be harder hittin in ur other battles..
..no hate


its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
—multies were okay, punch was weak
this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
—okay
take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
—this one was coo
It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
—aight
In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
—no
You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
—uhh, not really hard-hittin here
I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
—hah, this one was aight
I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate
decent closer

overall – ur drop was aight.. pretty much same to Uzi here
except.. ur flow was okay here, instead of lacking here, the
structure was okay, punches were pretty much harder hittin
than Uzi’s.. but overall u came harder then Uzi in this battle

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

checking polls............and good battle here (thumbup)

im up 4-3 still uppin.............................