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Tekneek vs HOE_SIT_DOWN
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10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 min check 30 min drop Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-18-05 at 10:57 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
HOE_SIT_DOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 10:29 AM.
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u want 10 lines then aii...
idrty fucka, kickin'-spittin' nothin' but grimey, You can just-try-me, end-up dead-up, behind-me./ "Iron casket","death-inpenetrable" any less-unaccept-able, mind, lyrical re-cep-ticle./ You got "Chest-i-cles", from bullets holes-cold, drippin'-and-frozen, cut off your "little-testicles" and go-"kiddie-bowlin'./ I'm str8 control-lin' any siteation that I'm thrown-in, scarier than barbarian like that homey-Co-nan./ Holy-rollin' like an O.G. ghost wit da-most-flava, don't need a favor I see through you-like-a-laser/ elec-tric frequencies hit ya-neck like a taser, like you were met-wit-your fate-son you just sweat-'til-the-day-comes./I spray-gunz... But only in a, ly-rical-sense, shootin' up the paper, like I had "clips-in-da-pens" If its a-hit-it-depends on your ly-rix-and-your-friends- cuz if you don't have the love, you ain't SHIT -to-the-end. I'm spit-tin'-again cuz i'm high-and-i'm-dazed, love for the spits, thats why-I-get-blazed! ... fuck this..... |
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 10:37 AM.
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my verse is below.
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i bet you can't stand~me~fool, have ya ass-gone when ya rapz get 'passed~on' more than 'family~jewelz'!,
she got a man~to~pull? nah she be pullin~ho's and even if she wore 'panty hose' she ain't 'full~of~flow', (get it?) this hoe don't get it? i'ma leave you~hintz, but you should of knew~since i was 'drawin ya plan out' like 'blue~printz', you might as well not bring~a~spit cuz you ain't gettin da 'upperhand' if i gave you mah 'finger~tipz'!, linger~bitch but you wrong if you think you~in~this cuz i'ma leave ya 'strugglin' like a new~business, you~win~this?, she could be 'attached to a kicked down door' and still not be 'off a few~hinges'!!, believe~ya~rhymez? nah they just seedz~of~lies, leave you 'round faced' like i tried to feed~you~pies!, you need a breather~guy...oh you a woman right, well what does she think about 'womenz rightz'? she likes 'either~side'!!! ...K.O. lmao... |
good battle.....................lets get the votes in...........
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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
ummm..... get it sorted homie. .
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Voted For: Tekneek
Didnt see Tekneeks verse, but Im voting for him, because I know he came better than that bullshit the other dude came with. Multies does not make a good battle, punches do. |
Yup! Now I know for sure! :)
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uppin this........................................
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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
I ain't voting cuz I don't see your verse man sorry
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tek, go to battle forum problems man and show strobe the link.
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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
LOL Man, what the hell happend in this battle? lol
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LOL, I'll get this shit sorted for ya'............
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werd, i was about to do it for him...
smells KO... |
thx dogs..............................................
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uppin this............................................
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Voted For: Tekneek
One Sided battle flow, struture and vocab lost from Hoe sit down n perfect from Tekneek.... good wordplay n punchlines... both creativity wuz a tie... kinda hard to vote but tekneek got his punches hard hittin, hoe sit down's punches wuz aight but I read sum with a lack of sence.. no hate man Hoe Sit Down - 8/10 (fix the whole structure n flow) Tekneek - 9.5/10 (fix ur structure a lil bit) V/ Tekneek |
oh... RTF...................
n get more honest votes...... |
Voted For: Tekneek
idrty fucka, kickin'-spittin' nothin' but grimey, You can just-try-me, end-up dead-up, behind-me./ ^6self glorifing "Iron casket","death-inpenetrable" any less-unaccept-able, mind, lyrical re-cep-ticle./ You got "Chest-i-cles", from bullets holes-cold, drippin'-and-frozen, cut off your "little-testicles" and go-"kiddie-bowlin'./ I'm str8 control-lin' any siteation that I'm thrown-in, scarier than barbarian like that homey-Co-nan./ Holy-rollin' like an O.G. ghost wit da-most-flava, don't need a favor I see through you-like-a-laser/ elec-tric frequencies hit ya-neck like a taser, like you were met-wit-your fate-son you just sweat-'til-the-day-comes./I spray-gunz... But only in a, ly-rical-sense, shootin' up the paper, like I had "clips-in-da-pens" If its a-hit-it-depends on your ly-rix-and-your-friends- cuz if you don't have the love, you ain't SHIT -to-the-end. I'm spit-tin'-again cuz i'm high-and-i'm-dazed, love for the spits, thats why-I-get-blazed! ... I ain't gon bother breakin it down because I can;t.U strucutred ur verse terribly.Don't make it like a paragraph.And ease up with the self glorify talk.Stop talkin about killin him.....just diss.Save that murder shit for open mic. i bet you can't stand~me~fool, have ya ass-gone when ya rapz get 'passed~on' more than 'family~jewelz'!, she got a man~to~pull? nah she be pullin~ho's and even if she wore 'panty hose' she ain't 'full~of~flow', ^^Ok....but the bar didn;t connect this hoe don't get it? i'ma leave you~hintz, but you should of knew~since i was 'drawin ya plan out' like 'blue~printz', you might as well not bring~a~spit cuz you ain't gettin da 'upperhand' if i gave you mah 'finger~tipz'!, ^^OK linger~bitch but you wrong if you think you~in~this cuz i'ma leave ya 'strugglin' like a new~business, you~win~this?, she could be 'attached to a kicked down door' and still not be 'off a few~hinges'!!, ^^weak believe~ya~rhymez? nah they just seedz~of~lies, leave you 'round faced' like i tried to feed~you~pies!, ^^OK you need a breather~guy...oh you a woman right, well what does she think about 'womenz rightz'? she likes 'either~side'!!! ^^mediocre Ur verse was not hot by any means.But compared to the other guy...it's a mastrepeice.Stop with the "~" bullshit.Just write ur shit normal.Upp ur werdplay too.But u got this.I'd be surprised if you don't KO. Vote-Teekneek(vote in link below please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901 |
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Voted For: HOE_SIT_DOWN
your rhymes are too weak...you spit verses like your in yr 5 |
Fucking Hater....................
Cancel Dat Vote Mod,s.................. |
uppin this...............no more fake vote like the one from that herb slick flow.....
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Voted For: Tekneek
HSD had some nyce multis./...but, thats about it.... i refuse to do a bar by bar break just cuz of how HSD keyed....but, Tekneek had more aimed lines with nyce hittin punches....HSD aimed the lines, but they didnt connect well....Also, HSD, ya structure is horrible...lay ya verse out to where we can catch the flow... v/tekneek PM me if i gotta break it down better....i'll gladly do it.... |
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Voted For: Tekneek
Flow-Tekneek Wordplay-both Punches-Tekneek vocab-Tekneek Structure-both Ma Vote goto Tekneek |
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