E.C vs Marvjay1009
 

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No hate votes

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Check in by: 06-18-05 at 04:02 PM

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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 03:50 PM.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 03:53 PM.

u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
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ight explanations...

5th bar... he is from queens... so family jewels jacks, kings and all tht shit, royalty.. and thats it.

dont get the rest of the wordplay dont vote...

g'luck pz

lol nice verse but wtf bout the sould rebel shit i was in TE since the beginning and he asked me to go back in so thats a fake personal

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

New twist to the hook lines, played concept done well str8 opener

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

Lol funny shame elevation lines are mad played

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,

Ight

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

Lol that imagerys just dutty, ok punch

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

Tight closer

VS



u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

Ususally taking initials is wack but since his name are initials this was ok not too good to open with though

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

Dope

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

Str8 personal

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

Weak

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

Lmao dope

Ok this was close

Punches = Marv
Opner = E.C
Closer = Marv
Best line = MArv = 'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

Amusement = Both
Creativity = Both - some good metas and sims from both

Overal = Marv
This was def a close battle but i felt marv just took it edging with the punches but good from both
respect

please return favour

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Voted For: E.C

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
^^^
Nice flow, good punch

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
^^^
nice humour


your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
^^^
very weak, dissapointed in the concept of your second line.

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
^^^
pretty decent, used the ''fish an chip'' concept of british food, some may not understand the concept of the bar, but i did, it was alright

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
^^^
nice personal an punch

Good verse, came strong throughout, elevated alot....an i want round 2 with you fa' sho'......good drop, you got this, really impressive stuff man


u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
^^
horribly worded Marv, weak concept too...e.c an gfx lines are played..

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
^^^
nah, not feelin it


all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
^^^
good personmal, one of you're better bars in the battle


i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
^^^
I dont even get it?...not good anyway.

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".
^^^
not bad, could of been stronger


Marv, weak stuff dog, where's the fiyah you usually on?....real inconsistant, your puns didnt have no humour, an E.C Made a mockery of ya' verse for real....

Good shit E.C, Round 2....get at me about tat, you improved alot an i aint battled since i've been back, so lets go....

oh an return the favor in my signature, narc-uzi's battle.

Voted For: E.C

this was a really close battle in my opinion.......
marvjay- your structure was on point and you came good with the opener.....a few lines here and there really stood out and the wordplay in this line was real good....i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE". But i think you lacked consistency and that there wasn't enough really nice punches and personals to take the win.....

E.C...your verse was good from start to finish...you kept it consistent and thats why you get my vote....the opener was sick and the personals were hard-hitting....your wordplay was real nice....good job to both but e.c just took this one

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

nice battle dawgs, a tite one
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Voted For: E.C

OK CLOSE BATTLE, EC CAME HARD AS FUCK HERE THOUGH, LEMME BREAK IT DOWN:

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

OK FISHIN N HOOK CONCEPTS ARE KINDA PLAYED BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF HERE IMO, GOOD OPENER.

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

HAHA, NICE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH.

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,

YEAH IM FEELIN THE WORDPLAY, NICE PUNCH.

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

MEH WHY WOULD SOMEONE EAT HIM OUT IF HE MALE, BUT NICE WPRDPLAY AGAIN.

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

NICE PERSONAL PUNCH AND GOOD CLOSER.

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u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

HAHAHA NICE PERSONAL, COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED BETTER BUT IT HIT.

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

PLAYED CONCEPT BUT MEH, WAS IGHT.

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH, WAS PERSONAL BUT DIDNT HIT.

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

NICE FLOW DECENT ENUFF PUNCH.

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

DECENT WORDPLAY AND CLOSER
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OK, THIS WAS A TITE BATTLE, MARV CAME PRETTY HARD BUT THIS WAS BY FAR THE BEST I SEEN FROM EC, CAME HARD AS FUCK.

MARV YOU HAD SOME DOPE PUNCHES, LIKE YOUR OPENER HAD ME LAUGHIN BUT STILL EC HAD THE MOST CREATIVE PUNCHES AND HARDER HITTING PERSONAL AND HIS WORDPLAY WAS ON FORM.

NO HATE.

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Voted For: E.C

Yo EC Hot drop....u get my vote because:

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

^^^^^ Sick line, great opener, loved the creativity 5/5

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

^^^^^^
Again got me laughin hot line.....5/5

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
^^^^^^^
Damn man you keep crackin me up....good line 4/5

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
^^^^
I understand what you gettin at but not really feelin it 2/5

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
^^^
Great creativity.....5/5......

22/25

IP:


u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
^^
Liked first line....second wasnt really feelin but nice start 3/5

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
^^^
Hahaha....great line 5/5

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

^^
haha good personal 5/5

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

^^^
Jokes man...but wasnt that funny to get 5..4/5

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

^^^
Good creativity...but i feel it was forced...3/5

20/25...RTF on my battle with MADDRAPPER please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit man, you had some great wordplay, hard hitten punches and some good personals.

Best Line - u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

Worst Line - i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

E.C - Good spit also, it flowed well also had great wordplay and punches that were landin strong.

Best Line - i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

Worst Line - your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

OVERALL - Very close battle here, I had to read both verses twice and then rate each of your lines out of 10. Marv came out on top by only 2. He had some stong punches and clever wordplay. E.C you also had good wordplay and strong punches Marv just had more, and his were a little bit stronger. Great battle - no hate.

Vote - MarvJay

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Voted For: E.C

damn lol E.C ur like one of the best of this site seriously...
Dopess lines:
1-kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
this was pretty fucking dope lol
2-i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

this was the line, this was dope as hell

nice structure, no multis, flow is dope,

MaRV: u had more personals, structure was iight,
dopess line:
1-dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

no flow, no multis, atleas u didnt lost against a noshow haha lol

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Voted For: E.C

Explanation

EC
i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
LOL DEf Good Wordplay
kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
..Good ...LOL
your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
Better LOL and shits Funny To
your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
...Not Better than The Rest But yet Good
i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
...Aii....

Overall Man Your Shit was Dope ass Fuck No lie man Your Punchez were on point and Yo Wordplay Was Jus Amazing Its Jus Like you Hade each bar perfectly planned out So Ima Give you my Vote in this battle

Marv
u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
,.....Aii...
my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
...LOl Good wordplay but bad concept
all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
...:nono: that was jus all away from everything you was sayin b4
i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
:nono: ...def couldve been way better
dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".
....Better Bar But Again The concept seems stolen...

Overall i think That EC takes this your punchez didnt connect really good and your concpets were played and ETC . all I Can Say is You DidnT do Well
RTF In Any battle link in my sig

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uppin for the last mother fucking vote biatches....

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This was feedback posted for E.C
 

Checking the polls good drop E.C..............You too Marv.

Voted For: E.C

E.C=
Nyce verse dawg. good personalz throughout da whole verse, structure wuz flawless..ez 2 read & follow. i wuznt feeling da fish shop line, it wuz weak dawg. ur best bar wuz da steroids bar or ur closer...funny closer 4 real had me lyke ooh, bcuz ov da better personalz u get da vote dawg

Marvjay1009=
really good concepts in ur punchez, worded & da flow wuz alot better & more complex, but da personalz wuznt there. few good hard punchlinez hit they mark, not az consistant wit da effective disses in ur verse so my vote goes 2 e.c

ur best line wuz da reloaded line, dat wuz a nyce punch an personal dawg

vote=e.c/wordplay wuznt as complex but da punchlinez had more consistancy & da personmalz wuz more effective

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