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(Jimmy Pocketz) vs 1ndeph
Battle Rules:
10-15 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 04:03 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
1ndeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 04:04 PM.
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I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym -one love- |
(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 06:59 PM.
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Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self *Hes from Chicago* *Avy Read...Basicks* |
Lol dope drop nigga.This should prove who the midwest king feel me?
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man uppin is pointless.
What you need to do is become friends with everyone on rv. That way you get votes quicker and shit. :bored: |
Battleing Here now is Pointless....thats why i got RM
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This was feedback posted for 1ndeph
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Intro : Troop
Outro :Troop Punches :Troop Personals :Indeph Multies :None Metas :Indeph Similies :Troop Structure :Tie Originality :Indeph Complexity :None Wordplay :Troop Combos :None Vote-Troop |
Voted For: 1ndeph
ahhhh pretty dope battle tha midwest iz comin up :thumbup: deph got this by hair with his punches i liked that "jay iz a biter" line shit wuz dope as hell troops faceless line wuz a good match but i think deph BARELY got this good battle foo's Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ya all dat aint explained....and the kid who voted 4 me voted wouldnt been removed 2
we worked hard on this battle....ya gone vote proper both wayz..... |
That dude vote would of been removed lol or was that a typho?
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
A'ight... Troop came way harder in this battle...nice punches, nice personals...good flow, nice structure...good drop, hitting hard and everything...nicely done... Indeph...your verse was weak...Opener was lame...Lent...? Come one...the rest of your verse was pretty much the same...flow was off in places, structure was decent...but you didn't come as hard... No hate... Return the favor... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198052 |
his name used to be jimy pockets =/ I guess i should have put in an explination =/
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
Troop Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness Ha.. pretty good Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation Ah..could have been better Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks Nice Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest Ahh..could have been better Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On Decent I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self Ha..pretty cool Indeph I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. ahh could have been better you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. no You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. haha nice king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. naw You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. no slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym decent closer Overall vote-Troop |
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