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Typical vs (jimmy pocketz)
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 04:06 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 07:01 PM.
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they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice" becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch |
(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 09:40 PM.
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Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez |
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Voted For: Typical
ay this was a nice battle Jimmy Pocketz - ive seen much better from you..ur opener was ok..not all the great but it was a cool personal..i think that was the only bar i liked..the mike tyson diss was weak..and ur closer wasnt that great.....6/10 Typical - good verse..ur opener kinda sucked but after that u did good..the parenthesis line was dope..i really liked that one..and the line about jimmy in his pocketz..very original and creative..good personal.....8/10 Typical wins |
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
Explantion Flow- Troop / And Also Id like to say that the structure was very neat to thanx Punchez-[b] Troop He came way harder In all Ways Possible he really Did Take punchez by a long shot he came back to back with them so that made his verse more consistent and creative [b]Personals- Troop . LOL This is funny bcuz he hade some personals and I dint even see them at first until i read through it again so he gets that Multies-[b] Typical Hade some small Maultie areas in his verse but no big biggy so he gets that area [b]Vocab- no big use of vocab in these bars ... Origianlity- Troop He stuck to Tryin New punchez and new wordplay so that made his verse way more original Thand Typicals RTF In any battle link in my sig |
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
Aiight let's see this: Typical: they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat nigga, what the fuck was this? no... 2/10 i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice" ok..... 4/10 becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis haha nice.... 6/10 wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick ohh, nice... 7/10 my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch nah........ 4/10 Not bad, started bad, but middle was hot. nice... 23/50 (46%) aiight jimmy: Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical lol nice. battlin' herbs. haha... 7/10 Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss aiight... 4/10 Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt cooo... 5/10 Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs lmao....... nice..... 7/10 Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez ehh... opener coo, punch nah, so 4/10 aiight, I seen better from you. but this was still good enough for the W. good shit 27/50 (54%) v/Troop |
Voted For: Typical
they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat ^^u mean now right?and this was weak,but flowed nice i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice" ^^OK becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis ^^weak punch...but flowed nice wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick ^^LOL...this shit made me laugh my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch ^^OK Ur flow was crazy throughout the whole verse.The best line was the one about jimmy only goes pocketz for dick.U had a couple of weak punches in there that were really basic though. Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical ^^^weak Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss ^^self glorifing?or did he really do dat Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt ^^pimp and attempt dun rhyme and too unoriginal Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs ^^^nah...seemed to glorify Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez ^^^Nice Ur shitwas structured better than his....but didn;t flow as well.Only good punch weas the last one for you.U had a couplke of weak punches and one that self glorified.That one about callin u out.Did he really say that he's eager for his 9th loss or are u glorifing urself again? Vote-Typical(please vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901 |
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Voted For: Typical
Wow, This shit is gonna be close... Troop: Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical blah 5/10 Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss Decent 6/10 Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt Good...7/10 Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs LOL Nice 8/10 Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez Decent 5/10 Overall: 31/50 (62%) Good verse from you man, but you had some played lines, and some just werent that creative. Personals were there, but I would've liked to see more. Apart from those things, everything else was fine here. Typical: they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat Solid Opener 7/10 i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice" LOL Sweet 9/10 becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis Good 8/10 wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick LMAO 9/10 my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch Good closer 8/10 Overall: 41/50 (82%) Real good verse from you man. Punches were strong, creative, and consistent. Personals were there and they hit well. You had some funny plays on his name, particularly the "jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick" line. Overall, a solid drop for you man. |
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Voted For: Typical
becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick vs Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical overall 2 killer nameflips by typical and too much same word rhyming by troop gives typ the win |
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
alright troop didnt realy try but his personals were alot better flow was better vocab was beter work on metaphores typical ur lines were really played ur flow was pretty good ur vocab needs work and so do ur metas troop tookl this one easily straight battle to both |
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