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20 GraND ft. DI GAME
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peepin... DI aint dropped in a minute.... lets see if he still got it... beat is aight... nuffin special.. but sometimes beats like this r cool... ya presence is like ya old shyt... i think i like it.. cyphalis line is soooo stolen lol... flow falls off at the barrels line.. chorus is kinda bland... the "say we miss you" needs more layers lol... di sounds bored... usualy he has more emotion... flow is meh i know he's come better... dont like how tha beat is just paino .... not any lines i feel like pointing out... hmmm, i was hopin for more... but dont get it twisted this track was good... i was just hopin for sumn a lil better.. keep at it 20 i like ya old presence, like on this one u went back to ya roots, keep this delivery goin... tha one u was usin recently was wack to me... so yea stick wif this one... :)
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they all the same to me.. idk what the hell u talkn about lol
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^ya presence? it felt more underground to me awhile ago... more concentrated on the lyrics instead of the "gangster" appeal... could b just me tho... n e ways stay with what ur bringin on this one...
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ight... this like all my new shit
i dont post me shit on RV anymore im off the net pretty much only reason i posted dis is cuz DI wanted me too |
aight.. where are ur tracks then????
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on my computer for my mixtape
dont want to post them for free naw mean |
aight... old presance vs. new presance? wtf? nah... it hasnt changed... shits still dopeness... DI Game was ownage as fuck. 20 flow was good, lyrics were dope and ya mic presance was solid as always.. DI had dope ass flow, im lovin his shit... his lyrics owned me too... this track is a 9/10 all the way... ive said it before and ill say it again.. i can name 3 people on rv right now that if they keep at it will get deals and 20 Gs is one of em... other 2 being Triple N and Senser. any way thats my feed hate it or love it... PC
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I personally liked it... Liked the emotion from 20 ... D.I sounded liked he was forcin' his words... I've never heard his trax so i dont know if thats his styl or whatever but yea... It was a nice lil track.
7.5/10 |
on my computer for my mixtape
dont want to post them for free naw mean ^yo, theres an option to make them non downloadable.. that way they can hear them, but not dl, like a teaser ya kno??? lol at wickeds feed... .dog i see a pube in ya mouth...lol jp... good shyt... |
i dont care about the net is what im tryna say.. lol
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what? was i wrong? nah... 3 people on this site that will make it if they want to will be 20 grand... triple n.... and senser.... dickwaggon
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^it's not a matter of "wanting to" it's a matter of a label "wanting YOU" lol... and just cuz u feel some1 duznt mean other ppl will.. i mean yea im not dissagreeing with u.. i think senser def will be signed in a minute.. triple n has potential but he never posts up new shyt... i been fiendin for him to drop... and 20... well half tha ppl likehim half tha ppl dont.. in my oppinion i think his delivery is coo but lyrically needs work... that is all..
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dont say shit omen cuz u aint heard any of my tracks so u really cant say shit
the stuff i posted up on rv is just fucking around, not any serious lyrical or real tracks. this is the only one, and only cuz DI insisted naw mean EZY and lets quit freeposting in dis shii |
send me one of ya best tracks u got for ya mixtape then... lets peep... n i wasnt "talking shit" i gave u a pro and a con... aight.. done freeposting.. lol
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aight......
20 grand - flow is nice.. i few well known punches,but they still good..lyrics are pretty good.. topic is aiight.. aint really feelin it cause i dont believe it lol.. but i mean, its all gravy. DI - wasent feelin this as much as what u normally dropped.. lacked emotion.. but flow was still on point as always.. just lyrics ad emotion werent on your level liek normally.. overall decent track.. |
This Joint Is Mean Fuck What Chu Heard An U Not Gonna Get A Deal On Tha Net So Shit That I Put Up Is Fa Free How Much So This Is What Chu Fa Free.>>>>di...............
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UPPN FOR FEED,
Good looks DI |
son like i told you through aim shit sounds funny cuz it sounds as though you tryna flow like me ...sayin the yeas and shit like me..lol shits cute..son shit sounds way too similiar to the 1st verse of mine on Buck you down...espically when i say my bullets like crabs bitch you dont wanna catch it...and you say my flow is like syfillus you dont wanna catch it?...lol twenty explain this be...shits mad fishy even in the intro you soundin like me kid...im not tryna start beef im just askin you if you can explain ya self..na'mean if any one thinks im talkin shit peep my track again and peep this na'mean... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/w...lume1_music.htm
but none the less it was a good track but im just sayin peep what im sayin na'mean 1ne... |
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^ i had already caught the syphalis you dont wanna catch it line... ima take a peep at ur part to buck you down again n see if tha flow matches... |
idk fam, i wrote these lyrics a while ago, cuz i was gonna use it for a diff beat and shii
As far as flow.. idk mayne dats just how i flowed and i always say jea.. lol so idk fam holla at me on AIM |
lol yea, i will definately vouch for tha "jeas"
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Typing as I listen....intro pretty good....beat is pretty good not great but good...okay 20 flow is good...the delivery is good...lyrics is eh....chyphalis(however u spell it)...played concept but props...awww u used a "get ghost" line.....this hook isn't terrible jus boring..u shoulda addlibed or something....DI spitting real mellow...he usually got that laidback emotion...the flow ain't dat smoothe....lyrically he ah'ight ain't really amazing me at all...at best a decent verse from DI way below his older shit...this track was good but not spectacular...not something I'd keep on repeat but props on it tho....overal 7/10
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Listening through Audio Technica ATH-M40fs's
The beat is cool except for that midi horn that comes in about where the hook would be. The midi piano ain't hot in my opnion either. Midi tones jsut don't blend well to me at all and always sound obviously synthesized. The first verse: def hot man. lyrics was there and had the stagger needed to punctuate the lines. Nice deliv for the lyrics in the verse. Hook: I liked it man. Second verse: Sounds like a brand-X Jadakiss. Everything kiss brings to the table, just not kiss himself. Both a good thing and a bad thing. Identical annunciation, identical cadence, everything. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...391#post2226391 |
just took another listenin to see if i was wrong kid..but nawwww im not wrong you wrong on tryna do some shit like that kid na'mean?...shits like murda mook tryna come up wit Cassidys style..it aint gon happen be...mad peeps of mine heard the track and thought it was me thats was gon start rappin man...lol son to me thats weak kid...i dont know i might reply to this 1ne...
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^just peeped both tracks again... i dunno about tha flow bein like yours senser, i think 20s flow was more on a "talking tip" than a flow tip like yours... but this time around the line he jacked from you sounded exactly like "my bullets like syphalis you dont wanna catch it!" dam, sad, i know that ive heard 20 steal lines from camron first "like 14 days, muthafuckas 2 week to me" then heh steped it to stealing lines from some1 a lil more underground (icp) by stealing "im back like a vertabre" but seems like now he's taken it to a unsigned hype jacking level... now jackin from sense... if ugot writers block thats aight dude... but dont jack other ppls shyt, i cant respect a lyricist that duznt bring originality, nonetheless steals lines... i dunno no hate or nuffin, just my oppinion..... but.... ima have to hide my punches b4 i see him jack one...lol
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make it download able for me:)
i 'd love to put it on my mp3 player. im listening now 20 you did a good job man nice flow good emotion nice quality it was good the beat is meh could be better. d.i did his thang he always drops hot his flow is good fuck i love his voice to gangsta. nice hook though 20 your hook was done super good man really good. |
Thnx for the feed, its on my mixtape dats why it aint downloadable
Beat was made by BlackMajiK also, just for u guys to know |
Listenin while givin feed
Intro- wus good.... 20grand- Flow was there, presence was nice, overall best drop i ever heard from you fam.no doubt keep droppin DI- u told me about this track on aim, u came nice aswell, still sound like style p...lol but u keep havin good presence overall was nice track Chorus- was cool.... |
nice verse from 20....lyrics were pretty nice
di was decent......still needs to get his own style or keep living in a shadow nice track though........... |
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