SNE DAWG vs .Murdz.
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No Dick Riding

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:11 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SNE DAWG has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 12:18 PM.

.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 02:31 AM.

Nigga why you even acceptin this battle like you tha best on tha site
You know I´ll be shakin you like a rattle, and you will be needin to bite
Murdz..sounds like a pet´s name, ye comon Murdz bring me the ball
“Mom this fuckin dog is jus lame”,he brings sum wack rhymes whenever I call
this nigga PM me so sure he would win, nigga I already beat ya pay me ma mill
your punches are so light the get carried by the wind, you feel me in yo back like hot steam
my punches go straight physical , you miles away but I beat you up lyrical
Read ma rhymes, you already get sick n´fall, you know you lost this so you stop n´stall
As long as you here you betta start writin ma check, you dont hav it, start breakin you neck
Nigga your momma is here sweaptin ma deck, you aint a rapper when you jus “Lean Back”
Hey dude accept it..you aint a “livin legend”,I murk them, own them n´finish by sellin em´
You from battle to battle, seein rhymes n´then stealin em´,n dont talk to me like am a homie cause I aint your friend
Learn to do a web page cause “SoftShade”*got nuthin,why you bother loggin in when everyday you keep fallin
My rhymes penetrate you like hot steel, recognize it man...am all you wanna be..
You lost this battle n´I know how you feel, but see the good side...It aint happenin to me..


SoftShade*: its very clear that it his homepage aint it
If you dont get anything else PM me

nigga that a false personal. i dont got a fuckin homepage...

Voted For: .Murdz.

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This was feedback posted for .Murdz.
 

I can't vote cuz if I vote this nigga Sne gon delete my vote sayin is a hate vote... but Murdz realy got this nigga on the mud....... keep up!!! pc

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Voted For: .Murdz.

Murdz got this yo he came wit good flow nice linez and all i like the structure overall Murdz

thanks yo.... upppin dissssssssssssssssssssssssssss

comeon yall dont sleep on dis shit... upppin on this... lets get sum votes crackin...

uppin this yo, dont sleep nuggazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zz

for fucks sake dawg.. vote up on this yalll dont be bitch ass nuggaz!

Voted For: .Murdz.

HAHAHA at the last line murdz......he took this easy..no need to break down...

Murdz: Good sturcture, good worldplay and multies.....I dont see many multies in battles that work but this here did work and very good job....also good punches

best line:

you think you the greatest?...nigga you aint quite foolin me
My verses are so good ya family hired me to write ya eulogie!!!

SNE Dawg:

Your verse lacked hard punches, it had self glorification and it was weak, not feelin it atall dawg, elevate loads in battles...~RTF LINK IN SIG~

thanks yo.... uppin dizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Voted For: .Murdz.

SNE DAWG- Not much complexity that softshade line wasnt bad though, but a majority of your lines were played and flow was pretty average

Murdz- the miget line made me laugh, I've seen ya do better multi's were ill, your had more inteligent consepts than dawg so Imma have to give this to you

thanks yo... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upppin disssssssssss yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

This was feedback posted for .Murdz.
 

Nigga u straight up merked homeboy this should be a K.O. naw mean I K.o.ed em awhile back....all i gotta really say is G'luck with hurrying up and getting votes for this battle so it will be closed...uppin dis one for my fam

thanks home boi..
uppin thisssssssss comeonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

uppin thisssssssssss comeon yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Voted For: .Murdz.

Aii This Is What I Think

Flow- Murdz Def had the best flow in this battle his structure was also Very neat and he kept his syllables even so i Can give him my vote in that area

Punchez- Murdz Takes this hands down his supplied more of an original Verse with punchez he also came with a more Wordplayed verse So He gets My vote in that area to

Personal- Aii This IS Very easy Murdz supplied basically the only personal That was Good in this battle And that was the One when he played of the Thing in his sig So He takes that also with much ease

Vocab- Noone really used any big vocab but murdz used some Aii words so v/murdz

Multies- Murdz he showed good multies in The first line Not all dat good multies but the only multies in this battle so my v/ murdz

Originality- Murdz And thats because He didnt come with any played Lines punchez or any Fake personals So he get my v in that too

Overal my v/ goes to MURDZ

Nice Battle

RTf In any battle link in my sig

One Sided Battle................ LOL..................

lol werd..... BUMP BUMP BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin this comeone one more vote needed and then its shut!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: .Murdz.

Right this was a good battle. there were decent battles comin from both of you but murdz really shone in this battle.his punches were hittin harder and all aspects of his verse were nice. there was better wordplay in murdz's verse and his personals were a whole lot funnier especially the one about SNE's name bein taken from a disease. i thought that shit was funy as hell. he also had superior vocab in his verse.
don't get me wrong i thought SNE's verse was a nice verse, i just felt that murdz came stronger in his one