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sabotage vs Daubs
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No bullshit GL fam :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 06-19-05 at 07:09 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 06:43 PM.
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Keyed...
You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews.. You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!! Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys.. And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!! Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame.. Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter.................... ...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!! If needed: bar 1 = must get it... bar 2 = hit link & independant - two crews, get it? bar 3 = laugh like a drain = laugh loudly incase you didnt know. |
sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 06:46 PM.
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alright here it is
Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name* His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more** Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes*** He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies *The last 2 letter of his name are B.S **He claims to rep UK til death ***Mercedes symbol is a peace sign |
nice, goodluck man..................................
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damn we got a lot of votes.........................
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rv voters are wack!!!!!!! . |
This was feedback posted for sabotage
Good drops from y'all.....Sab should take this for his creativity, decent battle from both
Good luck...uppin this for y'all two.. |
Voted For: Daubs
Daubs You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews.. You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!! The first line had nothing to do with the punch. Other then that, the personal was decent, the link wasn't needed and made the punch look wack, but the whole concept was pretty good.. 6/10 Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys.. And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!! I thought this was pretty good. Another pretty good personal and the concept was pretty good as well.. 7/10 Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame.. Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter.................... ...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!! Lmao. The concept was pretty dope, and so was the execution. What you do need to work on is start setting up your punch by using the first line. The first line should be revelant to the punch in some way.. 8/10 Overall - 21/30 Sabotage Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame You too should at least start mentioning the concept in the first line. The first line should be revelant to the punch. However, I don't know. I have never heard anybody say that somebody's career is "fish crap" which is why, to me.. this seems like it was kind of forced, so you can use bastard to execute it, however it was pretty creative.. 6/10 Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard Once again, you should start getting into the concept with the first line. But, using the keyboard to say you're above somebody is mad played.. 4/10 Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies The first line was just a random statement.. and the second line's concept was getting to be played. The whole concept just doesn't hit hard.. 4/10 Overall - 14/30 Vote - Daubs Hit up the link in my sig please. |
This was feedback posted for sabotage
74 views and only 9 posts? come on yo vote on this
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Damn, wish i had your alias before the battle.........
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Voted For: sabotage
sabotge took this battle easily his punchlines were more hard hitting then daubs his flow was better the structre was a lil off but it worked metas were pretty good... best line-Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more** Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard thats some crazy shit 8/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for sabotage
k ima vote but tight battle
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Lol, Your A Joke...........................................
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Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name*
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame This Was Nice..Good opener...3.5 Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more** Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard So Ur Saying Ur Only Better Then Him On Keyboards?..played against self...2 Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes*** He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies Eh Didnt Hit To Hard..2.5 OVERALL:8 NOT BAD...ELAVATE... D- You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews.. You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!! HAHA deso Punch..Nice Opener...3 Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys.. And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!! Eh Kinda Play But well Formed...2.5 Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame.. Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter.................... ...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!! lmao good shit homie nice punch...3 OVERALL: 8.5 DESO VERSE..ELAVATE FV- D FOR CONSITENCY |
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silly guy u need to read verses correctly..... |
This was feedback posted for sabotage
I'm Not Going To Vote Cuz These Are My Two Soldiers, But Good Shit Both Of You
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vote on this mayn..................................
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This was feedback posted for sabotage
sab...
opener was creative but worded fucked so was next bar, again really good concept but fuck wit ur wording... .closer left it wide open...didnt feel it...BUT GOOD METAS daubs i dont check links... thats fuckin wak... 2nd bar was funny as hell but couldve been worded a lot better closer didnt make any sence to me really wak both of u needv to stop explaining shit ...NO MORE LINKS!... daubs aint winnin for one line and sab's verse was really creative tho lacking in flow... i cant vote on this... its a tie to me... |
damn it man jus pick someone to win so we can get some votes................
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ya sigs wrong dawg...................... |
what the hell?......
...whered my vote go?....... |
unexplained family.
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
nice shyt homie u got this but
checkin pollz.......................... |
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
checkin the pollz...... Daubs should be murking this nigga
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Voted For: sabotage
aiight Sabotage: Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name* His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame ehh... it's cooo. 5/10 Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more** Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard liked it, nice... 7/10 Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes*** He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies nah, played, yo.... 3/10 Overall not bad shit, could have come harder. 15/30 Daubs: You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews.. You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!! nice personal. 6/10 Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys.. And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!! lmao... nice... 8/10 Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame.. Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter.................... ...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!! nice.. pretty cooo 5/10 Overall, pretty decent verse. nice shit. 19/30 props to both keep elevating. pc one. v/Daubs Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
oh, and RTF in my battle wit indeph in EFL............... pc
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shit my bad, Daubs........ get strobe to fix that....... shit.................
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Fuck me, no votes in time.................................
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Voted For: Daubs
You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews.. You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!! 6...decent personal punch, basic on the vocab, but still good. Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys.. And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!! 6...decent again, gud concept, but the rhymin was off a little which kinda took a little of the shine off. Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame.. Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter.................... ...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!! 7...best bar, good closer, funny shit and nice concept. OVERALL: 19/30 Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name* His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame 5...weak, not the best wordplay attempt, punch on his name wasnt original either. Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more** Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard 5...again played, keyboard lines are just gay as fuck. Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes*** He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies 6...finally a worthy punch, ok concept, ok delivery, cud be better. overall....daubs came way more consistent with decent punches, sabotage only had like one that stood out, that is what made me choose daubs as the winner, he had better vocabs, wordplay was kinda even considering none was really there, both need to elevate still. one a lot more than the other. V/ - Daubs RTF!!! Battle Link in my sig. thnx. |
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