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way cool will vs SmotMan
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Ass Grabbing aight, these r 2 mafuckaz i know n i told em 2 come battle here, lmmfao, this should b good, rofl WERD Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-22-05 at 10:49 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
SmotMan has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 10:50 PM.
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way cool will has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 11:10 PM.
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My first attempt at a battle against my friend, werd.
This my first battle, and no I ain’t no KOOL COL-B, but li’l Will M. ain’t shit to me I’ma throw it down quick, I’ma make his shit sick, slice off his balls and cut off his dick So here the shit goes, please hold ya nose, ‘cause I’m gon’ raise quite the stink, Make him so uncool you gon’ think that fool is a muthapukkin’ cockfag-dink He’s the douche-born son of a coupla’ skanks, they were chuggin’ the beer and sniffin’ the crank They made sweet incest love and when they were done, nine months later out popped William This might leave a bruise, but he’s fit to lose, he ain’t got nothin’ on me, so let it be known, he’s about to be ovathrown, ‘cause I’m the shit like KOOL COL-B Now don’t go thinkin’ that I’m being a dirty suck-up, ‘cause that position is held by mista William James McFuck-up My name’s the Smot, and y’all know my crew, so when it comes to gankin’ there ain’t nothing we don’t do We rob the rich and piss on the poor, and if you fuck with us we gon' knock on yo’ door You’ll meet my gat and his friends too, and trust me when I say they gon’ go right through I told you I’m the shit, I pinned his ass to the wall, but I’s dun with this bitch, I’m outties, ya’ll. |
They call him anal alex cuz hes tha biggest fag ull ever meet
He likes gettin wacked off with fat chick’s feet. Alex likes his men nice and strong, So they can butt fuck like donkeykong. His tiny dick makes them chicks laugh and stare The only action he’ll ever get is playing with his pubic hair. Alex likes cock, he’ll even suck it for free If he had tha chance he’d prolly suck off KOOL COL-B. Run if you hear him pass Because in a second he’ll have your pants down and be fucking yo ass. Smotman cant handle this bitch, He can suck my balls and eat my shit. werd |
They call him anal alex cuz hes tha biggest fag ull ever meet
He likes gettin wacked off with fat chick’s feet. Alex likes his men nice and strong, So they can butt fuck like donkeykong. His tiny dick makes them chicks laugh and stare The only action he’ll ever get is playing with his pubic hair. Alex likes cock, he’ll even suck it for free If he had tha chance he’d prolly suck off KOOL COL-B. Run if you hear him pass Because in a second he’ll have your pants down and be fucking yo ass. Smotman cant handle this bitch, He can suck my balls and eat my shit |
Voted For: SmotMan
vote : Smotman .. not really any wordplay in either.. punchlines were basically all gay jokes.. smotman had better ones i guess.. overall not bad for either of your first battles but i gotta go for smotman |
This was feedback posted for way cool will
i gotta do this 2 c ppls votes n shit, .......werd
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Voted For: SmotMan
ummm wow.....very hot battle!!!! smot- eh work on everything...work on some punches get better flow and....structure... way cool will- wow......same thing work on everything but i think smot took this he just ahd a better verse |
This was feedback posted for SmotMan
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!?
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!? WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!? ^^ at both of you |
This was feedback posted for SmotMan
i vote for no one, leave feed for Smot but vomit on all of you......too lazy to vote but i wanna know who you are
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lol, i say next year we battle them wen they come 2 our skool :cool: werd |
Voted For: SmotMan
yo this is M.D.T / T-Spoon i voted for alex cuz i want to see him battle Kool Col-b, but i liked Will's better. soooooooo alex, hows them Herpes? and i got nothin else to say but i need to get 500 chars so .................................................. ............................ .................................................. ............................... .................................................. ................................ .................................................. ............................. |
Who is this? Adam?
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who? me
adams "fitzgerald" i'm Mac Daddy T, you know who i am |
Voted For: SmotMan
This my first battle, and no I ain’t no KOOL COL-B, but li’l Will M. ain’t shit to me I’ma throw it down quick, I’ma make his shit sick, slice off his balls and cut off his dick ^^nice flow....but where's the punch?? So here the shit goes, please hold ya nose, ‘cause I’m gon’ raise quite the stink, Make him so uncool you gon’ think that fool is a muthapukkin’ cockfag-dink ^^"Make him uncool???,cock-fag dink??"...what the hell He’s the douche-born son of a coupla’ skanks, they were chuggin’ the beer and sniffin’ the crank They made sweet incest love and when they were done, nine months later out popped William ^^^what the hell.....throw a punchline This might leave a bruise, but he’s fit to lose, he ain’t got nothin’ on me, so let it be known, he’s about to be ovathrown, ‘cause I’m the shit like KOOL COL-B ^^suks I ain't gon bother breakin it down anymore.Your shit was shack.Flow was excellent.....but u had zero punchlines.Structure ur verses better....it was fuckin ugly. and it just made it harder to read. They call him anal alex cuz hes tha biggest fag ull ever meet He likes gettin wacked off with fat chick’s feet. ^^Flow suked....wat wrong wit the name alex? Alex likes his men nice and strong, So they can butt fuck like donkeykong. ^^wat buttfuick is there in DK? His tiny dick makes them chicks laugh and stare The only action he’ll ever get is playing with his pubic hair. ^^how is it action when it's pubic hair? Alex likes cock, he’ll even suck it for free If he had tha chance he’d prolly suck off KOOL COL-B. ^^My godness............. Run if you hear him pass Because in a second he’ll have your pants down and be fucking yo ass. ^^1st line so short...2nd. so long Smotman cant handle this bitch, He can suck my balls and eat my shit ^^shut up After readin the other guy;s verse.....I knew,for you to lose.....you had to post some garbage.And you suceeded.Ur shit was the worst verse I seen.U wanna know wat wrong wit it?....read it. Vote-Smotman(vote in link below or vote dq'd) http://community.rapverse.com/showb...97&page=2&pp=15 |
Voted For: way cool will
Tiziano Ferro.......................................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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took tha werds right outta my mouth, uppin, werd |
Voted For: SmotMan
lend a hand.............................................. ............ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SmotMan
weak.............................................. ......... |
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