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Forgive Me
Pretty deep shit here...Hook me up with some feed I recorded it about a year ago, but its still pretty nice.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...tionz_music.htm Top track :thumbup: |
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im feelin the woman in the background...the beat is definitely dope....
your flow is nice over this..its kinda different in a couple parts...but i like it.... lyrically its nice... delivery is good lol... damn man...i dont know what to tell u is wrong with this song...its a good ass song...i like it a lot...damn good song man... |
Thanx for the feed uppin this shit!!!!!!
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Samples...nice.....
flow- was ok, couldnt understand some of ya words, but quality was iffy as every1 in the cyber world, emotions felt, send me this beat ama merk it. 2nd verse was much betta.....but u got unique style when u flow is like rza kinda shit ...but overall decent track. *send me this beat* |
is this a beat you made? this is pretty cool... this aint recorded a year ago lol, this sounds new , ya flow is better than ever... overdubs are off a lil... but you got a good voice... damn i'm feelin this... chorus is cool...deep shit f'sho... 2nd verse is ill.. damn this kid might be the most under rated kid on here... yea chorus is def a strong point... i'd go mad if i didnt have my notepad.. lol good shyt... flow falls off a lil bit towards the end of this verse n u start to sound a lil like eminem lol... quality could be a lil better.. but i was feelin this yeaaaaa! holler at me if u need a kid to kill a mic with :thumbup:
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Yes, Omen I made this beat...Took me about 2 fucking days!! LOL...And yes, it was recorded last summer...Good looks on the feed from you guys...DV, get at me on aim at rapdemon and I'll send you the track...Omen, we should collab sometime :)
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^^Also learn how to give feed back..lol and on aim u are not on
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whats your aim????
Uppin this shit |
.Omen, we should collab sometime
__________________ that beat is sick.... you're beat makin skills are def improving... holler at me with a beat to jump on whenever, i'm tryin to fucks with a whole rack of heads.. i just got my new mic, quality is hella good now, so ima just try n get my shit out there for a difference audience to hear, gain some fans, everytime ppl collab the mc's gain eachothers fans if they feel 'em so... lets get it crackin n build our fanbases lol... |
i don't think u did the beat, i've heard it before, i think i heard it on mesta (mestabish) soundclick. if i'm wrong, then i apologize, but i definately heard the sample before at least. anyway, the track's pretty good, flow's on point most of it. Lyrics were good, too, can't complain, nice job.
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The beat is dope, that sample is nice...the hook is coo, lyrics are fine...stayed on topic...voice sound coo, quality isn't bad...sometimes ur flow seems off, you start slow then it seems like you try to rush in a few words to fit the beat...but none of that stands out as a huge downfall, so overall its a hot drop...keep spittin it
...I got one up "Round Of Applause..."...return the favor |
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Im sure that the sample has been flipped before, but I did this track. Good looks on the feed everyone, and favors will be returned in the morning. Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof!!! |
ok, my bad, then
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no doubt its all good
uppity uppin |
yo whatup, nice shyt right here, da girl in da background sorta gets annoyin tho
nice hook no doubt, spittin it good to holla back |
this beat is raw..........unlike most cats on Rv u have a dope hook, im feelin da content, lyrically this aight, ur flow slips a lil bit and in places i cnt quite hear what ur sayin, quality is good 4 RV,im feelin this track, nice 1 bre :thumbup: keep em coming
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Good looks man...Get on aim! I got that beat for you man!
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im really liking the woman in the background...
the beat is dope as fuck man.... your flow is pretty damn good over this.. delivery is really good nothin wrong with this song man... keep it up |
Good looks bro...Thanx for the feed...Uppin this shit
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yo i was feeling ya joint fam.....had me noddin my head - stay up and be easy aight
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Word bro good looks
Uppin |
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this is pretty dope man,,, i like the beat but not the girl singing....mmm watch for your flow...i really love the chorus...its really really dope...nice emotion man...really nice quality...your best seriously...just watch ur flow
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lol i like the Pink Floyd sampling...but it gets a lil distracting and annoying but the rest is deep and the flow is dope...especially the hook....i hear everythang u sayin...the message is the #1 thang that matters the rest come after...this shit was defitnly dope...8/10..keep this type of shit comin
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Good looks you two thanx for the feed
Uppin this shit |
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sorry for doin it teice my computer's bein a fuckin gay ass homo
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I'll peep them fam
Uppin |
uppin thru the fuckin roof
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uppin this shit
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lets see y u vget so many dickriders.... ur intro doesnt sound natural too aggro for da vibe..... beats nice... finally sum1 dat vgots a clue on wat dey doin..... emotion is nice... delivery is nice for most part... ur flow is nice does slip a few times like speeds up n sounds awkward n forced.... mhook is iite... lyrics are cool..... not bad man keep it up
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I didnt know I had dickriders...........
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Stop being so subliminal, I have no clue what your trying to say lol, the beats ill though, you force your multies, you gotta learn to only use common phrase multies, if it hasn't been said in a normal sentence before DO NOT SAY IT, cus the thing is when you can't find a multi for it you seem to just say fuck it and not even rhyme lol it's kinda funny though. The chorus is hype, I don't know about saying it's a deep song...it's a song on the defense. Good shit though.....for underground music.
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I dont force my shit man, you obviously werent listening to the music...
Whatever, thanx for the honesty I guess |
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