View My Vission Part 1
 

deception lingers dont fall into there trap
pay attention to this revelation we gota re-act/
to these politcians cause they wont listen
so its my mission decison to see a calmer condition/
of this world wich is in a position of division
we all sepreate we cant subside or divide/
we need to come together, Amercia unite
bring back the respect to the stars and stripes/
rebel against the fuckin president
right now fight now dont be hesitant/
cause at any moment there could be a draft
then ya could be there with an AK in iraq/
diein for a pointless for his greed
bush face the heat girt ya teeth/
be a man and apolige to the people
cause ya whole campigan was dectiful/
ya full of lies you must die your resbonsible
it at all posible stop the war no more/
bull shit reason its treason so can ya think
what’ll happen when the draft papers is inked/

uppin for my dawg...

uppin thanks for the feed back man keep it comeing..........

yeah this was cool only because there was so much truth in it.......

...although some of ur lines were uneven in places i sitll liked it.......i would give it a 7



RTF in my sig

thanks for the feec back man.....ill RTF tomorow im tired and i dont wanna give u some basic feed back...

its cool dont trip.................

Nice shyt i feel ya homie!Keep it up!)Overall 7/10(

thanks for the feedback...uppin...................

concepts played! Everybody has approached this concept at the same angle
i.e An angry citizen tryna start a revolution,pssh..try being more creative
On the other hand, ya flow was decent, had few nice mutli's and lyrics.
5/10..played concept..i seen that bout 100+ times...sorry

bitch fuck u...u fuckin newb battle me u punk...im gonna get at J.terror u fuckin with a vet u god damn newb bye bitch bye

Tuttankamon.........

whar the fuck does that mean...

uppin..........................................

uppin.............................................

come on people stop fuckin sleepin...start typin some feed

wow @ ole boy hatin on a pretty decent piece....this was nice man i felt it even tho i have seen some peeps speak upon this...but the flow was nice....could have used betta wordplay but this was most def a nice piece...7/10

iight this drop was decent not too bad some nice multi's aswell as it being a pretty deep drop it was also truthful at parts...although some of ur lines r a lil choppy or shud i say messed up and need some fixin but othe then that nice shit kid...keep the ink spillin..

The drop was nice all i gotta say. Truth and deepness. Really feelin ya work homie. I had a lil somethin somethin like this. I mite drop it in a week or so not to interupt this flow. Plus i gotta go find it i think its ontop of my dusty Entertainment center. anyways keep doin ya thang homie