RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   §ick§eed vs o_0 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195992)

§ick§eed 06-20-05 11:59 AM

§ick§eed vs o_0
 
Battle Rules:

4 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding


i might get caught up so check in 2 hrs...

Minimum posts to vote: 70

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 01:59 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 06-20-05 12:16 PM

o_0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 12:16 PM.

o_0 06-20-05 12:36 PM

Do not post your verse here. You must use the form in the first post

o_0 06-20-05 12:37 PM

u a voluntary "father figure" but you only "sonning orphans"/
and ur "punches" are about as "strait" as disses from "graham norton"//
SICK SEEDS only ever "cumin hard" when his "DICK BLEEDS"/
watch me leave u "speechless" and leave RV having to LIP READ//
"sick seed" explains it, im soo "heavy" ill "stunt ur growth"/
ill leave this PUSSY "brown bread", id say i served a CUNT on "toast"//
ill DISECT ur boy Parts so i can say sickseed hip hops/
but like "battlin" with "sandals" every diss u flip flops//

System 06-20-05 12:44 PM

§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 12:44 PM.

§ick§eed 06-20-05 01:06 PM

aiite kid...i ain feelin it so imma jus drop whateva

o_0 goddamn u spit wack, like "garbage feces"......all ya "shits trash"
this shits like a womens sumo wrestlin battle...a huge "miss-match"!
our skill levels are like our fingerprints...they jus dont seem to match
ya attitudes like "puppet contests", cant win without strings attatched
nigga ur a fuckin disgrace, like ya moms...u gettin fucked in da face
you "sliced tha wrists of CHEVY" and still couldnt cut to tha "CHASE"! (chevy chase)
jus take this loss, but it'll "rub you tha wrong way" like thongs on clits
psychic....i can see u "dont wanna come" like when a condom splits


dont feel like explainin...vote

13th. 06-20-05 01:46 PM

Voted For: §ick§eed

u a voluntary "father figure" but you only "sonning orphans"/
and ur "punches" are about as "strait" as disses from "graham norton"//
LOL NICE
SICK SEEDS only ever "cumin hard" when his "DICK BLEEDS"/
watch me leave u "speechless" and leave RV having to LIP READ//
OK....
"sick seed" explains it, im soo "heavy" ill "stunt ur growth"/
ill leave this PUSSY "brown bread", id say i served a CUNT on "toast"//
SO-SO
ill DISECT ur boy Parts so i can say sickseed hip hops/
but like "battlin" with "sandals" every diss u flip flops//
AIGHT...
=6/10 A NICE VERSE WITH A LOT OF GOOD CONCEPTS!!!!!

VS

o_0 goddamn u spit wack, like "garbage feces"......all ya "shits trash"
this shits like a womens sumo wrestlin battle...a huge "miss-match"!
LOL.....
our skill levels are like our fingerprints...they jus dont seem to match
ya attitudes like "puppet contests", cant win without strings attatched
NICE...
nigga ur a fuckin disgrace, like ya moms...u gettin fucked in da face
you "sliced tha wrists of CHEVY" and still couldnt cut to tha "CHASE"! (chevy chase)
OK....
jus take this loss, but it'll "rub you tha wrong way" like thongs on clits
psychic....i can see u "dont wanna come" like when a condom splits
NICE....
=6.5/10 A BETTER VERSE THAN U HAVE DONE...NICE CONCEPTS!!!!!

V/SICKSEED FOR HAVING A BETTER VERSE

M.er.C 06-20-05 01:48 PM

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 
this battle was tight as shit...ill vote soon

§ick§eed 06-20-05 01:50 PM

yeh good lookin on tha vote.......uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

o_0 06-20-05 02:09 PM

nice verse sick..we shud battle agen..i neva knew u were gna cum hard man..thought u were newb lol

§ick§eed 06-20-05 02:16 PM

i aint come hard either jus throw somethin togetha so yeh we can battle again after this

§ick§eed 06-21-05 09:44 AM

Upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

MyNamesGrafhYall 06-23-05 07:13 PM

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 
Bumpin diz battle 4 da homey sickseed!! u got diz dawg, itz EZ..

§ick§eed 06-23-05 09:50 PM

yeh i hear u khaoz lol uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

§ick§eed 06-26-05 12:05 AM

chief i know u aint mean ta vote lol uppinnnnnnnnn

K-Trini 06-26-05 12:36 PM

Voted For: §ick§eed

u a voluntary "father figure" but you only "sonning orphans"/
and ur "punches" are about as "strait" as disses from "graham norton"//
^^OK
SICK SEEDS only ever "cumin hard" when his "DICK BLEEDS"/
watch me leave u "speechless" and leave RV having to LIP READ//
^^2nd line good,but 1st played and unoriginal
"sick seed" explains it, im soo "heavy" ill "stunt ur growth"/
ill leave this PUSSY "brown bread", id say i served a CUNT on "toast"//
^^^nah...dun like it
ill DISECT ur boy Parts so i can say sickseed hip hops/
but like "battlin" with "sandals" every diss u flip flops//
^^Nice

Okay verse.One played out bar and one unoriginal line.Best line was the last one.Decent werdplay and metas.DEcent verse.

o_0 goddamn u spit wack, like "garbage feces"......all ya "shits trash"
this shits like a womens sumo wrestlin battle...a huge "miss-match"!
^^weak.....uncreative
our skill levels are like our fingerprints...they jus dont seem to match
ya attitudes like "puppet contests", cant win without strings attatched
^^ILL
nigga ur a fuckin disgrace, like ya moms...u gettin fucked in da face
you "sliced tha wrists of CHEVY" and still couldnt cut to tha "CHASE"! (chevy chase)
^^1st line suked...but 2nd was dope
jus take this loss, but it'll "rub you tha wrong way" like thongs on clits
psychic....i can see u "dont wanna come" like when a condom splits
^^Nice

Some ill punchlines in this.Some played shit like fuckiin mom and condom shit.But still good.That 1st bar was ur worst because of it's unoriginality.U had 2 il lines which was the fingerprints/puppet and the chevy chase.

Vote-SickSeed(Vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531

§ick§eed 06-26-05 03:28 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

§ick§eed 06-28-05 08:08 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Dirty Nigga 07-06-05 09:54 AM

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 
Polls......

you got this fam, EZ.....

Servin....its nothin....uppin this..

~Conflict~ 07-13-05 05:24 PM

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 
nice linez i like i but i cant vote yet

Willa 07-16-05 11:57 PM

Voted For: §ick§eed

u didnt ahve any personals really but ur vocab was better and so is ur structure its no contest in my opinion u took it easile work on ur vocab and metaphores though
o id k waht that was but u had no good punches so work on itand ur vocab and everything u lacked in all aspects elevate b4 u battle again

§ick§eed 09-02-05 11:53 AM

ayo bump this shit...............................

§ick§eed 09-02-05 06:37 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

§ick§eed 09-10-05 04:51 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn this shits OLD as fuck damn

Shazz 09-10-05 05:38 PM

Voted For: §ick§eed

o_O –
Same with you , you had @#(&$@(*#^$(*@#^$(*^@# didn’t shine….. Your flow sucked dick… No offense I don’t know either of you. Wordplay sucked… Punches were alright.. seemed like they were played but… Overall I think my sister could write this… that means ill look forward in your next battle….


Sickseed-
WTF is with all the #$&@#(*)$^(@#^$()@#^$ cause damn it sure ain’t shining….. I didn’t really like your wordplay too much your flow was alright… Nothing too special. You got a good opener especially for going first. Overall you could have done better but you did ok enough to win it.

v/sickseed

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=207681

Lay-z 09-12-05 08:22 PM

Voted For: §ick§eed

Wordness, dope verse man,
Good battle for both but,

you had better vocab, punches, flow, metas, overall just way better than the other guy, very nice man,

V/Sickseed


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:59 PM.